FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 32

Amazing, Raghav Rao finally meets Pallavi Deshmukh 👏

My Sunday is complete with your update ❤️

Can't wait for the next one

Nice chapter.. you know i was just thinking that Pallavi shud record the next time the landlord made such lewd comments.. he’s clearly taking advantage of their condition especially knowing that Pallavi is keeping the real situation under wraps..

I felt bad abt the talk between mother n son..for both of them. It was sad. But I cant judge them just yet.

I wonder how the meeting between our leads are gonna go. Being Kirti’s employer, Raghav would be forced to maintain his calm n be civil.

Wow! So all the three meetings between Raghav & Pallavi have been 🔥. The way you described the fall & save was FANTASTIC!!!

So, Raghav will help Pallavi's shop in lieu of helping his sister😲. That was a good way of establishing history, that he got separated at 20 & as mentioned before is 35 now.

The story though might not be moving fast on the whole, but the way you take time & words to describe each scene is COMMENDABLE 👏. That alone feels as if we're right there in the scene whilst it's taking place.

Woah! The last few episodes have been great!

Amma and Keerti being pivotal is wonderful in this plot, and I love how Keerti and Pallavi's joint venture can really go far 😳

Love Anna's protectiveness for his Gorilla aka Harish 😆

So Raghav is not gonna talk to her about Harish, which is nice I guess.

Anjali is also under purview and he seems to be doing an apt investigation so glad on that!

They finally meet, and how? 😲😆

Raghav has a keen eye, must say, he recognised her immediately just like she did.

Please update soonish! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Why am I blushing. ☺️

he caught her before she can fall ye Raghav Rao ka style h 😎

Thoroughly enjoyed the amma beta convo!! I'm glad she strictly told him to not interfere and it kind of made me sad too when he said he was the same age when she threw him out, poor Raghav 😭

The way the made her Harish go back 🤣

And at last the role play 🤣🤣 can't wait to see Pallavi's reaction

Thank you, Sister. I love those achingly long scenes of heroine swooning into hero's arms. They are so potent on screen when there is beautiful actors and background music---whereas, to make them anything but trite is difficult in text. hehe

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Amazing, Raghav Rao finally meets Pallavi Deshmukh 👏

My Sunday is complete with your update ❤️

Can't wait for the next one

Yes--finally they meet. I've been looking forward to writing this episode for a week!

Originally posted by: mayabhi

Nice chapter.. you know i was just thinking that Pallavi shud record the next time the landlord made such lewd comments.. he’s clearly taking advantage of their condition especially knowing that Pallavi is keeping the real situation under wraps..

I felt bad abt the talk between mother n son..for both of them. It was sad. But I cant judge them just yet.

I wonder how the meeting between our leads are gonna go. Being Kirti’s employer, Raghav would be forced to maintain his calm n be civil.

Thank you, Sister. Pleased you enjoyed the episode.

You are right---Pallavi keeping all these secrets from Aayi&Baba (Mandhar's truth, financial problems etc) means that anyone who knows any of those secrets has her at his/her mercy. Landlord. Sulochana . . .

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow! So all the three meetings between Raghav & Pallavi have been 🔥. The way you described the fall & save was FANTASTIC!!!

So, Raghav will help Pallavi's shop in lieu of helping his sister😲. That was a good way of establishing history, that he got separated at 20 & as mentioned before is 35 now.

The story though might not be moving fast on the whole, but the way you take time & words to describe each scene is COMMENDABLE 👏. That alone feels as if we're right there in the scene whilst it's taking place.

I'm glad you are enjoying the tale, Sister. And pleased that the pace is not too frustrating. I know---I am a lover of details---so my tales will always be long and meandering. When my family/friends are telling me something that happened to them, I am forever interrupting them to demand details that they are skipping out for brevity's sake. hehe

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Woah! The last few episodes have been great!

Amma and Keerti being pivotal is wonderful in this plot, and I love how Keerti and Pallavi's joint venture can really go far 😳

Love Anna's protectiveness for his Gorilla aka Harish 😆

So Raghav is not gonna talk to her about Harish, which is nice I guess.

Anjali is also under purview and he seems to be doing an apt investigation so glad on that!

They finally meet, and how? 😲😆

Raghav has a keen eye, must say, he recognised her immediately just like she did.

Please update soonish! 👍🏼

Thank you for your comments, Sister. I'm pleased you are enjoying the tale.

When I was plotting PALLAVI I was considering which characters I can remove so it doesn't become overwhelming. Too many minor characters can detract from a written work. I considered skipping Harish the Gorilla but I'm glad I didn't because he provides comic relief.

I like this Raghav canny, smart and very wicked with words especially the last line

Waiting to see how pallu responds to this