Chronicles of Ahlawat House (Collection of write-ups) pg1,2,4,6,7 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Random alternate theory I posted in last EDT

if you ask me … I would say let Meet H believe that Meet Ahlawat fell in love with Manjari …

so much that once she gets her child she wants to move out and away from Ahlawats …

and the only way to do that is to reveal to Rajvardhan that she is Manjari and not Meet H … rest Rajvardhan will do … since he is all well… he is shocked to hear that and immediately calls off their wedding… and asks her to leave…. Meet Ahlawat may have no say in this… and Masoom being scared of Meet H dare not open her tongue waise b this is what she anyways wanted … Meet H going away so she played along happily…. Meet H chose not to expose Manushi and Masoom because she wants to go away with her child … although she very much wanted Manushi to get jailed but thinking of Anubha and Daadi she spared her …. so now all free from Ahlawats and got her son back too .., she takes that transfer which was proposed to her before pregnancy (ab wo wapas se police job pr kaise ayi ye mt puchna … may be she kept the contact and took a long sabbatical… smiley17) and starts a new life along with her son…

ab Meet Ahlawat iske bad kya krta h? kyu krta h? Manushi and Masoom Meet Ahlawat ko kuch btate h ya ni … when will he gets to know about his son…. ye sb maine ni socha … pr that could be next track….

to maine iske aage ka 1 or scene soch lia … when Manjari leaves Ahlawat house without any fuss … and Meet Ahlawat was anyways hell bent to expose her real identity… so he sent PI hoshiyar behind her …and this time for once Hoshiyar does his work properly and put a tracker on her somehow… mostly using popat fai… so Long story short Meet Ahlawat traces her at railway station when she is leaving… and trying to say goodbye to popat fai but she is adamant to be at her side and help her raising chhotu Meet … Meet Ahlawat was watching them from afar … and suddenly police personnel comes with her transfer confirmation, ticket and location details … he was like I knew it … tum whi dhokebaaz ho … fir se dhoka dekr ja ri ho pr mere sawalo ka jawaab diye bina jane ni dunga mai … saying this he starts to go towards her just then Popat fai asks Meet H that where is chhotu Meet … and then he gets first glimpse of his child … he is shocked … confused and frozen at spot … thinking who is this kid? from where does he come? why is he being called chhotu Meet …. and then he saw Meet H smiling so lovingly at him … showing him to popat fai with great proud who put black spot to wade away evil spirits … gushing over his cute antics … he is confused and doesn’t know what to believe and then he heard their conversation when Meet H mentions that how will she ever make up for the lost time with her son and popat fai replies … you were separated from your child for an year … and fought so hard for him to get him back …sacrificed a great deal to keep him safe … you are a strong mother and I am sure your son will adore you and won’t blame you for all that happened….

This is the final straw .. now Meet Ahlawat can think no more … he doesn’t know how to react … ideally he should run to her and his kid … but what’s all that is happening… what happened an year ago … why Meet H sent that video … what sacrifices were Popat fai talking about? why he has been told that their son died … when he is alive …if Meet H took him then why was even she separated from him for an year ? this is too much for him to take and he lost his consciousness only to be caught in time by Babita or Hoshiyar.. (not decided whom but whoever that person is has not seen Meet H or the kid … ) … and since Meet Ahlawat wasn’t able to react in time .. they boarded the train and left for their destination ….

mai pta ni kyu likh ri hu ye kahaani … but this is something I am interested in …. smiley17 tum logo ko kuch padhna ta na to ye padh lo …smiley37

PS : maine abhi decide ni kia h k Meet Ahlawat ko hosh ane pr wo kaise react krega… will he be angry at her? or will he search frantically for her? or will he try to find out the truth first so that he knows all the fact before confronting her …

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Another random scene posted in last EDT

you know I thought they may have a scene where someone or may be Sunaina nurses a Ram-Lakhan who got injured while playing on ground (I really wanted a better child example… but Masoom se ye expect kr ni skte to ye hi option h hmare pas) .., and Isha, Manjari and Meet walks in .. Isha saying bhabhi aap Ram-Lakhan ko kekr kuch jyada hi stress lete ho …bachche h bachcho ko khelte hue thoda to lgta hi h … and Sunaina gives her some long speech smiley29 and end it with “tum abhi ni smjogi jb maa bnogi na tb smj ayega” …

Meet and Manjari are observing them from afar …Meet standing behind Manjari ….Meet who understands the sensitivity of the subject.. wants to comfort Manjari aka Meet H with no hidden intentions.., as he raises his hand to put on her shoulder.. she leaves abruptly without turning or noticing Meet Ahlawat… and he doesn’t follow her .., because he knows somewhere that it may have hit too close to the heart … and he is not that cruel as to not give her a moment to compose herself and in obsession to get her truth out disturbs her while she is weak and rightly so … I mean this shows the shared trauma of two individuals who lost their kid .. and grieving for him although for different reasons .. one thinks he died and another one knows he is out there somewhere with no idea how he is ?

but abhi tk us scene k nam pr 2 alag alag scene dikhaye h…when Meet A entered and saw the exchange between Hoshiyar and duggu…. and Meet H in market seeing that lost child …sath me 1 b scene ni aya h …

may be makers ne kuch socha ho… may be they thought it to be part of his outburst to her…that how she wasn’t there to comfort him when they lost their son… she may be strong but he wasn’t and she didn’t even think of him even once while leaving him … without any proper reason … (pta ni Babita ne kuch bola b h ya ni… waise babita ka koi role h ni pr ye Babita ko to ni pta na…)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

mere andr ka sanakipana jaaga to mai 1 conversation likhungi Manushi ki apne pyaar bhanje k sath … evil wali … 😈😈 👹👹👹

jisme wo usko uski maa ki stupidity k kisse sunayegi and will tell him how he is lucky to land up with her instead … fir uske sharabi baap … Chudail and pagal bua, bevakoof dada and cheekh pukar daadi k bare me btayegi … fir wo bachcha darr jayega …. 👹👹👹👹

fir wo usko bolegi agr he didn’t behave well to wo usko uske mummy papa ko lauta degi …fir bachcha or darr jayega or bolega .. “maasi ji aap jo bologe mai krunga bs mje us pagal khane me ni jaana … please ….mje meri maasi jaisa hot and famous bnna h …mje apni sharan me hi rkho please…. apko paisa chaiye … mere bevakoof maa-baap se yhi to virasat me mila h bht sara and dimag b … mai bada hokr ap ko khoob sare paise kama kr dunga …. but please wo Ahlawat pagalkhana ni …wo sasta nasha krne wale parents ni …. meri daanveer maa to mje b daan kr degi 1 na 1 din kisi na kisi k liye … kya pta next time dadaji ko heart chaiye to mera hi nikal kr de de … ya cheekhte hue dadi ki awaaz chli gyi to mere vocal chords … mere sharabi papa … unke liver k liye to mai hi candidate hu …. or meri chudail and pagal bua ko b kisi organ ki jarurat hui to mera hi nikal kr de degi … apke sath one piece me to rahunga… “ 🤣🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Organ trader gang ki yaad aa gayi in Duggu kidnap incident 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

is thread me koi contribute krega ya mai iska naam change kr du… Tej-Sunaina conversation likh kr …🤣

Tumhe chain nahi.... give time to others yaar 🤣 After that do the changes....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

yeah her reasons of going away was her child’s safety… plus she didn’t punish Manushi for sake of Anubha and Daadi … but she really wanted to save her child from Masoom…. if she can hit this low then this is a bottom less pit… and she anyways doesn’t want any property or anything…. and she priortize her child over Meet Ahlawat seeing the way he started mistrusting her on first chance he got … plus what he did in past is also something to consider .. he promises to trust her .. stand by her but does the opposite.. these were few reasons to go away … actually tb ache se likha ta … not sure kon se thread me hoga … but I was liking it … for me a couple should be together if there is mutual trust and understanding… and Meet Ahlawat is very impatient and doesn’t think things through…. acha hota when she goes away .. and he just gets to see her child for the first time on station and there was lot of things to take on … how? why? when? that’s why he fainted … mje agr wo posts mile .. I will tag you so you can read …

but yha show me wo bachche ko dhundhne se jyada Meet Ahlawat se shaadi krne me interested h … she doesn’t have motherly instinct I tell you …

writers ka kamaal hai ye .... maine likha her pov somewhere long back.... she wants to get back to him only after being able to give him their child back... that was the last thought she had when Babita left her in a miserable state.... but in turn she is hurting him tho iska logic bhul gaye writers .... and whatever happened to fighting it out and winning together .... all gone with Damini...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Anjureads

writers ka kamaal hai ye .... maine likha her pov somewhere long back.... she wants to get back to him only after being able to give him their child back... that was the last thought she had when Babita left her in a miserable state.... but in turn she is hurting him tho iska logic bhul gaye writers .... and whatever happened to fighting it out and winning together .... all gone with Damini...

ni lgta isko ye b pta h that jo Babita ne bola k wo dobara maa ni bn skti wo baat b jhoot h … she never tried to get to the bottom of the truth or rather the writer didn’t bother to make her use the large brain of hers…

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

is thread me koi contribute krega ya mai iska naam change kr du… Tej-Sunaina conversation likh kr …🤣

Mat karo yaar. Thoda dhiraj rakho.😂 Ab ideas v toh time lete hai aane mai. 😁😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

Random alternate theory I posted in last EDT

if you ask me … I would say let Meet H believe that Meet Ahlawat fell in love with Manjari …

so much that once she gets her child she wants to move out and away from Ahlawats …

and the only way to do that is to reveal to Rajvardhan that she is Manjari and not Meet H … rest Rajvardhan will do … since he is all well… he is shocked to hear that and immediately calls off their wedding… and asks her to leave…. Meet Ahlawat may have no say in this… and Masoom being scared of Meet H dare not open her tongue waise b this is what she anyways wanted … Meet H going away so she played along happily…. Meet H chose not to expose Manushi and Masoom because she wants to go away with her child … although she very much wanted Manushi to get jailed but thinking of Anubha and Daadi she spared her …. so now all free from Ahlawats and got her son back too .., she takes that transfer which was proposed to her before pregnancy (ab wo wapas se police job pr kaise ayi ye mt puchna … may be she kept the contact and took a long sabbatical… smiley17) and starts a new life along with her son…

ab Meet Ahlawat iske bad kya krta h? kyu krta h? Manushi and Masoom Meet Ahlawat ko kuch btate h ya ni … when will he gets to know about his son…. ye sb maine ni socha … pr that could be next track….

to maine iske aage ka 1 or scene soch lia … when Manjari leaves Ahlawat house without any fuss … and Meet Ahlawat was anyways hell bent to expose her real identity… so he sent PI hoshiyar behind her …and this time for once Hoshiyar does his work properly and put a tracker on her somehow… mostly using popat fai… so Long story short Meet Ahlawat traces her at railway station when she is leaving… and trying to say goodbye to popat fai but she is adamant to be at her side and help her raising chhotu Meet … Meet Ahlawat was watching them from afar … and suddenly police personnel comes with her transfer confirmation, ticket and location details … he was like I knew it … tum whi dhokebaaz ho … fir se dhoka dekr ja ri ho pr mere sawalo ka jawaab diye bina jane ni dunga mai … saying this he starts to go towards her just then Popat fai asks Meet H that where is chhotu Meet … and then he gets first glimpse of his child … he is shocked … confused and frozen at spot … thinking who is this kid? from where does he come? why is he being called chhotu Meet …. and then he saw Meet H smiling so lovingly at him … showing him to popat fai with great proud who put black spot to wade away evil spirits … gushing over his cute antics … he is confused and doesn’t know what to believe and then he heard their conversation when Meet H mentions that how will she ever make up for the lost time with her son and popat fai replies … you were separated from your child for an year … and fought so hard for him to get him back …sacrificed a great deal to keep him safe … you are a strong mother and I am sure your son will adore you and won’t blame you for all that happened….

This is the final straw .. now Meet Ahlawat can think no more … he doesn’t know how to react … ideally he should run to her and his kid … but what’s all that is happening… what happened an year ago … why Meet H sent that video … what sacrifices were Popat fai talking about? why he has been told that their son died … when he is alive …if Meet H took him then why was even she separated from him for an year ? this is too much for him to take and he lost his consciousness only to be caught in time by Babita or Hoshiyar.. (not decided whom but whoever that person is has not seen Meet H or the kid … ) … and since Meet Ahlawat wasn’t able to react in time .. they boarded the train and left for their destination ….

mai pta ni kyu likh ri hu ye kahaani … but this is something I am interested in …. smiley17 tum logo ko kuch padhna ta na to ye padh lo …smiley37

PS : maine abhi decide ni kia h k Meet Ahlawat ko hosh ane pr wo kaise react krega… will he be angry at her? or will he search frantically for her? or will he try to find out the truth first so that he knows all the fact before confronting her …

Yes I read this that time. Loved this track too.Uske baad kya decide Kiya wo v bata d na.

Edited by Physics_girl - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Physics_girl

Yes I read this that time. Loved this track too.Uske baad kya decide Kiya wo v bata d na.

arey pr maine btaya to kafi logo ko psnd ni aya ta ye plot .. to aage ni likha …

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Anjureads

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Organ trader gang ki yaad aa gayi in Duggu kidnap incident 🤣

ha wo bachcho k organs ka kuch ta na … but ye usse inspired ni h …

This is

“Bedtime story for Chhotu Meet by Manushi Maasi …👹”

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