Chronicles of Ahlawat House (Collection of write-ups) pg1,2,4,6,7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

mje attract ni kia bilkul b … I also tried when I saw FL fighting with goons .. but honestly wo jo fake hawa me jump maar maar kr lad ri ti I was like isse acha to Imlie dekh lu .. uski FL ka air me cart wheel b real lgta h kyuki real hota h … 🤣😛

I liked the leads acting in their previous shows. Isliye I tried but didn't like it that much. Bohot saare negative and heartless characters hai waha. That is the reason I didn't like it. Gap k baad I looked one precap and that pissed me off even more so not anymore.

Originally posted by: Physics_girl

I liked the leads acting in their previous shows. Isliye I tried but didn't like it that much. Bohot saare negative and heartless characters hai waha. That is the reason I didn't like it. Gap k baad I looked one precap and that pissed me off even more so not anymore.

us show ki story me koi uniqueness ni h …

mentally imbalanced and his protector wife bht time se ITV me h … or ye sub plot ki trah kai shows me ab b dikha dete h .. like abhi recently Fannaa ishq me marjawan me b dikhaya ta .. so not a new thing …

and for me nothing can beat “koshish ek asha… and Banoo mai teri dulhan” for this concept … old is gold …

is thread me koi contribute krega ya mai iska naam change kr du… Tej-Sunaina conversation likh kr …🤣

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

is thread me koi contribute krega ya mai iska naam change kr du… Tej-Sunaina conversation likh kr …🤣

I am reading 😊 that’s my ability..writing is way out of my league 🙈

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

I am reading 😊 that’s my ability..writing is way out of my league 🙈

I guess no one is gonna contribute… I will rename it tomorrow… by the way have you read my latest Sanak in this thread?

I wrote synopsis of

“Bed time story for Chhotu Meet by Manushi Maasi” ….👹👹👹🤣🤣 do read that … 👺👺👹👹

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

I guess no one is gonna contribute… I will rename it tomorrow… by the way have you read my latest Sanak in this thread?

I wrote synopsis of

“Bed time story for Chhotu Meet by Manushi Maasi” ….👹👹👹🤣🤣 do read that … 👺👺👹👹

i read that 😂😂😂 only you can come up with something like that 🤩

do us all a favour and please make meet 2 sensible in an OS and give us closure..

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

i read that 😂😂😂 only you can come up with something like that 🤩

do us all a favour and please make meet 2 sensible in an OS and give us closure..

arey maime likhna shuru kia ta .. basic plot without dialogues but Jiggy ko psnd ni aya kyuki usme maine Meet H ko bacchha retrieve krne k bad door bhej dia ta … and Meet Ahlawat basically saw them leaving the city at train station… uske bad he fainted .. uske hosh me ane k bad wo kya krta kya ni … wo ni likha because nobody liked that plot line…. 😛

pr ye upar jo synopsis likhe h ye mje bada interest kr re h … although mai show ni dekhungi lekin agr galti se dekha or frustrate hui to full fledged Bed time story likhungi Manushi style …👹

Originally posted by: Jugnu21

arey maime likhna shuru kia ta .. basic plot without dialogues but Jiggy ko psnd ni aya kyuki usme maine Meet H ko bacchha retrieve krne k bad door bhej dia ta … and Meet Ahlawat basically saw them leaving the city at train station… uske bad he fainted .. uske hosh me ane k bad wo kya krta kya ni … wo ni likha because nobody liked that plot line…. 😛

pr ye upar jo synopsis likhe h ye mje bada interest kr re h … although mai show ni dekhungi lekin agr galti se dekha or frustrate hui to full fledged Bed time story likhungi Manushi style …👹

This plot sounds good..make him wake up and go after her..for a change really tries to get her back and for that puts in effort..but this has to be WITHOUT and family emotional drama..not for family but he has to try to bring her back for himself and she puts a condition to live away from family as she wants to give the best life to the child without the selfish family..

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

This plot sounds good..make him wake up and go after her..for a change really tries to get her back and for that puts in effort..but this has to be WITHOUT and family emotional drama..not for family but he has to try to bring her back for himself and she puts a condition to live away from family as she wants to give the best life to the child without the selfish family..

yeah her reasons of going away was her child’s safety… plus she didn’t punish Manushi for sake of Anubha and Daadi … but she really wanted to save her child from Masoom…. if she can hit this low then this is a bottom less pit… and she anyways doesn’t want any property or anything…. and she priortize her child over Meet Ahlawat seeing the way he started mistrusting her on first chance he got … plus what he did in past is also something to consider .. he promises to trust her .. stand by her but does the opposite.. these were few reasons to go away … actually tb ache se likha ta … not sure kon se thread me hoga … but I was liking it … for me a couple should be together if there is mutual trust and understanding… and Meet Ahlawat is very impatient and doesn’t think things through…. acha hota when she goes away .. and he just gets to see her child for the first time on station and there was lot of things to take on … how? why? when? that’s why he fainted … mje agr wo posts mile .. I will tag you so you can read …

but yha show me wo bachche ko dhundhne se jyada Meet Ahlawat se shaadi krne me interested h … she doesn’t have motherly instinct I tell you …

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

This plot sounds good..make him wake up and go after her..for a change really tries to get her back and for that puts in effort..but this has to be WITHOUT and family emotional drama..not for family but he has to try to bring her back for himself and she puts a condition to live away from family as she wants to give the best life to the child without the selfish family..

I just found out you already read that … I will still post it here though …