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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: MissOverthinker


Uff yaar I’m also carving some good romantic or manao Fanfictions. I’m actually not good with writing details of such moments I tried. 🥺


Daily aati hoon in the hopes of find some new OS/SS/FF but itni kam hoti hai. 😔




Same.. Koi writers ko kheech ke laao dusre forums se.. 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey dear, You should have continued...You wrote it so well...! Lovely piece of writing👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is wonderful dear… lets tag others too..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MissOverthinker

This is just a random thought I had so this is a quick OS about the morning in the Garden.


The Morning After


Meet A and Meet H are sleeping peacefully in the garden, when Meet H wakes up she has flashback of whatever happened last night while looking at her husband sleeping next to her. She is disheartened by the events that unfolded last night; from him thinking she’s Manushi Di, to her makeover as Manushi Di to get him back to his senses for his meeting, to him scolding her really badly for dressing up like Manushi. She didn’t know when she fell a sleep or when he came here. She got up to leave before he woke up avoiding any confrontation.


As soon as she got up to leave he held her hand which forced her back to her position. They’re was something about his eye which she kept looking at but she was quick to look away. Where as Meet A was still looking at her continuously, she was trying to free her hand from his grip when she said

Tujhe manay asay pakrnay ki koi zaroorat na hai, ab tera nasha utar chuka ab tujhai pata hai k main Manushi di nahi hoon sirf Meet hoon”


He lets go of her hand hearing the hurt in her voice. She left instantly and went inside the house.


After Meet A had scolded her Deep and his Mother had told him what he had done and what Meet H had to do for him. He felt really embarrassed and guilty and wanted to fix his mistake not knowing how.

This is nice, we sort of got something on the same lines except the hurt in voice part 😬

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

arey too much suspense....please complete this!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: MissOverthinker

This is just a random thought I had so this is a quick OS about the morning in the Garden.


The Morning After


Meet A and Meet H are sleeping peacefully in the garden, when Meet H wakes up she has flashback of whatever happened last night while looking at her husband sleeping next to her. She is disheartened by the events that unfolded last night; from him thinking she’s Manushi Di, to her makeover as Manushi Di to get him back to his senses for his meeting, to him scolding her really badly for dressing up like Manushi. She didn’t know when she fell a sleep or when he came here. She got up to leave before he woke up avoiding any confrontation.


As soon as she got up to leave he held her hand which forced her back to her position. They’re was something about his eye which she kept looking at but she was quick to look away. Where as Meet A was still looking at her continuously, she was trying to free her hand from his grip when she said

Tujhe manay asay pakrnay ki koi zaroorat na hai, ab tera nasha utar chuka ab tujhai pata hai k main Manushi di nahi hoon sirf Meet hoon”


He lets go of her hand hearing the hurt in her voice. She left instantly and went inside the house.


After Meet A had scolded her Deep and his Mother had told him what he had done and what Meet H had to do for him. He felt really embarrassed and guilty and wanted to fix his mistake not knowing how.


This is a beautiful scenario. and something similar will come up soon I think in the show with this Manushi hovering around.

Keep writing if you love writing is what I say 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

This one is also nice. I guess jab curious rehti ki next kya hoga, tab aur v achha lagta😁😁😁

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