New FF....Yeh ishq hai....I CARE...Pg 2..Part2!!!!

Hi everyone''''well this my first attempt to write an OS'..one shot for this verrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cute couple'''''.hope u all like'''..😊

It begins from the scene of last night's episode'''''where Aditya escorts Priya for the darshan''''..😳

He turns to glare hard at that guy who had ditched priya''''.😲

Just as he turns around he notices the man was making his way to PRIYA ONLY!..............

Angry and determined''''..Adi comes in between priya and that person''''before he reaches out to her!..................

Looking at him angrily he tells him matter of factly'''''trying hard to resist himself from beating that guys-----Aye chorey!............Meri honey waali lugayi ke paas jet u dikh bhi gayaa naa mujhey!..............Toh tere uss gunaah kii sazaa toh main tujhey doonga hii''''..Lekin iss galtii kii sazaa thaarey ko AUR BHI MEHNGII PAD JAAVEGI!...............👏

The guys looks at Adi and sees the anger in his expressions and turns to leave'''''..

There Adi turns to look at Priya and then back to make sure the guys was gone!..............😳

Reaching the devi's idol''''.priya's dad and bro seek the blessings after which its Priya's turn''''😛

Adi too goes down on his knees by Priya's side and the two seek the devi's blessing together''''..

Panditjii blesses the two saying----Aapki jodi salamatt rahey!............😃

Adi turns to look at Priya who was looking at him stunned!..............

The BG music plays as Adi flashes his cute smile and winks at Priya''''

He bends forward''''.coming closer to Priya and says softly in her ears-----Ab Ke karegii chori?!..............Abb toh mata ne bhii iss chavanni chaap ka SAATH DEY DIYAA HAI TUJHEY'''..AASHIRWAAD MEIN!...............😳

Ok this one's a short one'''''tell me how u guys find it and that should I go on with it?..................😊

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Me 1st 🤣

1st AdiYa OS 😃

Res* Lemme Read it Now 😉 ------ n Plus Awwwww Loved the Scene Where the Pandit says Tum Dono ki Jodi Salamat Rahe! n he Replies to The Gal Abb Mata Devi ne Bhi Iss Chawani Chap Ko Tere Saath Bandiya Ayeeee !! Love This Guy !! God Girl Write more OS's😳 n Ho Sake Toh Gaurav n Vidya Par bhi Please😳 -Manal

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

Me 1st 🤣

1st AdiYa OS 😃

Res* Lemme Read it Now 😉 ------

Edited *

OMG !! Gal Loved it !! Wooow hahahahah I Bet When tht Champoo Looked @ adi's angerly Eyes, He pissed in his pants 🤣

n Plus Awwwww Loved the Scene Where the Pandit says Tum Dono ki Jodi Salamat Rahe! n he Replies to The Gal Abb Mata Devi ne Bhi Iss Chawani Chap Ko Tere Saath Bandiya Ayeeee !! Love This Guy !! God Girl Write more OS's😳 n Ho Sake Toh Gaurav n Vidya Par bhi Please😳 -Manal

Hey thankx dear!................Glad u enjoyed it…………I tried to make the dialogues just like those for Adi………….I am sooooooooooooooo glad u liked it dear!................Next part soon…………..lekin yaar for vidya and his hubby somehow I don't feel the love………still will try to write something………………

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba

Hey thankx dear!................Glad u enjoyed it''''I tried to make the dialogues just like those for Adi''''.I am sooooooooooooooo glad u liked it dear!................Next part soon''''..lekin yaar for vidya and his hubby somehow I don't feel the love'''still will try to write something''''''

OMG part 2😃😃 Will Sure Be Waitin !! n For Gaurav- Vidya ! I Dunno Buh Like I LOVE Watchin AdiYa buh I also Love Watchin Gaurav-Vidyaa Jst Hope in Future We Get more scenes of thm

Its really sweet what you have written....and totally in Adi's character cos i can just imagine him saying something like that with his mischievous look and Priya looking simply stunned....please write more.....its really good.

nice post MishalLeoSheeba aap ne to itni aldi sweet sweet

Originally posted by: priyankumupal

Its really sweet what you have written....and totally in Adi's character cos i can just imagine him saying something like that with his mischievous look and Priya looking simply stunned....please write more.....its really good.

Yaa i tried to get his charecter right and i am sooooooooooooooooo glad u noticed it!.............Thankx dear will update next part asap..................hope u like it too...................😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Originally posted by: aesa

nice post MishalLeoSheeba aap ne to itni aldi sweet sweet

post banana suru kardiya mene to socha tha aap weekand

par post banyegi aur weekand acha hoaye but koi baat nahi

ache kaam men der nahi honi chahiye Goodluck Chori

aap ne bohat bohat achi post banai hai thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Ab Ke karegii chori?!..............Abb toh mata ne bhii iss chavanni chaap ka SAATH DEY DIYAA HAI TUJHEY'''..AASHIRWAAD MEIN!...............😳 lovely line

aey Chori kuch to saram kar jab dekho tab itti bari bari

Aankho se dekhti rehti hai kabhi to pyar se dekhle ab ka

har wqat men tumen pyar se dekhta rahon ka Chori

aey chori bhi na sauch men Bavri hai

Well u added all colours and love to my OS thankx a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................for replying sooooooooooooooooo beautifully!.................Chori tu toh kamal niklii yaar!.......................😆😆😆😆😆😆

Adi and Priya come out of the temple'..Priya remains silent as the two walk down the stairs when all of a sudden Adi who was busy gazing at Priya loses balance and trips over''''.trying not to fall he takes support of a nearby rock ''..his hand gets hurt and it starts bleeding!...............

Adi winces in pain as Priya notices him and instantly she takes his hand in hers and looks on worriedly'''..she looks around as adi's hand bleeds''''.................😳

She tears a piece of her dupatta and ties it around Adi's hand while Adi just stands staring at Priya lovingly as the song Yeh ishq hai plays in the BG'''''..and u see Adi is all elated to see how concerned Priya was for him!...............👏

He realizes that she indeed cared for him!...................and her eyes''''.they said that she could not see him in pain at all''''''.

The song ends and u see cool breeze blows some of Priya's hair across her face''''''...............😛

And as she removes her hair which come to cover her face'''''..Adi goes on behaving like a gazing machine with Priya in front of her''''

When she looks up Adi notices a little bit of red blood of his''''on Priya's forhead near her maang'''''..as she goes on removing her hair from her face'''''.............................👏

Adi's lips curve into a smile''''''.and Priyawho looks at him confused says-----Abb kya hua?................😆

Adi looks at Priya and says matter of factly----Abb toh maarey ko yakeen ho gayaa hai chori''.Ki tu SIRF MAAREY LIYE BANI HAI'''''Bas abb taiyaar reh''.maari lugaayi banney ke liye!..............YEH Dilwale'''..APNI dulhaniya LEKAR HII JAYEINGE!......................

Priya is about to reply to adi when cheenu and her dad come there''''''

Downstairs''''u see uttara maaci asks the driver to drop them at their place'''''..and as they all leave''''...............😊

Adi still stands staring at the empty road!...............longingly he stand gazing at the road noww!...................(diwana ho gayaa hai ladkaa!.....😉.........)''''..

Uttara maaci who notices this''''walks to adi who is still watching the empty road as the car moves around the corner'''''and pulling Adi's ears she says-----Who chali gayi chorey!...........Abb iss khali sadak ko taakney se kya faaydaa'''''tub hi naa ek dum bawraa hai!...............😆

Adi flashes his cute smile and blushing he sayd-----Sach maaci''''.ek hi nazar mein''ek hi pal mein'''..diwana kar dalaa hai iss chori ne maarey ko!...............😃

Uttara smiles and replies-----Diwana toh tu ho hii gayaa hai''''..Lekin wohh kya chahtii hai yeh bhi toh pataa chaley maarey ko?!.............😳

Adi smiles and as Adi's BG music plays he says raising his hand and showing his hurt hand to uttara----Ke CHAHTI HAI YEH TOH NAA JAANO HOON MAIN''''.LEKIN WOHH MAARI PARVAAH KAREY HAI''.ITNA ZAROOR SAMJHOO HOON!..................😳

Adi's smile broadens as Uttara smiles naughtily at Adi''''😆

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Kaisa lagaa?............😊

Jaldii bataao''''..😛.

awesome.....i thought it would be clichd with Priya ripping her duppata but then when at the end Adi said it showed how much she cares about him.....my heart started to sing.....keep updating....can you please pm me when you update.....i don't want to miss the story