~Love or Deception~ FF Chapter 1 Pg. 5

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Hey Everyone.. :))

This is my first attempt at an ArMi FF.. all characters belong to MLTAK..

I have taken liberty and given their love story a twist although their characterization will remain unchanged..

Index can be found on the first page..

Introduction : pg. 1
Chapter 1: pg. 5
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Introduction

It was a beautiful day laughter echoed in the winds carrying with it the fragrance of my most beloved flowers.. tulips the same ones Ajay never forgot to bring me just the realization brought with it uncontrollable pain it pierced my heart and reached my soul yet the memories tempt call out to me and take me back through those few weeks where my life was full of beauty of overflowing emotions to be left with...

Laxmi Bua called its time to get up dear it's almost time for your dance classes.. she slowly lifted the blanket off of her niece's face unnerved to see the same pain upon her sleeping form..and quickly shook her

I'm up Bua and please don't look so worried I am absolutely fine.. she could not help but let a single tear escape and tread down her pale face.. she quickly wiped it away and jumped out of bed Bua you know me it's been a tough week so much work and

Dear losing yourself in work is not going to change the fact that Ajay

Bua please I really don't want to talk about it.. I'm going to get ready could you please get my breakfast ready..

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At home Arjun sat at the breakfast table lost in himself unaware of his surroundings.. he could not believe one day could turn your life upside down.. one moment change love to something as powerful and horrendous as hatred.. was it possible can you ever hate someone you loved more then your life..



Okay everyone will wait for feedback do tell me if you would like me to continue..😛
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..Naina.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh :) Very nice start Binny. Curious to see what's going on with Arjun and Lakshmi. Does she finally know the truth?

Do continue soon!
Naina
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue !
its intersting 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's a nice start... do continue Binny.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mind blowing start please do continue.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting, man! Do continue soon! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start and Interesting please continue😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh! This is such a Fantastic prelude, the way you have given curve shapes in beautification is stupendous. Would love to hear the forward lines more. Make it constant! ❤️


Much Love, Sadaf! 🤗
Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first thing i want to say...i watch this serial reqularly and i am loving that jodi...😃

coming to ur ...ff...wait...wait...wait...i am searching for the suitable words😕...tch...no words to say ...it was great start...with beautiful description 👏...love reading ur writing style😛...wonder what happen between lakshmi and ajai😲...😛...awaiting to read next part to know what happen... PM me pl😛

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