OS: Nakul's Daughter (update on page-3,7,9)

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Finally read the OS...
Sorry for reading & replying late

Its again beautiful & one of a kind... a theme untouched, bringing in many emotions within the Pandava family.
I was also not aware that Nakul had a daughter. I read some of your discussions in this thread with others.

Thanks for writing this wonderful OS Aru... it was not only unqiue & beautiful but quite very informative 😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

So Sweet. The fearless archer with a baby girl...I loved this update.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

The way you write about the relationships between the brothers, their wives ... purana kahani but with modern twist... you are good

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FlauntPesimism

@FlauntPessimism

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+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Ha ha. Naughty Arjun. I wish you could add a season 2 to this story

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Pooja--

@Pooja--

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

I cried after reading your os. beautiful. Thx for pm.

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draupadidevi

@draupadidevi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

very interesting and well imagined story about the pandava family. Their internal bonds are very clearly illustrated. But why have you suddenly stopped writing. If the nakul episode if complete then you may try with the story of some other pandavas and draupadi and their kids. Please update soon with a wonderful topic on the Pandava family.

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draupadidevi

@draupadidevi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

You have very perfectly balanced the mutual relationship of Draupadi and her husbands within a single os and never made any one more or less important. Your creative ideas are also very interesting. So please continue your writing following the same good standard.

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Some wanted me to continue this os thread. I don't know if anyone still interested or not. But I was thinking of adding another os. This time Arjun's twin daughters from Indonesian Mahabharat. And mother of them is Arjun's tribal wife Ali from Tamil legend. If at least few ppl are interested I will write.

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draupadidevi

@draupadidevi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Your decision to continue the writing is praiseworthy. But can't you write about some other pandavas except Arjun? Actually sometimes it appeared to be overloaded with the common theme again and again. Please consider my suggestion that whether it will be possible or not.