A Yudi -Arjuna OS (The farewellls-on Pg 10) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
very very nice plz do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Very poignant dear.

The way you have written Yudhistir explaining to Arjun about his pride which may lead to downfall & taking sharanagati was very touching...

Plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Great writing! Impressed.. Do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Brilliant...
Very nice concept...
We should not have pride of anything - family, friends, goodness, knowledge..anything!

Thank you and please continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
u made me speechless with this masterpiece varali didi I love you seriously none explored the relation between yudi n Arjun in whose command Arjun considered as sloka of Veda truth as the sun thank you for writing this is it ended or you are going to continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Patrarekha

u made me speechless with this masterpiece varali didi I love you seriously none explored the relation between yudi n Arjun in whose command Arjun considered as sloka of Veda truth as the sun thank you for writing this is it ended or you are going to continue

Good to see you here, Patrarekha.
Actually Sema (Urmiilla 11) and I are doing this together.
Yes, we wanted to bring out the beauty and purity of this relationship. Apart from the fraternal love b/w them there was also a strong element of guru- shishya relationship in their interactions. Maharishi Vyasa has hinted this aspect in a couple of unexpected places-and we are only developing on that.
Yes this FF is continuing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Loved How Yudi Taught Arjun Those Tricks, Thus Showing His Concern !! Simply Beautiful !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Beautiful writing as usual...

Yudisthir n Arjun's brotherhood is well shown...
Arjun n Draupadi's bonding is 😳 .Period.

Please continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Tis is so wonderful. Do PM me the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
beautiful upate
loved the way yudisthir taught arjun.
loved their bonding n loved arjun draupadi bonding.
beautiful writting
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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