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What a great start! Loved the starting verse and the words following flow very smoothly together.
Beautiful thoughts expressed very well...kudos! Thank you for the PM

Hi di

No words to tell u how much ur words had effect on me !!!

Originally posted by: varaali

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Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

Nicely thought..starting is good..especislly the first few lines..Keep writing..and all the best!😊

Thank you very much dear 😊 keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Devika, mann khush kar diya, priye!!! I didn't even think you will use the meaning of the name so precisely!!! Awesome, poignant, intriguing snd well written!!, bow down to you, devika!!!

Dhanyavaad Priya Jiji 🤗 aapke madhur shabd ne mera bhi mann ko khush kar diya 😃 mai apne Aaryaputra se itna prem karti hun jo shabd me prakash karna bhi sambhab nahi hai 😳 phir bhi mai prayaas kar rahi hun unka hriday ki bhasha sabko samjhane ke liye 😊

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

What a great start! Loved the starting verse and the words following flow very smoothly together.
Beautiful thoughts expressed very well...kudos! Thank you for the PM

Thank you very much 😊 glad that you liked it 😊 I think it is the main feature of Yudhishthir that only Krishna could understand him, & that's why ordinary people cannot understand him, so I used that verse only.😊

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh

Hi di

awesome prologue 👏

you explained the plight of yudishtir so well 😃

yes, he didnt have the strength of 1000 elephants nor did he have divine weapons, but inspite of having these if someone losses his mind then there wont be any use of such power...thats where our dhamraj stands apart 😳

loved it...thanks for the pm 🤗

Thank you very much dear sister for so sweet words 🤗
I always feel Yudhishthir's heart within my body 😳 that's the reason I decided to write from his POV. Yes the strength of mind is the best boon one can attain in one's life, & that's the key to all success 😊
Our Dharmaraj is the best 😃 whatever the others may say, I always believe it personally 😳

Originally posted by: vaishali09

No words to tell u how much ur words had effect on me !!!

Just brilliant.👏

I am feeling so blessed to know that those words effected you 😊 actually all is Krishna's Grave only 😊 I am nothing without His Blessings 😊
Thank you very much dear sister 🤗

wow...what a beautiful prologue...so meaningful too👏👏...awesome Di...
that's true 200%...Yudithistir didnt possess any divine weapon or power of 1000 elephants or anyother thing...but he possess the valuable thing Dharma n most important man who cannot be easily known n understood by others,that is Krishna...what else he need other that these two precious possessions...brillaintly expressed these lines here.👏👏...

prologue itself carries this much appreciation...then think about ur chapters...surely u going to rock...way to go,Di...cheers...krishnaji would help u...thanks for the pm😊