When their eyes met.....(An ArSu SS) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Madhav and Parth just love their bonding😃. Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Aww so sweet... Loved it. But can we have a very romantic Arjun subhadra moment please?????? I m waiting for such an update
Btw i love the last part..parav is so adorable!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
That is really an interesting beginning. Please continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Wow !! Hilarious !!

"You took a long time to ask that question. See I have many problems. Two of my dearest people shall be getting married and living a prosperous life together. I can safely leave under the care of Bua Kunti and my sakhi Panchali who is bound to love my sister as her own. And above this, I have this little problem that I can go and meet my sister as many times as I want under the pretext of coming to see my friend."

^^Great Problems ! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Hemangi- Thanks for the running commentary.
@Brishti- U will surely get an intimate Arjun-Subhadra moment but at least let them elope.

Everyone, thanks for ur appreciation. I am most probably not posting any update tonight. Severe headache or I may if it cures.

And new readers, do send me a buddy request so I can notify u on further updates.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
awesome 👏
hilarious

first subhi lost in arjun and later arjun and madhav hilarious he was busy munching sweets 😆 lol...
he says kidnap😆 wow and arjun dialogue of reply saying how can i say hi i am arjun and i am here to kidnap u🤣 hilarious .. innocent parth..

madhav saying he will be happy on his beloved getting married and stay happy👍🏼

the very next arjun ask will subhi bhi ok? and he says ofcourse she can't say not to u 😆 after all he indicated that she too love arjun.. sab krishna ki leela hain😉

he made arjun get total red☺️

naughty parav and spl madhav😆


read at one go

update soon


Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Amazing start.. Do PM me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

I was apprehensive of this part at first but then when I wrote it down, I simply loved it. Hope you feel the same. Also, this one is dedicated to my brother.

Subhadra was still in a trans. A kaleidoscope of images passed through her mind- Balram was practicing mace fight with one of his students. The student had curly black hair and dark black eyes. He seemed to be made of steel. His eyes were glinting. He had a grimace on his face; as she was returning from the bath with her sakhis she sees a shadow behind one of the trees. It was a man. As she moves towards the shadow, she sees the very student of Balram walk away. He casts a piercing look on her. Subhadra feels annoyed of the man who had been spying on her and her friends; a house was burning. A woman with her five sons was running for their life. The student was laughing mirthfully; Subhadra looks and goes on looking on the pair of grey eyes. Her whole body is becoming warm at the sight.

"Subhadra, Subhadra" Someone is shaking her. "Subhadra, are you all right dear?" Devaki looked concerned at her daughter's state. Subhadra broke from the trans. "Yes, Mata Devaki. I was just a bit overwhelmed at the news." Subhadra managed a false smile.

"I think our daughter needs rest." Vasudev spoke to his wife. Both of them walked out leaving Subhadra alone.

Subhadra started walking up and down the room. "This can't be. This just can't be happening. There must be a way out of this." Subhadra was determined. She would never marry a man who was keen to take Arjun's life.

"A Dasi came in. "Madam, Vasudev Krishna has come to meet you."

"Let him in. Let him in." Subhadra saw hope. Surely her brother would know of the situation and would be able to take her out of the misery enclosing her.

"Bhaiya" Subhadra ran towards Govind as he came in. He pulled his sister into an embrace. Subhadra wept her heart out on his shoulder.

"Why is my sister crying? Did no one tell her the good news? Or is she sad that she has to leave her Maika?" Govind chided her.

"Brother I am afraid. Do you understand nothing?" Subhadra asked.

"All shall be well my child. Go and pray to Lord Shiva at Somnath Mandir tomorrow morning. You shall surely have a happy life with the Prince of Hastinapur."

"You wish me to pray for that Prince of Hastinapur?" Subhadra almost shouted.

"Yes. You must pray to Lord Shiva for the sake of the Kuru Prince."

"Allright, I shall go." Subhadra said as the full meaning of her brother's words stuck her.

Edited by Yajnaseni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Awesome, part!!!!! Lovely!!! oh my Bhrathasri!!! Well written!!! thanx for the pm!!! update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
awesome... finally krishna played cupid one😉 arrow name arjun now temple for sure their wedding will happen or kidnapp of arsu 😉
continue soon last part brought back smile in my face

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