When their eyes met.....(An ArSu SS)

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Another beautiful & sweet update. 😛

In the first para, the description of Dwarika's beauty & serenity was very beautiful. 😊

Subhi is quite lucky to have such innocent (Rukmini) , naughty & adventurous (Satyabhama) bhabi's 😆. Loved the teasing part & also the way Satya helped Arjun to abduct Subhi.

Hhmm... by the last para it seems that ArSu romance is blossomimg ❤️ & will soon go to the next level 😆

Update ur next part soon. 😊

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Loved Your Method Of Subhadra-haran And How The Bhabhis Teased Subhadra !

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Kitta pyaara update tha dear.

I simply loved the way you wrote it.

Moreover the way you are shaping the story is awesome.

Now just waiting to see what happens next from here.

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

👏👏👏Loved it totally.Arjun my daring romantic hero😳Love you Mahanayak.I loved how you emphasised simplicity in Subhi's beauty.Also loved the tender Balram-Subhi moment.And the bhabhis teasing Subhi was perfect.And the part which I waited with my breath held Subhadraharan you nailed it My Arjun...love him

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Brishti Sarkar

@CaptainSpark

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Its just just just... BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! Let me tell you this is one of the best OS I read!!!

Firstly love u for putting up the Arjuna Satyabhama bonding... but I missed Madhav
I loved Rukmini, Satyabhama and Revati together teasing Subhadra.. and making marriage arrangements!!!

The description of the weather in Dwaraka and the atmosphere there was just mind blowing.. And did I tell you I read this update of yours twice !!!!

Subhadra's dress... Red lehenga with blue designs.. I can actually picture the Subhadra of my imagination that way

And finally.. the Arjun Subhadra moment

Acha I cant just stop reading those lines... ☺️ loved loved loved loved loved it like anything This is so beautiful and your language again is a special mention... just love your words..and language

Infact I loved this update like anything..the moment I have been waiting for so long has arrived and u have presented it so so beautifully.. in love with your update!!!!! Please keep writing and soon...

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar
Its just just just... BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! Let me tell you this is one of the best OS I read!!! 😃😃

Firstly love u for putting up the Arjuna Satyabhama bonding... but I missed Madhav 😭😭😭
I loved Rukmini, Satyabhama and Revati together teasing Subhadra.. and making marriage arrangements!!!

The description of the weather in Dwaraka and the atmosphere there was just mind blowing.. And did I tell you I read this update of yours twice !!!! 😃😃😃

Subhadra's dress... Red lehenga with blue designs.. I can actually picture the Subhadra of my imagination that way ❤️

And finally.. the Arjun Subhadra moment ❤️

Acha I cant just stop reading those lines... ☺️ loved loved loved loved loved it like anything This is so beautiful and your language again is a special mention... just love your words..and language

Infact I loved this update like anything..the moment I have been waiting for so long has arrived and u have presented it so so beautifully.. in love with your update!!!!! Please keep writing and soon...

I love the fact that you liked my SS so much. Thanks for the big reply and not being kanjoos in words. Take lots of love. And I wrote about the lehenga as I bought one like that a few days ago and thought Subhadra would look perfect in it.

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Tia...very very beautiful updates..👏👏👏..Loved to the core...

subhadra thinking of Princess Arjun...

Madhav n arjun covo...very sweet...so naughty madhav.😉...

Arjun's mind on seeing subhi...very beautiful thoughts..he almost lost himself.😳..

Madhav helping hand to him...

Bro-Sis...cute bond n deep understanding.😳...

Sathyabhama knows about his hunsband's tricks.😆..good...rukmini...so innocent...

atlast,our Arjun's arrival...Arjun -Subhi's magical moment.❤️...

All these r beautifully,perfectly expressed...great job,Tia...continue it...i am waiting...

Thanks for the pm..😊

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Vishva

@Guruvishva

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Fantastic updates dear ... I loved everything ... I have to say a lot about it but mera pass time nai dear ...I'm really sorry ...Please mujhe maaf keejiye🤗

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Krishnaa Nair Kooriyil

@Regina_Lupa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

ooommmyyy gggooovvviiinnndd!!
absolute briliance...

the haran in a spilt second.. almost got me carried away... wowow.. this si caled sweeping you off the feet...

romantic n sweet..

rukmini is pure innocence... ggaaawwwddd she herself had haran n this.. 🤣

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

beautiful update...
loved the camaraderie between all the ladies and especially their teasing of Subhadra...
Very well expressed...keeping us eagerly waiting for more 😊
Thanks for the PM

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