Arjun-Draupadi SS: Result of Patience(last part on Page 12)

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Oh Thanks a lot, darling!!! Really a heart touching compliment!! Was thinking how about continuing this SS and giving it a real end!!!

Please do continue. Would really love to read more even if its just one or two updates 😃

I will do for sure now, yaar!!! Just give me some time, darling!!!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Oh Thanks a lot, darling!!! Really a heart touching compliment!! Was thinking how about continuing this SS and giving it a real end!!!

You are lovely too😳🤗

No need of giving my words such importance as I am no different person than u😊

But I would love to read it further Update soon!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii

You are lovely too😳🤗
No need of giving my words such importance as I am no different person than u😊
But I would love to read it further Update soon!!

Thanks a lot, yaar!! When words so lovely they reach the heart automatically!! You are too lovely!!! I will do soon!!

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LiveYourDream

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Posted: 11 years ago

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What a wonderful wonderful retelling. I wish they had showed something like this in SB!!
Really amazing. You are such a gifted writer
Thanks for the PM otherwise i would have missed this!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

What a wonderful wonderful retelling. I wish they had showed something like this in SB!!
Really amazing. You are such a gifted writer
Thanks for the PM otherwise i would have missed this!!

Thanks a lot, darling!!! My Index finally has some work then!!!! I really wished some romance between ArDi in SB!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
When are you updating??????

Soon, will sit today and write it off!! Will post tomorrow!!!! And haan check the update once again, added pics and turn on the AC before you see!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I know guys, I said I am never gonna update this piece of fiction by me because I believed I might not be able to reach to all your expectations but now after getting a lot admiration from two forum waasis on my way of writing, I decided to give a proper end to the very first piece of my writing on IF!! So here I present before you the last update of this SS:

Chapter 4(B):

The night had the memories which they could never forget and had the moments which were always rejoiced, recreated and relished by both of them. The moments which were forbidden yet never hidden in any corner of their heart were one of the best moments of their lives.The room was filled with the fragrance of Yojanagandha and the glow of Shwethavahana.

After sometime,

Yagyaseni and Arjun were sitting near the window of her chamber seeing the the sky. Arjun suddenly said,

" Priye you know who are the greatest lovers of the universe?"

" Shiv-Parvati, Arya?"

" No, Priye!! They got themselves even after a long struggle but the greatest lovers are the moon and earth!"

" And why is it so Arya?"

" Because they never get each other completely for the sake of the good for the universe but they never stop trying. They come so close to each other but never get to be one, forever. One is required for the existence of the other, They complete each other. Without Earth there is no significance of Moon and without Moon there is no beauty at night for Earth.Isn't it the greatest love story, we can ever see, Priye?" he said while entwining their fingers and creating a eyelock between them.

"Yeah, Arya!! But the people for whom they are doing it will appreciate it till the time ends." she said confidently and soulfully.

" Same is the case with us, Pran Priye! For the sake of goodness, we cannot be physically one forever but mentally and emotionally we will be one because our souls are one! And this forbidden love of ours will be cherished too like the story of Moon and Earth!" saying this Arjun in his husky voice, lifted her in his strong arms and proceeded towards their bed to merge into themselves again.

After one year,

The cries of the new born were echoing in the Raj Mahal. Arjun who was tensed like anything suddenly became calm and rushed into the chamber of the his dear wife Draupadi to see her and his child, who was named as Srutakarma. He sat beside her while everyone else left to give privacy to them and mentally admired his wife and his new born. The child which was the sweet sign of their forbidden love and the " Result of Patience".

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I would like to thank all my readers and everyone who commented or liked this SS!! And it is because of these readers of mine that I am able to write 4 on-going FFs right now!! Thanks for everything!!!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago

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-Everglow-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Whoa sakhi! That was mind-blowing! The example of Earth and the Moon was so beautifully described! This story would be one of my all-time favourites! The ending was so lovely that I cannot express it in words! Thank You So Much for writing it!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
Whoa sakhi! That was mind-blowing! The example of Earth and the Moon was so beautifully described! This story would be one of my all-time favourites! The ending was so lovely that I cannot express it in words! Thank You So Much for writing it!!

I am honored, Sakhi @ Bold!!! I always get this in mind whenever I think of Yagyaseni And Aryaputra Arjun!!! So i thought I will write it down!!! Thanks a lot, Sakhii!!!