Veer Abhimanyu ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A fearless lion hearted warrior - Veer Abhimanyu


Broken words, haunted memories depicting a dark tale
A never ending pain of an abandoned child amidst a nightmare
His youth trapped in a twisted web
His fate engulfed into flames of treacheries


He was slain unfairly and weaponless
Yet he roared like a fearless lion hearted warrior
His skin bled from every inch of his being
Yet his eyes were filled with fearless valour


He fell biting into the dust, his knees hitting hard on the ground
His hands clasping the earth's surface
Refusing to give up rising each time cutting open his opponents
Roaring louder with every breath he took


Shielding himself with a mere chariot wheel
He knew he was riding on the side of death
Unarmed he was brutally and merciless murdered
Murdered from behind multiple times by multiple people committing a sin


After a last fierce roar ... suddenly silence crept in
And finally the sun setting and sleeping on his horizon forever!
The sun gave up on him but the moon embraced him with open arms
He shines a twinkling star on the skies above


Symbolizing courage, bravery and gallantry
For future generations to see
A generation who should draw an inspiration from ...
A fearless lion hearted warrior Veer Abhimanyu who once lived!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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so true he was a true warrior.👏 i respect him a lot. but todays episode. im crying guys it was so brutal and he didnt deserve it i mean he was a kid and yet anyone even a demon would pity such a small and yet fearless warrior😭 but the kauravas didnt they fell sympathetic towards him.😡 and paras well done. felt so bad and cried when abhimanyu sad version song was there plus ur acting.😭 love him. miss u abhimanyu and paras.😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant piece of writing!!! 👏
Abhimanyu true warrior !! A legend!!! ⭐️
Bow down !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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can i like such a brilliant and amazing writing to 100 times
wow man..its awesome

you shown all the things very clearly and perfectly

its one of the best thing i ever read in IF👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^ Excellent poem on brave warrior Abhimanyu by u, TJ! 👏⭐️

P.S TJ ... you should write spoof on ⭐️bharat one day with Jhota Singh & Chal Jhoti interviewing CV ie Saurabh Tiwari.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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another amazing post.

i love ur posts. u really have a great way with words. once again beautiful poem on abhimanyu.
for you👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahabharatfan

so true he was a true warrior.👏 i respect him a lot. but todays episode. im crying guys it was so brutal and he didnt deserve it i mean he was a kid and yet anyone even a demon would pity such a small and yet fearless warrior😭 but the kauravas didnt they fell sympathetic towards him.😡 and paras well done. felt so bad and cried when abhimanyu sad version song was there plus ur acting.😭 love him. miss u abhimanyu and paras.😭


Thank you!! ... Truly a courageous child like him didn't deserve such a brutal and painful murder...

And he indeed was the pride and glory of the padavas ... i will miss him ... he is and was my childhood hero ...Paras has been exceptional as Veer Abhimanyu ... i shall always remember him with his Sanskrit description below

Dijyavishve gunasmita pandvesuchyeguna
Abhimanyu giletasva krischndw gunsanchya
Dhananjaysy rupen vidhyamey shrutenach
Vinya sahdevsya shatruso laghurasya
Abhimanyu Abhimanyu Abhimanyu.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

Brilliant piece of writing!!! 👏

Abhimanyu true warrior !! A legend!!! ⭐️
Bow down !!!


Thank you so much!! 🤗

Absolutely he is a L-E-G-E-N-D and will always be!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JsparrowJ

can i like such a brilliant and amazing writing to 100 times

wow man..its awesome

you shown all the things very clearly and perfectly

its one of the best thing i ever read in IF👏


thank you so very much!! ... really appreciate 🤗
this post has truly made my day!!


can't thank you enough or tell you what it means to me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Swetha-

^ Excellent poem on brave warrior Abhimanyu by u, TJ! 👏⭐️


P.S TJ ... you should write spoof on ⭐️bharat one day with Jhota Singh & Chal Jhoti interviewing CV ie Saurabh Tiwari.


thank you swetha 🤗 ... you are such a sweet support!!


spoof 😆 ... who knows maybe one fine day we might write something together ... as for now its just Chal Jhooti for you 😛

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