..Those remains of a War..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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As tears fell from hundreds of eyes,

Sky filled with those soulful soaring cries,

As Humans witnessed their faith put to test...

In a second all those warriors just laid to rest.

In those dead bodies there were knowns and unknowns

For those grieving wives and helpless kids,

For those stunned mothers amidst...

A war is a war saying a story of its own..

Thousands Years have passed since the greatest battle of humanity was fought. Battle which wiped out millions of lives and those lived there after were left with only bitter memories.. regrets..and guilt..

Those gone left behind someone waiting beside.. a wait which had no end..

Yes indeed Justice delivered and truth won..

But taking in its course scores of those lives who were perhaps just sacrifice in this ultimate battle..

Some men died for their vows...Some died for their deeds.. Some lived to remember things along..

Just felt like writing something seeing destruction

which was inevitable for a new beginning !

Sadiyan beet gayi...Jeet Nahi Kewal Haar..!

Story which tells us our greed ,our lust, our desires...our ambitions when exceed beyond a limit can cause a destruction never seen ..so for the sake of humanity.. control these human weaknesses till it becomes your own destruction...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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riti! ⭐️

classy! speechless am after reading this!

So beautifully written!
Crisp and brilliant!
True masterpiece! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poetic lines for ... for a war that speaks a story of its own 👏
so well expressed! ... it touch's deep down ... it took me back to that era ... each one and the complexities for fighting for and fighting against!


the centuries ago battle for humanity ... still lingers today ... the brutal realities of war across time!


Story which tells us our greed ,our lust, our desires...our ambitions when exceed beyond a limit can cause a destruction never seen ..so for the sake of humanity.. control these human weaknesses till it becomes your own destruction...

this line is a mirror reflection!


thank you once again ... and continue the magic of your writing!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful lines riti

especially the last lines

war is after all a war it will cause destruction of innocent lives and pain to innocent people no matter what the reason

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am speechless to read this , you are classy writer riti

yes war means destruction that's it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

riti! ⭐️


classy! speechless am after reading this!

So beautifully written!
Crisp and brilliant!
True masterpiece! 👏

😊Thank you so much Gayatri , it is really encouraging..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-

Beautiful poetic lines for ... for a war that speaks a story of its own 👏

so well expressed! ... it touch's deep down ... it took me back to that era ... each one and the complexities for fighting for and fighting against!


the centuries ago battle for humanity ... still lingers today ... the brutal realities of war across time!


Story which tells us our greed ,our lust, our desires...our ambitions when exceed beyond a limit can cause a destruction never seen ..so for the sake of humanity.. control these human weaknesses till it becomes your own destruction...

this line is a mirror reflection!


thank you once again ... and continue the magic of your writing!! 🤗

🤗 You are welcome !
And thanks for your insightful comment too.. somewhere every war leaves its imprints..some unhealed wounds for those who survive..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabhayata

Beautiful lines riti

especially the last lines

war is after all a war it will cause destruction of innocent lives and pain to innocent people no matter what the reason

Thank you Sabhyata😊..you are always encouraging..
Ofcourse a War is a War where innocent ones are too caught up ..unfortunate but bitter realities
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patrarekha

i am speechless to read this , you are classy writer riti

yes war means destruction that's it

Aww.. thank you dear..😊
@bold- its ultimate truth..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful lines
war can never bring peace

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