Tales of Panchaali and Pandavas - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
I liked it actually...😊 I mean, it is difficult to do a Sahdev-Panchali write-up since he is such a quiet guy...
"A warrior is to be born soon"
Was he predicting her OWN pregnancy or am I reading too much?!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shani88

I liked it actually...😊 I mean, it is difficult to do a Sahdev-Panchali write-up since he is such a quiet guy...

"A warrior is to be born soon"
Was he predicting her OWN pregnancy or am I reading too much?!?


HE IS SPEAKING OF ABHIMANYU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 I thought it would be good to do so as Sahadev was unbothered about himself..always deep inside books and astrology and knowledge!! And when Abhimanyu's news in StarBharat made everyone so happy today that's why!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar


HE IS SPEAKING OF ABHIMANYU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 I thought it would be good to do so as Sahadev was unbothered about himself..always deep inside books and astrology and knowledge!! And when Abhimanyu's news in StarBharat made everyone so happy today that's why!

I thought Sahdev did a number on Panchali, and told her that she is pregnant with one of her own warrior sons...🤣🤪
But why would Sahdev predict Subhi's pregnancy to Draupadi? I mean, just for info's sake, or something else...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shani88

I thought Sahdev did a number on Panchali, and told her that she is pregnant with one of her own warrior sons...🤣🤪
But why would Sahdev predict Subhi's pregnancy to Draupadi? I mean, just for info's sake, or something else...


That's because Abhimanyu is important for the track. 😊 Nothing else. Panchaali will be knowing anyways. I did not want anything between the Saby-Panchaali track so it was done by Sahadev.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really and here i was thinking that sahdev was being naughty and hinting abt his son with panchali...may be i just have a dirty mind...bt i liked this..i liked how sahdev was sweet here ( in the case you didnt imply the naughtiness) or actually playful ( if the naughtiness was implied)...
...hope my review makes you a little bit happy..it has made me confused...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki1291

really and here i was thinking that sahdev was being naughty and hinting abt his son with panchali...may be i just have a dirty mind...bt i liked this..i liked how sahdev was sweet here ( in the case you didnt imply the naughtiness) or actually playful ( if the naughtiness was implied)...

...hope my review makes you a little bit happy..it has made me confused...


Sahadev is very difficult to write on.. v little known is abt him..😭 So I need time to better my writing.. I know its confusing! I am not satisfies too. I got to think... but my other stories are good na..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sabyasachi and Panchaali (Story 2)

The Indraprastha Rajsuya Yajna was about to start. Bheem had just killed Jarasandh, the king of Magadh. On their return, Panchaali was extremely happy. Not for the sake of her beautiful Indraprastha but it was something really special to her heart. She would, as per she decided only share it with her current husband, Sabyasachi first. Through-out the day, Panchaali stood at the balcony, fidgiting with her shiny braided hair and looked towards the Ashwathha tree at the back of the palace. She was thankful to Mayasur as it was visible from her balcony. She desired to see it, for someone close to her wild heart.

There he was, in fresh white dhoti and his favourite warrior cloak, which was also off-white and partly has striped borders of ocean blue. He was the reason why Panchaali stood at the balcony.. with her focus on only him. There he was. Panchaali thought maybe ocean blue signifies Indra-Dev, Sabyasachi's real father. So he had decided on the design of his favourite cloak in such a way. Sabyasachi plainly focused on his beloved Gandiv, which he polished after every 50th practice shoot. He used his hands, which bleeded at times, when it was scratched by the powerful edges of his Gandiv. He hardly cared. Panchaali tore some strips of her gorgeous red saree, thinking of how to bandage the wounds.

It seemed like Surya-dev had some kind of a fight with Panchaali. The sun was still not setting. Panchaali walked along the balcony impatiently, looking at Sabyasachi as he practiced.And finally, the sun set. The Aswathha tree seemed to have swallowed the sun in its branches. Panchaali thought if she could call Sabyasachi from the balcony, when a group of boys and girls from a nearby village came running. Many must be wondering how come these people come inside the palace. Well, they are known ones. Panchaali had ordered the palace guards to allow children anytime. Sabyasachi kept his Gandiv on a rock and walked fast towards them. One of the kids gave him an apple. I heard Sabyasachi saying "This apple is red as your rosy cheeks!" The young girl clapped her hands in joy. Sabyasachi picked up one og the boys in his lap and explained something to him about his wounds Panchaali thought. He kissed the boy and let him down. He gave all of the them a warm hug and looked at them as they sped off. The sun had set by that time. Panchaali saw Sabyasachi heading towards the main staircase which would lead into Yudhishtir's chambers and also the seong stair case would lead to her chambers in which Sabyasachi was to come.

Sabyasachi did not eat anything on the 6th day of the month. Some kind of a practice by his Guru Drona. Panchaali ran towards the doorway of her chambers anticipating Sabyasachi's entry! And they almost bumped into each other. On other days, Panchaali would have allowed the bump but today, she stopped. Sabyasachi gave her a calm look and a laugh! Panchaali laughed back and pulled him towards the other end of the room. "Panchaali..what? Panchaali..Panchaali.." Panchaali put her beautiful finger on his lips as a token of silence. 'Sit down here." asking Sabyasachi to sit on the bed. Panchaali sat next to him and took his hand. She bandaged the wounds one by one carefully. Sabyasachi stared shamelessly at her. Panchaali looked back.

She ran her fingers through his untidy hair and rook her lips close to his ear and whispered something. Panchaali would be a mother soon, For the fifth time and give birth to Sabyasachi's son. Sabyasachi's eyes sparkled. He could not stop smiling.He took Panchaali close to him and kissed her hand and both of them stood up and Sabyasachi kissed her forehead. Panchaali was overjoyed. The smile in Sabyasachi's face was for her. Nothing was a better gift.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brishti, this is awesome!! Thank you for honouring my request!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brishti,thank u so much for these amazing stories of pandavas and panchaali👏👏...i loved these stories to the core...ur creativity on each story is really beautiful...dono which one is to pick...because all pandavas r having some sweet moments with panchaali.

i expect some of these from starbharat.😡...but u made it for us😳...

continue it soon...i am enjoying a lot and want to enjoy more n more😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bheem and Panchaali (Story 2..continuation from the first part)

It was nearly afternoon when Bheem and Panchaali returned to Indraprastha. They were in between their amusing conversation when one of the cooking maids came in. She said, in a sad tone, "Queen,there is no sugar left in the palace kitchen. And sugar, as informed to Maharaj today, will not be available before tomorrow morning." "But we decided to prepare sweetmeats today.!!" Panchaali ssaid and sat down with a shrug. Bheem waved his hand and told the maid to leave and put his hand on Panchaali's shoulder. "Don't worry. This is very common!" and waved his hand which would break of the full shelve if not Panchaali would stop his hand. "What shall we do now?" Panchaali asked. "Bheem winked at her as he washed his hands. "So, should we go for payesh or laddoos?" "Aarya! We can't have sweetmeats! And now don't tell me you can prepare sweetmeats without sugar," Panchaali said sarcastically. "I have a few laddoos here.. " Bheem said as he took out some laddoos from the shelves. "Aarya, this will not even be sufficient for Aarya Nakul's horses!!!!" Bheem smiled. "You cannot cook if you are not calm Panchaali. Firstly be composed. And now, stop acting impatient like Duryodhana and see what I do." Panchaali rolled her eyes. It was difficult to fight with Bheem and she knew it!

Panchaali sat in the kitchen with hands on her cheeks as she glared at Bheem. Bheem took the laddos on the mortar and started grinding them. "What on earth are you doing aarya?" Panchaali could not help asking. Bheem nodded and continued his weird techniques. He took out the plainly grained laddoos out he mortar and showed Panchaali. Panchaali stared at them until she understood what was Bheem planning and then she could not stop laughing. Bheem started laughing too!

The food was ready in no time. Bheem actually used the laddoo paste instead of sugar in making the payesh and named the dish ladoo payesh. Bheem and Panchaali stood in at a corner of the bhojan kaksh. Panchaali looked tenst on whta Yudhishtir and the others would say while Bheem looked excited. Finally Yudhishtir laughed in amusement and gave a thumbs up to Bheem and Panchaali. Panchaali and Bheem looked at each other. Everyone ate with delight as they both shared simple smiles with each other!

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