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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Paro95
Truely lovly stories brishti👏. Nw dat ppl hv suggested abt bheem consoling darupadi aftr cheerharn i wld like to suggedt anothr thng. I read it somewhere in the net that the day(or rather night) bheem kills dussy draupadi calls bheem into her tent (for obvious reasons). Apparently she became vry romantic towards him since them. So i ws wondering if u could write somethng post war. Nt nly with bheem but others too...n yaa no compulsions, just suggesting😊

Sure! 😊 Will do it soon!

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amritat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Thank you thank u thank u thank u thank u🤗

btw- does your first sentence say that in full forum my thread has the best stories?????????

Actually I meant that whatever stories, YOU have written so far in this thread, of them, these 2 stories are THE BEST. 😊

As far as the entire forum is concerned, to be honest, there are some REALLY good writers. And trust me, YOU are one of them. And the best part is, u give importance to each n every husband of Panchali. 😊

Thank u for making such efforts to write such stories, so that people like me can read n love them. 😊

Infact, I would like to thank all the writers on this forum for writing such wonderful stories on our favourite characters. 😊

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: amritat

Actually I meant that whatever stories, YOU have written so far in this thread, of them, these 2 stories are THE BEST. 😊

As far as the entire forum is concerned, to be honest, there are some REALLY good writers. And trust me, YOU are one of them. And the best part is, u give importance to each n every husband of Panchali. 😊

Thank u for making such efforts to write such stories, so that people like me can read n love them. 😊

Infact, I would like to thank all the writers on this forum for writing such wonderful stories on our favourite characters. 😊

Thank you so much!🤗

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Panchaali and Pandav (Story 2)

The 12 years of exile of the Pandavs were coming to an end today. After which they had to spend one year in disguise. They had decided to spend their 1 year of disguise in the Matsya kingdom as it was too close to the Kuru kingdom and no-one could imagine them to be that close. The decision was finalised by Yudhishtir. The Pandavs and Panchaali sat under a tree where the brothers would hide their weapons. Yudhishtir and Sahdev discussed the plans. Phalgun fidgited with his beloved Gandiv from time to time. Bheem collected fruits unnecessarily and offered them to everyone and having been refused by each, ate them himself. Nakul played with some wild rabbits near the cottage. Panchaali sat quietly not interested in anything.

"So, we will re-discuss the plans." said Yudhsihtir and stood up. He looked at Phalgun and both spoke through eyes after which Phalgun left the place. "Phalgun has already discussed the plans with me and he has asked for a longer time to be ready in disguise. He will be the first one to leave." Yudhishtir said. "Aren't we all leaving together?" Panchaali walked up to the tree. "No, we-" 'I will take the disguise of a cook." Bheem interrupted. A raged Yudhishtir gestured Bheem for silence and continued. 'Phalgun will leave first tomorrow and I will follow his path, and leave after midnight tomorrow. " Yudhishtir said. "Panchaali you will leave day after at an early time, as a maid, willing to serve King Virata's Queen." Yudhishtir said. Panchaali nodded her head. "Please take your disguise, as Phalgun has also gone to see if his disguise is fine. Panchaali you also go and take your disguise, for a check." Panchaali went inside the hut her open hair, dirty and umcombed dangling at her back. "Nakul," asked Yudhishtir. "I, as you said will be in charge of the royal stables." Nakul said. "Yes. Good." Yudhishtir gestured him to take his disguise. "I will be the same as Nakul and Bhratashree Bheem will be in disguise of a cook." Sahdev said. "Yudhishtir nodded his head and left himself gesturing them to take their disguise.

All of the Pandavas and Panchaali came ready into the same spot. Yudhishtir was in disguise of a court subject, and he told himself to be good in the game of dice. "So you still miss the game of dice." Panchaali laughed. Yudhishtir understood her pain but kept quiet. Bheem looked like normal, only he had a beard and moustache. "Is it okay?" Bheem asked. He speaks too much all the time, Panchaali thought. Yudhishtir ignored. Nakul and Sahdev looked the same, Nakul taller and more handsome. Sahdev had dirty hands, which Panchaali approved of, for his disguise. And Phalgun ? Every one of the Pandavas stared at their third, the Gandivdhari. And Panchaali, made an O face stared at the hidden parts of his body. He would become princess Uttara's dance tutor. From where did Phalgun learn these womanly tricks? . His hips swayed as he walked and the dark brown saree he wore dangled like her open hair. His face looked blank without his beard. His hands were full of rings and jewellery which covered his Gandiv marks in each place. Panchaali giggled, in her mind. She remembered the story which Phalgun told him about a curse he got by Urvasi, an apsara. But life would never be the same for the Pandavas. Every one of them thought the same, including Phalgun who now continued with his womanly tactics.

Edited by Brishti_Sarkar - 11 years ago

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Justitia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Wonderful story 👏...

Interesting choice of situation - the preparation of the agyaatwaas...😊

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

It is wonderful and fascinating thread

Ur writing skill superb

I love most nakul and dro...they r superb

Dro-yudisheter muture couple

Can u plsss pm me when u update this thread

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5
It is wonderful and fascinating thread
Ur writing skill superb
I love most nakul and dro...they r superb

Dro-yudisheter muture couple

Can u plsss pm me when u update this thread

Okay sure.😊

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mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Beautiful thread brishti di...😊and wonderful stories...❤️

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K.Puja Biswas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Part in red- Sure. Thanks for the idea. I will write a story of Yudi and Drau discussing of it.😊 But part in bold - No kabab-mein-haddi..only Yudi Drau...😆

Part in blue- Nah it wont be similar if I write in in another way. There Drau asks for help. Here,, Bheem is supposed to console her. There is difference. I was also thinking of a Yudi Drau story post-cheerharan where Drau is angry with Yudi and Yudi breaks her anger. But, I was thinking.. stalking her is too serious. Can it be a playful story.. I doubt...

pls write these 2 topic of yudi-drau story with romance pls pls