Karna-Arjun SS : A Lonely Evening (last Part-Page-29)

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rishbalaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

nice update dear.waiting for next part😊

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The soft fine voice of that creature never sounded this much amusing to the warriors. With a sigh of relax they looked down to find the poor little species sitting one or two inches away from Karna's feet, busy in licking own thumps. A very very cute cat it was. Even in moonlight it could be seen that it was a female cat that is why having an apparently lanky and more flexible figure. The creature had a milky white skin with brown spots here and there, but from back of her heat to tail the portion was jet black for which she didn't came into notice and her green glittering eyes worried them. The cat surely was out for hunting the sleeping birds in their nests on the brunches of banyan tree but she must got scared to see those two men and jumped down. And all in the while they were freaking out for the poor soul. The very realization of which evoked bubble of laughter in Arjun's stomach. But with supreme control he restrained himself from giggling out. He never had to do this much effort even in battlefield to control the pain of any grave injury. Because he knew if he smiles now angraj will surely think Arjun is making fun of his being scared of a cat as he unleashed his armor. So Arjun was helpless. He didn't want to spoil the divinity of environment in this magical evening by fighting with his rival. So Arjun was compelled to do what in this situation was a challenge for even great sages and gods too.

Only then shocking Arjun to the core a roaring laughter reached to him. With rolling eyes in amusement Arjun witnessed the scene that was never seen before. Angraj has collapsed into a heartiest laughter. It was not just a laughter but an outburst of emotions. Arjun couldn't believe his eyes, such a bitter , rude person as angraj knows to laugh! Arjun never would have known someone's laughter can seem as a flood breaking all the barriers some suppressed stream is overflowing its banks. Arjun truly was in awe seeing Karna's smile. He never had been so delighted to see anyone's laughter else than Madhav. But Krishna's smile is charming and mesmerizing mostly meaningful and mischievous, even if Madhav bursts in laughter that also carries more than one meaning. Karna's laughter can't be compared with that. Arjun considered till now brother Bheem only can laugh such heartily but Bheem's innocent laughter was
somewhat blunt and that makes no sense sometimes. Someone's innocent laughter can be so meaningful Arjun would never have known before. Today Arjun discovered another fact, which he never cared to notice before. Except Nakul no other man in whole Aryavart or even outside can match Karna's looks. First time ever Arjun admits to himself, Karna is extremely handsome man. No wonder why do women get easily attracted towards him including the most unexpected one as per Madhav's saying. Discovering this other side of own rival Arjun felt annoyed on a complete different reason. Owner of such a beautiful laughter only nurtures bitterness and hatred. What apocalipto will occur to him if he laughs more often? Forget to pandavs he even doesn't laugh with kauravs if he ever joins brother Duryodhan in laughter that too a forced and sarcastic one. This is a really grave injustice towards creator who had adorned him with such a gift that people had to effort to have. Arjun never could imagine in dream that once his beauty lover eye will appreciate his own rival. It seemed to him in this magical evening he had met someone else not that arrogant proud Angraj.
Suddenly a soft touch on Arjun's feet diverted his eyes from his laughing rival, he looked down and his lips widened in a grin. The cat is has taken shelter on his feet, perhaps being scared of Karna's roaring laughter. He bent and picked the soft ball of far on his palms. So cute the creature is. He cuddled the soft bundle in arms. He thought to take her to palace and present to his pet lover brother Nakul. He will be happy to see such a cute cat.
"Meaw" it seemed the creature too gave consent to his plan. And the soft sound again reminded Arjun what effect the creature's first glance had on them, and at last he failed to held his giggle anymore.

Karna can't remember when did last time he laughed forgetting everything. Perhaps not once after he had grown up. The innocence that require to laugh heart out was lost from his life when he first time faced rejection in his life from Dronacharya to give him the advanced skill. After that the simple moments of joy went far away from him, he couldn't ever laugh whole heartedly even in jokes made by his best friend Duryodhan or Aswathama, because those were everything but innocent. Today a prank by nature brought out all the long lost emotions of him that was hurried in some deepest part of his heart. As if a gate to the memories of his childhood had been open, when he and Shon used to find happiness in every little things.
After the initial pace of laughter slowed down Karna remembered where he was and with whom. He looked back to Arjun and found him giggling as a little boy while cuddling the very reason of his laughter. The sight was amusing enough to evoke the bubble of laughter again in Karna. And this time his laughter encouraged Arjun too to laugh out loud.
Soon two unknown brothers collapsed in a heartiest laughter on the bank of Ganges, soothing mother nature's eyes.

Edited by RoseFairy - 11 years ago

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sohini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

"Angraj has collapsed into a heartiest laughter" aww I would laugh to see dis scene infront of my eyes again nd again!! anyways interesting update loved d music part of ur previous update..dey both didn't utter a word but both were connected through nature,music,feelings and warrior instincts..amazing plot@rose!! waiting 4 d next update!!

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Yajnaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

A very short and sweet post. Loved it. Please update soon. I just love this thread and have been following it for a long time though I joined the forum recently.😛

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