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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

I am in love in love with your KaJu update, the way you penned each update, makes me think that the whole thing is happening in front of my eyes.

And dare you say in your PM's that you make us bore with your update 😡, main bahot naraz ho jaungi... katti ho jaungi main, Aru di

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Hey dear, I missed commenting on your previous part but loved both parts .. you kind of brought out inner emotions of Karna so well.. and last part in your latest update was a real surprise... Dury thinking of that... Really looking forward to next update..Do continue😊

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

it was awesome i really am interested to read mooore plz write soon

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taruna

@taruna40

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

another awesome update aru :) karan while listening to arjuns music thinks about his peacful days with his wife awww i also liked duryodhan confession and wish that arjun should have been his brother

what a chamer this dark swetamdhari is

pls update soon long one if u have time

its a pleasure reading yr updates

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Diala D

@...Diala...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Aru.. 🤗

thanks for changing pace 😳 read both tadpole dance updates.. 👏👏👏 is what I can say.. beautiful.. so pure and original.. loved it.. 😛

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srinithi

@HelloHell

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

oh my god aru di it was beautiful...i promised myself that i wont cry..but that "i wish i had a younger brother like arjun" caught me...if karn only knew the truth..your amazing my big sistah !!!!! i love ur works...😊👏 im reading it again now..i already read it...thrice..

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Srishti

@srishtisingh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

wow aru "I wish I had a younger brother like him!" 😊 it was touchy.even dury!

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taruna

@taruna40

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

as usual i read yr post before u finished editing ahhh litte does karan know that his wish to have younger brother like arjun is the fact he would have really conquered the world with arjun by his side as his brother

what a wishful thinking and also shared madhav wow

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OmkaraKiParvati

@OmkaraKiParvati

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

U have taken me to the Mahabharat Era whr this all happened.. U hav taken me to History.. Loved the update.. It gives me nostalgic feelings.. Wonderful.. PM me after ur next update..

P.S. The update isn't strange. Its beautiful...

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Sotyi, Tomar Lekha Porte Porte Jeno Onno Kono Prithibite Chole Jaayi Aami, Jekhane Chinta Nei, Dukhho Nei, Shudhu Aachhe Shaanti, Aar Tomar Golpo...Thank You Didi, For Giving Us This Wonder !

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