RiShbala FF: SiNfuL NiGhTs (thread 11 link in pgno.1) 12/11 - Page 50

Okay so finally!! Like finally!! I am here with my major review!

First of all I will like to appreciate your amazing writing skills Aaniya!

You wrote this with utmost reality without any dramatic situation. I have always said and today also I will say that your story is so close to reality! It happens in real life and it is more painful in real life than this. But hats off to you for bringing this amazing story! You described every emotions so beautifully and magnificently that I felt like it is hell real. The way you described Madhu's dilemma about moving on or not, her weakness, her pain, her anger and last but not the least her helplessness. It happens in every girl's life... Every girl goes through such phase I believe but with different reason or causes... Over all I feel you nailed it when it comes to presentation of Madhu's emotions and turmoil. Coming to express RK's character it was lit! Honestly you nailed it too.

Moving on to the growth of characters! I personally felt that in this track we got to see growth of Madhu as a girl who knows how to respect herself. She wants to move on from the Kundra Mansion because she knows that she is not just a body... She is a human... Who has feelings and emotions!! But one more thing that I noticed in Madhu which is so damn true nowadays that specially girls I will say prefer to talk when their life is on edge. Madhu tried to talk to RK when her feelings were at an edge. I think the moments in which she chose to stay silent should have been the moments she should have spoken out loud. Not every time there would be a friend like Arhaan who will make RK understand her condition. Yeah I accept that sometimes circumstances are against you but that doesn't mean you give up girl! Life is all about taking up chances and not giving up. So I personally felt that Madhu was at some points lacking that spirit of having answers. She was more bent or bothered about being a second girl in RK's life. And I don't think it is her fault... She is a human after all. And I liked and disliked a thing about Madhu too. The thing I liked is that she didn't blame RK for her misery... Because he had beforehand cleared it that no emotional strings are attached to this sexual affair of them. Now coming to the thing I disliked was the moment she began to regret her moments with RK after that scene of her checking RK's Phone. Means like come on girl did he forced you to have sex with him? You yourself surrendered... He never forced you into something... Honestly this thing of Madhu irked me... I agree his charm affected her but is it his fault too? Like if you get a cut from knife it is the fault of that knife not yours? That you didn't handle that knife carefully!! Coming to RK! Well he got a major exposure in this track. I personally got to see his 50 shades honestly!! He was cute, possessive, jealous, satisfied, confused, disturbed, DARK, evil, mysterious and what not. Like he was everything a hero and a villain too. I personally believe that the reason RK doesn't talk about Ria to Madhu is because Ria is a nobody to him now. Isn't it a fact that the person about whom you don't even give a shit is someone you don't even bother to talk about? There were scenes in which I found him cute like that laptop scene in Madhu's room. He was so cute when he said "Nah my one is better. He was dark when he took her to the isolated forest... I think more than Madhu he has grown in this track. About other characters one word only: Ria is a bitch about whom I don't care anymore because I know RK won't go back to her. There must a reason why he dropped her to the mall and took care of her hand when she was injured. Arhaan is the best of best friend anyone can get. Mukund is a bas***d. Aisha is amazing. Radha as always is a crap. Mohan is I guess a failure as a father for RK. He never understood her in fact he forced her. I believe kids understand the language of love and care more than the language of rules and languages. Dipali as always bullshit... Randhir and Trishna I guess are more lost in their own world so no major development has been seen. Is anyone left is characters?? I don't think so. No wait I missed Reva... I feel bad for her honestly. But I have the same question as RK that if she would have had kids of her own would she be same? I don't think so. RK is her one and only child that is why she is yearning more for him. If she would have had her kids she would have I guess not cared that much... Not that she would have forgotten him but she wouldn't have been in this much pain too.

Now coming to the plot... Though I have always showed my annoyance on this track but this track is important I believe... As I can see that maybe at the end it will teach Madhu to trust RK... The plot is again I will say close to reality. It is a daily happening in one's life. Some give up, some get stuck up and some start to play the blame game. Neither Madhu nor RK is at fault. Both are right at their own spot but sometimes I feel Madhu is being a dumb ass... Sorry but I feel so... Means she believes on her own random bullshit thoughts but not what she has seen. And due to her thoughts she has always taken RK and Ria together is a wrong way. I believe at such phase of life being vocal and clearing your doubts is the best solution. But with a partner like RK it is next to impossible I know... But I guess now this plot is heading towards an end! LIKE finally! I am waiting Aaniya! I can't tolerate this track anymore... It is getting on my nerves seeing this broken shattered girl! Coming to the other side... I think RK is easing up around her... Like I felt it... I hope this ends up good!! Because sometimes some words give my really bad vibes about upcoming tracks!

Overall I loved the updates till now because every update exposed a new thing about RK! And how to forget by the end of every update Madhu was more negative about RK! The way you wrote them was magnificently tremendous!! I wonder how you write so flawlessly. Any secret...?

Well BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMS!!

Rock them girl!!

Wishing you success and happiness!!

I hope this review enough as compensation!

I could have made is better but I am not is mood!

I just want to post it ASAP!

Well ending it here...

NO! Wait!

How can I forget about banners and quotes?

These quotes have always been my favorite! They add up a new taste of romanticism in my dictionary! Loved them all!

About banners!! All of them were amazing Aaniya! Like really amazing and beautiful! I adored all of them.

Now I won't disturb your anymore!!

Good Bye!!

P.S: Hope this review is good enough to make your finger tired!! (Tongue)*

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Hey of course.. I loved it thoroughly..

It kept me busy for a day.. LOLZ...

Thanks ya :) for the hardworking u made ur lil fingers go through😃