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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Hii..
am Glad that u are Writing it in Rishba version..
i login to read Haya version.. and i got this..
thankyou.. and i will stick to this version..

part-1
my Heart is in my mouth !
after reading the second part.. i got the meaning of Malik..
it means master !
madhu got in human trafficking..
and She got sold too..
these Scene are so scary & dark !
this story is really dark !
whos her Malik.. Rk ?

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-2
threw some light in madhu's matter..
and the Shocking part is her last statement as her father did that to her..
and her malik.. who the hell is he ?
he is rich.. and padmini considers him as her son !
too much of mystery..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Seema...

@hend:kudos to ur courage really..v impactful.nw waiting fr 24 th.plz cm soon.cant wait


Kudos? What that mean?

I will do my best my dear
to tell you the truth it is a very very hard story to write
it is a challenge for me and I hope to win this challenge
I read many stories with human traffic and most of them with inappropriate sex scenes
The challenge for me to write one without any sex scenes or description for any intimate situation like you know I'm a Muslim and I can't write things about that
That is why it is hard for me to write and the harder to write this suffering and dark issues it gets me really bad
but I know many people suffered from things like that and I wanted to write about them

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--


Hii..
Hi dear

am Glad that u are Writing it in Rishba version..
my pleasure

i login to read Haya version.. and i got this..
I should waited little longer

thankyou.. and i will stick to this version..
Ok you have the two version choose what you like more

part-1
my Heart is in my mouth !
Sorry for that

after reading the second part.. i got the meaning of Malik..

it means master !
Yes

madhu got in human trafficking..

and She got sold too..
Yes

these Scene are so scary & dark !

this story is really dark !
Very very very dark one but new one too

whos her Malik.. Rk ?
You will know everything about him later


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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--


Part-2
threw some light in madhu's matter..
Yes it show why everyone shocked by seeing her body

and the Shocking part is her last statement as her father did that to her..
Yes it is shocked and sad

and her malik.. who the hell is he ?
You will know later

he is rich.. and padmini considers him as her son !
too much of mystery..
Yes he is mysterious man


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-3
So, He made made speak about it..
her each words, her past is really horrifying..
i don't have words for the torture she went through..
and her malik is listening to her..
she feels safe with him..
he allowed her to move in garden..
and she is forming bond with padmini too..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-4
the Blow..
Its monstorous what are father did..
and pretto too didnt Vouch for her..
i dont think they are her real mom dad..
even if they are.. i guess.. they have problem with girl being in their family..
so, more Of her past is left..
and her malik too..
oh god !
i wont ask who is her malik..
but i am asking How long will u keep Her Malik's name under wrap ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@hend..it means great job,welldone etc 'its used frpraising..
Ya true its dark but d irony is..its d harsh truth.keep up d great job
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Part-3
So, He made made speak about it..

Yes

her each words, her past is really horrifying..
Yes it is

i don't have words for the torture she went through..
and her malik is listening to her..
He got interested in her story

she feels safe with him..
Can't blame her after what she been through

he allowed her to move in garden..
He felt it is really hard for her to remember all these stuff

and she is forming bond with padmini too..
She is the only one closest to mother figure


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