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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Superb start..congo on New Story..u know.. whats more catchy here..Rk.. lolz.. they way he was Moving around in Madhu's lil finger.. its unbelievable.. hahaa..ofcourse.. we never knew of Rk who listen to others.. lolz !keep Writing..if u do pmz.. then pm me too..


yup a different sweet rk after all madhu is gundi here 😃
will do thnx
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb start felling bad for rishabh


can understand
thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Nice start dear👏


Oops...Madhu bullying rk...it's always rks right
I like this new concept

Poor...rk he had to brought her ice cream for three times
"Mard ko dard nahin hota"that's a superb dialogue😃😆
And she had an audacity not to thank him and justifying herself
Wow...Madhu quite hypocrite


She even blow the dirt on him but he reacted with a smile
Hmm... Mr Kundra what is in your mind???!!!



Update soon
Please pm me when you update



glad u liked
let's see what actually Mr kundra wants 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
hope you guys will enjoy next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2 -



" How could you do that ? ..we are together for almost six months..how could you cheat ? "

Madhu looked at Pritam furiously ...she wants to beat him black and blue but still deep down in her heart she is hoping her boyfriend will say he didn't cheat ...all just mistake ...he was not kissing that Neha but that witch was forcing him ...but no he was just stand there quietly ...surprisingly she didn't see any guilt or shame on his face even after cheating on her ...

" you said you liked me then how could you..."

" yes I liked you ...I liked you a lot but you are not like what I thought you would be . " he cut her off annoyingly ..." You know I liked you at first sight I thought you are a beautiful cute girl but your nature uff you are too traditional too annoying for my choice ..."

Madhu looked at him shocked how bluntly he talking bad about her ...

" how much could you talk ...thak thi nehi ho kya ? par mein thak jata tha ...pritam yeh Pritam woh urgh no one can stop your non stop blabbing ..do you know how much I tried to tolerate that ..." he made a annoying face as if remembering those days when she was talking and he was listening quietly ...there she thought he loves her talking ...

" not just it why do you have to know everything about me huh? you are my girlfriend not my guardian that I have to tell everything ... Pritam kaha ho ? Tum waha kyun gaye ? Don't drinks ...Don't smoke ahh I'm just fed up ..."

" I was doing those because I was always worried for you ...those things I did because I cared for you jerk ..." she gave a punch on his chest ..." you are an idiot "

" yes you are right I'm an idiot ...an idiot that got trapped with a girl like you . What did you say how could I do this after almost six months ...then just tell me what you just gave me in these months ...hell you never comfortable kissing me forget about sleeping ... I'm not some monk "

" Trishna was so right about you.. I should have never gotten in a relationship with you ...you disgust me I'm better off without you ...I'm breaking up with you ..." she wipe away her tears and was about to go but he pulled her back harshly ...

" Excuse me you are not breaking up but I'm ...Pritam is dumping you ...and by the way who are you thinking yourself ...you should be thankful that I was with you this long ...no man in his sense can tolerate you that much time ..."

with such horrible words he left leaving a hurt and angry Madhu behind ...his last words keep ringing in her ear ' no man in his sense can tolerate you '

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" Here comes our class beauty " Sikky said dreamily in exchange get a slap from Dipali..." stop before Madhu beat you to dead "

Sikky at once looked down as he knows Dipali is right ... he still remember her beating when he had proposed her with ice cream but it backfired as he gave strawberry flavour which caused her to go to hospital as she is allergies to strawberry...

Madhu sat quietly with Trishna giving dead glare to the couple who is sitting before them ...her ex jerk and Neha ...She was about to hit them with. a book but Trishna stop her at time ...

" What are you doing ? get a grip Madhu . You said you got over him ..."

Madhu took her hand back ... yes she told that but its not that easy ...more of all he insulted her ...even after one month of their break up his words keep hunting her ...is she that unbearable ? ...no she can't easily let go of this ex jerk ...

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She was returning home from college not really watching where she walking as she was busy on her phone just then a truck was coming before her ...she was too shocked to move ...but just then someone pulled her harshly causing them to fall on ground ...

She closed her eyes tightly ..." Madhu hey you OK ...open your eyes " he was about to slap her again when she mumbled slowly ...

" am I in heaven or hell ...I should be in heaven I was always a good child ...Mama I love you I'm sorry I eaten all cookies that you make ...I'm just so sad that I couldn't eat ice cream before I died ..." she start crying bitterly still not opening her eyes ...

Rishab smile looking at her amusingly...' This mad girl will never change '

" hey get up you are in hell and now its time for your punishment..."

Instantly she opened her eyes " its cheating its can't be ... I'm a good chi... "

She stop looking at the person before him ...Rishab her punching bag , her one and only bully guy...

" hey you ok ..." he asked concerned as she stop talking..." do you hurt somewhere ?..."

she nodded her head ...

" where ? " he start checking her head to toe but she point towards his elbow where blood is coming out ...

" oh ..its nothing ..." let's call a taxi for you ...he called one but she held his hand and dragged him with her ..

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" don't worry its just a small cut " nurse told her seeing her worried face ...she nodded little still not convinced ...Rishab held her hand saying he is fine


" you shouldn't have done that " she finally said what was bothering her ...because of her carelessness he could have got hurt she not liking it " why did you save me ..."


" I would rather hurt than let you get hurt ..."

She looked surprised at his words.. this is first time actually he talking with her . Every time she would bother or say tease him but he never said anything ...all people are scared of him it can't be true that great Rishab Kundra is scared of Madubala Malik or the rumour is true ...he has a crush on her ?
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Lovely update..
Madhu broke up with her bf..
Glad.. That moron doesn't deserve her...

Hehe.. Rishab saved her from death at the correct time like a hero.. Madhu was worried that rk got hurt.. I like her innocent mature.. I'm in hell or heaven.. That was funny..
Is that right ...?? Rk has crush on her..

Waiting for the next part..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Awesome update,
loved it,
Pritam cheated Madhu,she broke up with him,
Rk saved Madhu,Madhu is worried that becoz of her he got hurt,
he has crush on her that's why he didn't said anything when she bullied him,
want to read Rk's pov,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Good u did break up of Pritam n Madhu.. 😉
Madhu is rkz crush..aww so cute 😛
Awesome part
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
👏AWESOME UPDATE...madhu should get over her ex n show she is better off than with him ...n start seeing rk in different light n slowly gradually rks crush should turn to love and madhu also to see the love...dont stop please do continue...it is a great concept v rk is behind madhu n madhu is bullying...v nice...HAPPY NEW YEAR...TO YOU N ALL THE FORUM READERS.⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Thank God Madhu broke with that jerk Pritam, he does not deserve Madhu.
Rishab the saviour came and saved her.
Madhu is worried because he hurt his elbow.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Could you please PM me.

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