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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello sweeties cuties dearies...a thought came into my mind and I pened it down..
Since it is the birthday month of magicalmirage aka rachana Di and my most fav writer cum my chemistry bak bak reader šŸ˜‰ (oh dear yes it's u...aaniya šŸ˜† ) evil angle..M dedicating my first one shot on IF to both of u 😊 ...
..SATURATED COUPLE..


God's angel on the earth, watching all around and checking whether saturation in population on the earth is completed or not??
And God's angel has found out that saturation is not been complete yet!. So angel is gonna do something now..
In Mumbai at Rk mansion,
Superstar Rk is drinking his 10th brandy shot and thinking himself being unsaturated. All people of his surrounding had been saturated and their branches also have been out quite a time now..even bittuji is saturated with that noodles hairy Roma. So Rk is gonna do something...
Mental Asylum, Agra..
All patients hv found their saturated mate in the asylum itself except for one.. MADHUBALA..even her so called bua n mom hv been saturated..sadly she became MADbala bearing this pain. So she is gonna do something...
(God's angel- oh! So these two have not been saturated yet..hmm)
Suddenly Rk took his plain's key and Dan Dana Dan he reached Agra..and suddenly an electro-magnetic is formed which attracts Rk towards room no 420..Due to air tight room, electrons present in the room began to do zig Zag motion...and then suddenly all the electrons are lined up by that force which is coming toward them..
After sometime Rk reached at the window of room no 420..and immediately Madhu yanked him to herself.. before Rk could compromise himself, he felt some rose petals on his lips. Yes Madhu had slammed her lips to his lips and was kissing him passionately..AGAIN.AND... AGAIN...AND AGAIN AND AGAIN...
God's angel(while thinking)... finally saturation on the earth has completed...




Sorry for making Madhu MADbala.. 😳..agr pasand Na b aaye to tamatar, ande b chlenge ok..as M a Besharam mbian.. šŸ˜†
Plz like n cmnt..
note- saturation is a chemistry word. When all valancies of carbon joints with hydrogen, it is called saturated carbon..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow!! What an os...ā­ļøā­ļø
Saturation 🤣🤣
Real chemistry mixed with romance wala chemistry...
Everybody were saturated except these Rk-Madhu...and the way hehe..
Electro magnetic force attracting Rk towards Madhu..hehe...wah!!!
Loved it...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful os ...
Madbala and drunkard rk...nice couple
Always we thought of thier chemistry and never thought of the "chemistry" in it's sense🤣
Nice work dear
The angel must be a chemistry teacheršŸ˜†
And rishbala attracted with eachother by electromagnetic force😃
Madhubala became madbala by not being saturated ...šŸ˜†

Good work
Keep writing
Thanks for pm

Thank you very much for the dedication

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS
Loved it
Do write more on Rishbala
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Posted: 7 years ago
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unress !!

aww.. thankyou so much for the dedication.. :)

and yes, am fan of ur witty sense of humour, ur hindi words, and Ofcourse Ur Chemistry translation.. lolz..!

hahaa.. the angels was looking out for saturation.. lolz..
and i was thinking all kind of possible meaning of the word.. hahaa..

ok..i love this part more in the entire os..
u can ask what ?
anyways i am going to say..
i love how u showed Rk..
rk & brandy.. always comes in handy.. lolz..

aww.. poor rishbala.. the unsaturatured couple..
but thankfully our writer Adeeba ji, as Provided the much needed saturation for them.. !

and So kiss hun.. !
let me make a equation then..
kiss privacy ------> (in presence of molten hotness) gives rise to new Lil lil atoms, molecules & compounds.. lolz.. hehehee..

superb..loved it..

plz..write more..
and convo too with ur Momentarilly hindi words.. i love it..

thanks for dedication dear :)
feeling myself to fly high in sky.. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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God.. I can't stop laughing...
That's why people say god always do right things only...
Loved Rishbala's chemical bonding oops I meant loved their uniting..
Nice OS dear.. Waiting to read more from you..
& congrats for your first story..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Agirl12

Wow!! What an os...ā­ļøā­ļø

Saturation🤣🤣
Real chemistry mixed with romance wala chemistry...
Everybody were saturated except these Rk-Madhu...and the way hehe..
Electro magnetic force attracting Rk towards Madhu..hehe...wah!!!
Loved it...



Was thinking about carbon n came rishbala into my mind..
Thank you dear for liking n commenting:-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Wonderful os ...

Madbala and drunkard rk...nice couple
Always we thought of thier chemistry and never thought of the "chemistry" in it's sense🤣
Nice work dear
The angel must be a chemistry teacheršŸ˜†
And rishbala attracted with eachother by electromagnetic force😃
Madhubala became madbala by not being saturated ...šŸ˜†

Good work
Keep writing
Thanks for pm

Thank you very much for the dedication



Glad Di u like their chemistry.. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you dear for liking n commenting:-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

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loved it
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Thank you dear for liking n commenting:-)

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