RISHBALA FF: Wrong number, part 15 updated on feb - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice prologue
Waiting to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Congrats for your first story,
waiting for prologue,
continue soon
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THANKYOU dear, prologue updated.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--


Congo on ur first story jeni !
So happy for the new start..
cs is so impressive !

and the cover is beautiful !
and the Prologue .. wow..
nadhu collage one..
Rk.. well.. the Rk one !! lolz..
waitimg for further !

cont. soon..
thanks fr pm :)


THANKYOU dear, am looking forward for your response... cover pic is Given by LovelyUmang5.
yes madhu is a college student and Rk..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice prologue..

Waiting for Rishbala's first meet..
Update soon ...
& pls pm me whenever you update dear..


THANKYOU dear, About first meet it will take time
. i will pm u for sure dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

Awesome prologue,
waiting for the updates,
continue soon


THANKYOU dear, part 1 will be updated tomorrow,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Very nice prologue

Waiting to read more

THANKYOU so much dear for ur pictures and command
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Posted: 7 years ago
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WRONG NUMBER:
Kundra Mansion Outhouse(7.50am):
Rk freshenup and gets ready to meet bittuji in living room hoping to get a positive answer from his friend, first time his life happening is out of his hand after his dad's death. he comes out of his room climbing down the stairs eyeing bittuji carefully as he knows Bittuji sensed his presence. reaching the last steps he moved towards bittuji who is seated in a single seater sofa. Rk goes and seated in the place opposite to him, both waited for the other to start the conversation. each minute of silence made Rk more restless..
After a good 1min Rk cleared his throat to make bittuji look at him
RK: what happened, did u get to know anything about it.
Bittuji: wo... chief wo... am trying to...Rk: say it straight what happened. any improvements?
Bittuji: chief we are trying, our mens are on the job.. anytime soon we willeven before he complete Rk gets anger and started to shoutRk: SOON? how much more time... "Time" bittuji we dont have time... its already 3 months...
In their heated conversation they missed a intruder entering through door and stopped seeing angry Rk. Both looked at eachother to end the coversation for now. Rk looked at intruder as if asking the reason on him coming, understanding the meaning of his look
Patil: Rk Sir, Breakfast is ready radha mam called you..
Rk: ok we are coming and dont forget to knock the door next time.leave now
Patil: yes sir, the oldman leaves immediately not able to see the changed Rk.
After patil left Rk turned to buttuji and asked him to keep updating about the improvements.. both left to Mansion Rk with frown on his face knowing what's going to come...
Kundra Mansion(8am):
Rk and bittuji enter's kundra Mansion where radha kundra is waiting for them, seeing them entering she moves to dinning table all seated on their regular places. servants served them and left from them as per radha's order. breakfast is now a days a silent affair no one spoke except greeting eachother. Right from the day of his return from Australia before 3month Rk is not himself or no one has seen old Rk who is always happy and never leaves a chance to be with his family now he is avoiding his family staying in Outhouse with bittuji alone, radha sees him only during breakfast.. after breakfast Rk was about to leave when Radha: Rishu, i want to speak with you knowing what is coming Rk took a deep breath to keep his cool and turned towards radha, bittuji left from there to parking lot.
Rk: mom i know what you want to talk about but not now. Radha: ok not now then when? why u r like this rishu. atleast come back to Mansion. she goes near him and holds his hand as if pleading him and her eyes are teary. he looks at her for a brief second and turns around withdraw his hand from her hold not able to face his mothers questioning eyes, without saying a word moves out of the Mansion in long strides to parking lot where bittu is waiting for him to go to shoot.. he feels peace only in his work his acting career.. which makes him forget everything once before the camera..

Delhi university campus (8.50am):
madhu and her friends walks into campus which is 5 minutes from hostel<img src="http://img.india-forums.com/images/600x0/401584-drashti-dhami-in-jdj7-launch.jpg" alt="" />
Ria: Madz, why we are here. i thought we are going to canteen am feeling hungry..
Madhu: Ria tell me a time when you are not hungry?
Trishna: its not alone ria am also feeling hungry madz..
Madhu: see who is speaking the diet queen.class is going to start
Trishna and Ria: if u have woken up earlier na we would have had our breakfast by now.. always dreaming about her prince.
madhu: trishna and ria u both r drama queens.ok after class lets go. they were about to enter the class when dipali and tasha come there. dipali classmate of madhu always irritate madhu and ria.such a bimbo falls for every next man who is handsome and rich, even wants to date Rk so she want trishna friendship to reach him but trish knows her intension.. dips: trish why u r with this villagers they are not of our status...

madhu and friends are getting angry and trishna was about to blast them but before she continue they saw teacher coming to class so all left the place postponding the world war which was about to start for now. the three sit on the right side first row their usual place madhu next to window then trish and ria , after 30 minutes of class ria cant hold back her hunger so open her mini chat shop which she always carry in her bag... she starts to eat making little sound, madz and trish also joins the feast. suddenly madhu sees that the teacher was about to turn so she snatch the packet from ria's hand and throws it to her left.

where dipz and tasha are busy talking about their boyfriend dipz 14th boyfriend and tashas 5th. something fall on there desk they turn to see the crushed packet and takes to see what it is but stops hearing teachers sound"MISS DIPALI AND MISS TASHA WHAT YOU BOTH THINK YOU ARE DOING IN CLASS" both started to say something but teacher"DONT GIVE EXCUSES GET OUT OF MY CLASS."

when they both are crossing madhus gang they see trishna and ria were trying hard to control their laugh and madhu winking her eyes at dips giving a victory smile...
after that the class went in peace after the class gang came out and goes to canteen to fill there stomach as next hour is free hour... all three takes a corner table and takes they phones out to switch on as it is prohibited inside the class to see any notification.. later they ordered some sandwich and having it when trish phone starts to vibration she quickly open the message her eyes start to twinkle and she was hiding the small smile on her face but the other two notice it

Madhu: hey trish who is it? trish corrects her expression and says nothing maa's message asking about my sundays plan.. and she start to eat her sandwich looking down.. But the other two devils notice everything and narrow their eyebrows like what is there to smile in it? they finish off their late breakfast and goes to next class..

PRECAP: MADHU TURNS CBI AND RK IN SHOOT

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Nice prologue
Quite impressive
Rk in his gym room doing exercises,a gift for eyes ... literally drooling thinking about the scene
And our queen in bed thinking about his hero in bike but his face in blurr
And the Dream was ended by two devil's ,her friends😆.and that to in a nice way
Waiting for next part
Please pm me whenever you update



Edited by magicalmirage - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Congratulations for becoming a writer.
Welcome dear.
Like the characters n prologue.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Nice prologue

Quite impressive
Rk in his gym room doing exercises,a gift for eyes ... literally drooling thinking about the scene
And our queen in bed thinking about his hero in bike but his face in blurr
And the Dream was ended by two devil's ,her friends😆.and that to in a nice way
Waiting for next part
Please pm me whenever you update





THANKYOU dear, next part will be updated tonight

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