Oh girl this will be the cause of my death one day.Like always I wanted you to write more.😭
So coming to the update:
That was totally AMAZING.
Means I don't know how but you writing always attracts me.
I am not a fan of Rishbala neither have I watched that serial but from your writing na I am in love with your stories.
They are totally Mind blowing and totally with new concepts.
Hats off to your writing by me.👏👏
Okay so let me write about the update now else I will continue praising you.😆
RK is beast but totally enchanting one.
He is protective, danger, pain and the cure at the same time.
How you created such a mysterious an awesome character?😲😃
Madhu is totally unaware about her effect of RK.
BTW I liked the water scene. Nice one.
Yes RK she is an innocent seductress... for you at least.😆
Then the canteen scene.
I understand RK's insecurity or fear.
It is natural for a guy like him to think like this.
Then Madhu is also right at thinking like that.
RK's colors when change you don't even realize.
Then comes the way he tried to cheer her up.
Honestly I think RK is sex obsessed.😆😆
See I don't know how you take it but honestly that way he acts reflects this only.
And you know what I think is if the things are in his hand he will be in bed with madhu 25 days a month.
Means man she just left his room in Goa some hours ago and he again just asking her "Are you sore?" Oh man like seriously!! That was hilarious for me at least.
And moreover he asks again "FAINTLY?" RK must be kidding everyone.😆
OK after that comes his out of world type of Q. on the bed in Mumbai.
Means anything huh anything RK?
Okay now on a serious note:
Rk and Madhu both were right at night.
Rk can't control his desires and Madhu can't just have sex with the presence of family.
But Madhu what was the need of going with Randhir??
Like RK I am also feeling bad and angry.
Rk bro. I have a suggestion for you.
When she comes back don't shout on her neither show any reaction. Just ignore her. How can she just do that? N bro. (RK) honestly I think that Madhu is a little right on her spot too. So no need to take revenge by telling Mohan and Radha about the escape of Randhir and Madhu.
Oh come on Aaniya how can you leave on such a dreadful climax scene. Honestly your climax will cause my brain to explode. My mind is full of several thoughts. N seriously the thoughts are becoming really really wild.
This line:
"As he plans his moves to get even."
It is giving me terribly bad vibes. What are you going to do RK??
Just tell me when are you going to update.
Please please please update it soon.
I just want to read it.
At the end, it was really a thrilling update for me.
Beginning with soft romance, then Madhu's disappointed and RK's style of cheering up and then last but not the least madhu going with Randhir and dismissing RK.
So totally an entertaining one.
Totally Mind blowing.
Now cont. soon or else I will go crazy thinking what will happen??
Thanks for the PM.
P.S: I don't know what have I written. I am not mad trust me but your writing turns me on.😆