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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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PROLOUGE-

A girl sitting on zoola and looking at moon. Moon was shining and glowing like new bride."why god me?" a girl asked herself.
She looked at the girl sleeping in her godi and staring at her. Today sonu became 2 yrs old. The same eyes, same attitude, same skin colour also. "where are u rishabh?" the girl chanting. Still looking at moon she said." U know rishabh today our sonu said 1st word and that also 'PAPA'"..
"She total likely you. Asia lagta hi nahi aap hamare saath nahi hai.."
"Aaj wo 2 saal ki ho gayi hai. " "Wo hamare pass hai na issliye asia lagta hi nahi ki aap hamse dur chale gaye hai." "godji, plzz unhe hamesha kush rakhna.. aur hamare saare sukh une aur n unke saare dukh hume de dena..."
"Kal unki film release hone wali hi... usko bhi hamesha ki trah successful karna.." "Hamari yahi dua hai" and girl closed her eyes and prayed...

Edited by MGRMFFS - 7 years ago

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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CHARATER SKETCH...
Rishabh Kundra-

A film superstar. arrogant, aggressive in nature, come from very rich family loves like to play girls feelins..😡, toally jerk and cansenova, have bitter past, have a wife but not told world...

Madhubala Rishabh Kundra-

A lolvy wife and good mother, very kind harted, teacher from occupation, in past director in bollywood

but due some reasons quit, now living small remote village...

Sonali Kundra-

2 yrs old rishabh andmadhu's daughter. Called sonu lovelingly...

Edited by MGRMFFS - 7 years ago

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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iNdEx

prologue and character sketch- 1ST and 2ND post

part 1 - Page 2

part 2 - Page 4

part 3 - Page 6

part 4 (I) - Page 8

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cutical

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Nuce star continue soon rk cansnova n madhu is his wife h a they had baby sonu
Wy rk cheated her nice update soon

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Wow nice start..

Madhu Is rk's wife but he is keeping that relationship secret..

They have a daughter too..

What's his past.. ??

Update soon..

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varsha joshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

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rk and madhu are married and have daughter
is rk aware of this ?
y they are leaving seprately ?

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harini

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Interesting prologue and character sketch,
Rishbala are married and they have a daughter too but outer-world don't know any of this,
continue soon

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

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intriguing prologue..
good luck with this story !! :P

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Interesting start!

RK hide Madhu from the world and they are far for 2 years!

Poor baby!

Continue soon!

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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PART-1

Madhu just took the sonu and come inside the small her house. She placed sleeping sonu on bed and go to cupboard took the changing pair of shorts and changed into in bathroom , then she came next to sonu side & kissed her on forehead and get into left side of bed. After closing eyes she just remembering the past of the beautiful days where both were happy and their angel.

AT SAME TIME,
RK just came after finishing his shooting and gone to room to sleep . He drunk too much just to forget madhu and his past. Though he drunken sleep was far away from his eyes. So he just got up from bed and gone to the portrait of madhu where she smiling like angle. He just touched the smile of his sweetheart and faintly smiled but remembered the important incident of his life which devastated their little world and in agony screamed" why you betrayed me jaan? akhir meri galti kya hai?plzz wapas aa jao. hamari angel to chali gayi per to tum kaha ho??? kaise jiu mei tumahere bina? Ye zindi bhi pather ban gayi hai? tumhi ab isse ruarb kar sakti ho. Mai adhura hui tumahre bina... Wapas aa jao jaan..." and scraemed"Madhuuu..."

here in SHMILA,
Madhu just jollted from her sleep and wishpered" Rishab..." "Aap thik ho na? Gofji plzz dont give him any pain" she just prayed and slept mumering "Rishab aapko kuch nahihoga. Mai hui aapke saath"

and just like someone heard his screamed Rishab stop scerming madhu's name and staring serching gor her... He couldn't find her but like somewhere madhu is wating for him soothed her mind and he gone tobed for ctaching some sleep...

IN SHMILA,
Following next morning sonu just opened her eyes and started searching for madhu. Madhu gone to take bath but after hearing crying sound of madhu she just faith some towel and rapped it around her wetbody. and come running to take her sweetu pie sonu. After seeing Madhu, sonu stop crying and extened her arm to take her by mommy, Madhu take her in godi and started talking" Kya hua bacha kyon itna ro rahi ho? Meri pyeeri sonu mai to yaha hi thi. Bacha isse rote nahi. mama hai na aapke pass. Mommy to bath lene gayi thi. Sonu ko bhookh lagi hai. do minute ro ha... and she just undo her towel knot and started feeding to sonu and sonu attacked it eagerly on it. it is just like sonu was very hungry and waiting when her mom give her food...

AT SANE TIME IN MUMBAI,
Rishab justwoke up with bad hangover and "aaa$$$..."he just started scerming...
"Bittu ji, bittu ji" Rishab just called bittoji in his room with high voice. Bittoji came running to rishab room and said" aapne bulaya chief." "Ha, wo mera limbu pani kaha hai?" ny head is throbbing very badky." "Mai abhi bhejata hui chief" bitto told and run out of room for his life. After drinking Lemon water Rishab's headache reduced and again he looked to madhu potrait and said" Good Morning jaan. Aaj tumahre good luck ki jaroot hai. Mera film ka premire hai. Miss u jaan. plz jaldi wapas aa jao."

Just then Trishna come to Rk mansion to meet rishab and told bitto ji to call him." Sir, trishana maam aayi hai niche. wo puche rahi hai kya wo upar aa sakti hai?" Bitto ji said to Rishab." hmmm... usko bethme ke liye kaho... aur use kaho ghar ka saara kaam wo kare"
just told rk and go to bathroom to take his bath...

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