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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

updated... finally !!
the story is completed..🤣

now only 3 ongoing story..

1.Sinful nights
2.Love in Disguise
3. Chahaat

will update Sinful Night In this week, Abd After That Love in Disguise.. by This Weekend !
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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Part-2 On Page-23
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Checkmate
Part-3

"Falling in love with someone isn't always going to be easy, anger, tears and laughter it's when you want to be together despite it all. That's when you truly love another"

"Am sorry Madhu !" Trishna walks across the room, walking near madhu, who is sitting on window still, in white salwar with mehendi decorated hand, her Back resting against the window wall, her eyes Blankly looking out of the window. Trishna touched Madhu's hand gently, as She is seeing Madhu for the first time in the whole week, after knowing Everything which has taken place. Malik had Grounded Madhu, seizing all communicating media from her. Today was her Mehendi & Haldi, and Thus the only cause she got to talk to her.
"Its all cause of me. I shouldn't have introduce U to Him, that cheat !" Trishna Spoke softly in grief-stricken voice, making Madhu look at her With faint smile.
"Don't be Trish.. There is something called Fate !" She spoke, her voice distant & so is her eyes too.
"Why are u agreeing for this marriage Madhu. What Rk did was wrong, but what u agreed to is even more Wrong. That Man & his family.. They're typically odd.. Are u getting what am saying ?" Trishna Pleaded madhu with her eyes to rethink on her Decision. Everything is messed up big time. There is only a day left for the marriage to take place.

"Dad had Chest pain & he took my words to get married to the man he wants. He said i have disgraced him, and the only way to pull him off is this marriage." Madhu Spoke robotically. Now, there is nothing which matters to her. Her future seemed Uncertain & dark to her, but still she would try, Like the way She was going to Try before She met Rk. Rk ! That man is beautiful dream in her life.

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Rk buried his face more deep in his palms which is covering his face. He has been living in hell since past few days, Since that day.. That day when everything was going to make up but Unfortunately it shattered in bits. He had never thought his Action would have this drastic reaction. He had never thought that it could be affect madhu. If he had any ounce of idea, he wont never ever risk his relation with madhu. He has loved her truly, it was not facade, but That wish to get even with Arthav, It had took all his rationality & now He is Standing alone, wretched in the Coarse way of his life.

Madhu has been cut off from all networking site, Trishna has blocked him too, he has been to Madhu's place a hell lot of time but they Had never let him met madhu & the worst part, they are getting her married, and he is not able to do anything. He is becoming Mad Second by second !
But he wont give up, if he has ruined everything, he would set Things too, but he cant do that alone, he needs madhu, he need to talk to her once, make her understand, and for that he has to think of something to get in her home to talk to her alone.

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"Keep these flowers & fruits in store room upstairs, and here is ur payment. Take it & go !" Arthav, Kept a bundle of Note over the table & walks out of the hall, while 5-6 men Directs their Steps Towards Store room with the baskets of fruits & Flower, among whom One of Them is Rk in the Disguise of Work Men. Reaching upstairs, He Gave the basket of fruits & some money To Those Men, Parting his ways with them, he Straight away Rush to Madhu's room. The time for Which he has been waiting through is here, and He felt his heart beating at marathon Speed, Before Approaching her.

Gaining courage He Opens the Door, and Slips inside Closing it, to welcome the Sight of Madhu Sitting on Floor in salwar suit, her Knees propped up, her arms wrapped around her knees with her Head resting upon her Knees, and A huge Suitcase with Packed things are kept on the bed. The sight Twisted & crush his heart dry, like never before. Never in his dreams, he has thought the sight would give him Raw shiver.

"Madhu.." His Legs involuntarily moves towards where she was sitting, near her bed, as he kneeled down in front of her, waiting for her To raise her head & look at him once, he wanted to gaze in her soulful eyes, and get assurance that everything will be all right.

The day next is Her Marriage, and For once She felt the need to spend time with herself, Shedding the tears of agony for the Last time. Everything took a drastic turn, people says it right, something is inevitable. She was drowned in her melancholy when she hears a Soothing voice, a Voice Who has Been a crucial part of her life & then the Voice Fade Into Somewhere as She felt A loving touch on her arms & head.

Rk looks at her with baited breath, as He watch Madhu raising her head, Looking at him with lost looks, Her face is dry & pale, like a scrunch leaf, she looks weak too, she has lost Weight & he feels terrible, What has He gotten her into, He Has Destroyed both of them with his own Hands.
"Madhu !" He breath out, as he Leaned over her, Wrapping his arms around her petite frame, embracing her, hugging her close to his heart. He has never felt this stirring of feeling before, its like his whole life is Depends on her.
"Rk !" He heard her Mumbled, as she tries to Push him, coming out of his embrace, feebly through.
"Why are u here again ?" She Whispered, trying to keep her expression blank but failing miserably in it.
"I have always Loved u Truly & deeply Madhu, It was always us & no one else. Please stop all these. Plz don't do this to us, plz madhu" Rk took her Hands in his as He Looks at her With palpable eyes, emitting out his Guilt, sorry, and Need for her.
"Then why did u do it ?" She Asked Looking at him, as The tear droplets managed to escape out of her eyes.
"I was blinded madhu. I was fool to do it, i never thought it Would create problem between us !" Rk fumbles with words, there is no proper Explanation for his deed, in that slip of moment he let his Grudges take over his love.

"U have let down everything Rk.. My love, My trust.. Ur promises.."
"Plz.. Madhu.. No.. Give me a chance" Rk cuts her off, holding her hand tightly.
"Everything ends here Rk.."
"I can Do anything for u.. Plz don't say like this." He raise her hand, wiping of her tears.
"If u wanna do anything for me, then just leave & never turn back at me !" Madhu Murmured, making the blood drained from his face, but its the truth. She has once tried to Led her steps in the way to met him, but She Hasn't got anything except betrayal, now she is ready to surrenders herself to her fate. Good or bad, She would Know It would be cause of her & herself alone.

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*After a Couple of Days*

"Put The saree's end over ur Head.. How can it Slip off !" An elderly lady, Meera, Scoffs, sitting on Dining table, along with His Husband, and her Son Sultan, as Madhu quietly serves the Food to the trio.
"Sorry !" Madhu mumbles, Continuing her works of serving.
"U are not in City anymore, this is village & for the last time i am saying Behave urself !" Meera scowled, as she tore a piece of Roti, and Put it in her mouth, dipping in curry, While Madhu Step back Quietly, standing like a servant who is made to attend the Need of her in-laws. Its the 5th day of Madhu being in her in-laws House after The marriage with sultan, and none of the day is any better, no matter how much she tries to Fits amongst them, still she is the one to stand out.

"I have told u meera, Not to bring City Girl in home, but u was insistence." Roopam, meera's husband Cribs, as he Stuff Rice in his mouth.
"Really then, which Of ur Village people were agreed for the marriage ? None !" Meera snorted, as she looks at Madhu.
"And U, How many times would i need to Tell u that We like spicy food, put more Spices while u Make it, we have enough money, unlike u & ur family."

Madhu stares at Meera, before down casting her eyes. These people are so different from her own family, they are full of malice & seemed like They don't mingle well with Anyone, and the way they are talking, it appeared that they Wanted village girl as their daughter-in-law, but none of the family among their relative & friend agreed to give their Daughter to Sultan. Inspite of having so much Money & property, They lack humanity & the ideal family values ! Perhaps they wanted a puppet in name of Daughter-in-law.

"Sultan, She is ur responsibility, Make her learn everything. I don't like to be bother to teach her every single thing." Meera Looks at Sultan, to which he gave a curt nod. That man is spineless, he Does What his parents tells him to do ! And like every other day, they did the dinner, pointing on her, discussing about her.

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"Date ?" Sultan asked in Stone like voice, as he climb the Bed, on which Madhu was Sitting at the edge, curling to herself, with her heart in her throat, like every other night.
"4th" she uttered in a small voice, embarrassed as well as Scared.
"U are bleeding ?" Sultan asked without any mannerism looking at her, much to her horror.
"Yes" madhu replied Closing her eyes, hugging herself more tightly. Firstly she is ashamed to talk about the girly suffs to a stranger and Secondly she is plainly lying !
"Day after is ur pagphere, ur dates will be over. We'll consummate our marriage then." Sultan said as he made himself comfortable on bed pulling the blanket Over him, while Madhu Sits there afix, gulping the lump formed in her throat.
"Now sleep !" He gruffs, switching off the light of the room, leaving Madhu in darkness, just like her life is.

As the lights went off, Her vulnerability kicks in which she was trying to suppress within herself. She tried, She really tried to accept everything, to accept this marriage, her in-laws, the circumstance, but no one is favouring her. Madhu face palm herself, as Her Tears breaks out, she is miserable.

She tried to be Sultab's wife, In return expecting Some Understanding & respect from him, to built the relation with him, to relate with him in everything. He is not Rk, he can never be..! But all she asked is for some time & space to accept him in her life, but it Appeared that He don't want a life partner, he just wanted A Wife ! The definition of wife for him is the One female to Keeps his bed warm at night, and Fill the needs of his parents in day time.
In their first night, she Asked for Space giving the excuse of Long journey, tiring day & all, and reluctantly he agreed, to not make a issue with his newly wedded wife, though in that night itself madhu got the vibes, that he is not an understanding Man, he wont understand her reasonings ever, So the next day she faked a Lie that She is in her monthly, depending on which, she brought few days for herself, and each day has been greater hell for her, with the revelation of the true face Of Her in-laws. Meera is a cunning controlling lady, Roopam is a Downright pig looking for money everywhere & Sultan is their spineless puppet in the name of son.
There is no one to call as her own, her day starts with cribbing & bitching about every single things by her Mother & father in law, and Her night ends with Agonised tears in her sleepless eyes. She is breathing, but not living, She is simply a breathing corpse.

This is not the life she has ever thought of ! This is not the family she thought of ! This is not the place she wanted herself to be ! And She cant tell her pain to anyone either, her Parents has unburden her away, believing in the family, property & reputation of her in-laws. Her mother Has Gave her lecture to Get adjust in the family before sending her away, during bidaai.

And she genuinely tried to get herself fit in, but no one is there to embrace her with open arms. She feels hollow from inside, she is dying with every breaths she takes.

Madhu slowly, climbs off the bed stealthily walking out of the Room, moving Towards Bathroom. The Darkness of the Night, Tempts her to give in to the temptation, in that single week moment of the life. She cant go back, she has Left everything back, and she cant move on too, she is in the clutches of storm, she cant live like this, dying every single moment, and the only Option which stroke her mind in her weakness is to End her miseries. There is no one for her, and she is tired of trying to work it out, she tried to persuade herself that one day everything will be fine, But that one day Is Distant Away, And She Is too exhausted emotionally & mentally to Wait for that one day !!

Closing the Door of the bathroom, Madhu Takes out a sharp razor blade from the Shaving tool kit present there. In that one moment of Weakness, irrationality over took her senses, with shivering hands & welled up eyes, She runs the Blades over her fair wrist, opening up one of the green pounding vein, the Pulse, and Soon the Blood started tickling down her vein, draining out of her body, as she slides down against the Wall, Crying the Last cry of her life, surrendering herself to death.

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In the past midnight, Meera sleepily Walks out of her Room, heading towards the Common bathroom, wobbly walking with her eyes closed, she Grips the handle of the door to push it open but It didn't opened. She tried two more times before Switching on the lights, opening her sleepy eyes wide, she Focus on opening the door, when she saw red liquid like substance flowing out from the bathroom's creaked door. Her eyes grew wide & the first reaction she gave out is loud scream causing Sultan & Roopam to Rush to her side in minutes.

"Whats this ? And the door isn't opening too." Meera points at the blood, as Both the men Started Slamming against the door causing the lock of the door to break open, and Reveal the sight of Madhu sitting lifeless in the pool of blood & her slitted wrist.

"See what owes this city girl brought to us. I told u to not bring any city girl home cause she won't be able to get adjust with us" Roopam Gritted his jaws, looking at madhu's cold body menacingly.
"What should we do now ?" Sultan, as usual in stone like manner asked his parents.
"Let her die. Infact she must be dead by now !" Roopam snapped.
"No, if she died, It would result in police case, and our reputation would be at Stake, moreover the people Don't see us in good light & this incident would give them more to talk." Meera functions her Mind, as she Spoke Carefully.
"Sultan check if she is alive."

Sultan tip toed nearing her He held are other wrist checking for pulse.
"Low pulse !" He looks back at meera, for the order.
"Call maliks, take this baggage to hospital & leave her in their custody. Their daughter, they should handle !"

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*Some Hours Later*

"Rishu.." Radha Creaks the Door open, walking in the Dark room, switching on the Lights, her heart broke into millions of pieces seeing her disoriented son, lying on bed. The room is a mess, since the day Madhu got married, he has locked himself in the darkness of his room, cutting himself off from everyone, burning in the pain of lamenting, loss, repentance. He has forgot to live !!

"Rishu.. A girl is on call, she wants to talk to u." Radha Lightly runs her hand over Rk's head, urging him to open his blood red eyes.
"Madhu ?" He asked in a small hopeful voice Jerking, sitting on the bed.
Radha Shook her head in negative at the plight of her son.
"Someone name Trishna.."
"Trishna !" Rk whispered as he Immediately took the phone from Radha's hand. Trishna too had never really communicate with him after that fiasco though he had sent hundreds of messages begging her for madhu's info, but she never replied & when she is calling him now.. It must be something !

"Trishna.." Rk speaks over the phone in rushed coarse voice.
"I have done the biggest sin of my life by introducing to u Madhu Rk. I never knew u will be her death !"
Came the accusations of Trishna in enraged shaky voice followed by the heartfelt Sobs, but the word which made his world spins is the word "Death".
"Ma.. Madhu.." Rk stammered, in frozen voice with his mind going frozen. Death & Madhu, the two words is making him hollow from inside.
"Don't take her name from ur filthy mouth. She trying committing suicide, and is lying in hospital waiting to die" Trishna yelled from other end, making Rk staggered back onto the bed, the phone slipping off his hand, as his breaths choked, his heart contracts suffocating him. Madhu tried suicide ! She tried to kill herself ! Cause of him ! Him ! That was the moment of Sharp Explicit pain he Has Ever borne in his entire existence, knowing that his Beloved wants to leave the world & he is the reason for it !

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"How could madhu do this, i have grown her up malik, and there she is lying waiting for death" padmini Breaks down, burying her face In malik's Embrace, forgetting their wrath, they were in the moment of Lamenting for the loss of their only daughter. Madhu is their own blood, and they don't love her any less than Arthav, but they & their strict demeanour has Pushed her to the edge to killing herself.

"What the f**k are u doing here ?" Arthav yelled loudly, as soon as he spot Rk Storming through the corridor, marching towards the room where madhu is Admitted.
"Don't !" Rk Halts in his steps, raising his right hand at Arthav, his eyes wildly ferocious, like he has been coming crossing some Strom & brought the storm with himself, which forced Arthav to shut his mouth
"Am Taking madhu off From this village & Dare If Anyone Stops Me !" He said through his clenched jaws, as he raked his eyes from Arthav to Malik to Padmini. Madhu's in laws have already left the hospital handing over madhu to Maliks.
"NGO & Police is outside, incase u want to claim Madhu Legally !" Rk Said in Cold Harsh Tone, Before Walking to the ward where Madhu is. If he is responsible for Madhu's condition then maliks are too, cause they forced her into the relation. If madhu has been given proper time, She would be Able to sought out her feelings, her confusions, but they forced her in their rash decision.

He opened the door, his fearful eyes moves around the room before stopping on Madhu, he is scared that the sight of her being lifeless & dull would break everything in him which he has gathered to come back to her.
As his eyes finds her, his breath hitched, his heart skipped a beat. She is lying all pale, on the white dull sheet of the hospital bed, her face devoid of any sort of colour, her eyes closed with oxygen mask on her face, her left wrist improperly covered with a cotton bandage which is blood-soaked. She has lost a huge amount of blood, and the hospital too is not well equipped. At the moment, all he wants with his life is her breath, her previous breath, which he want to share till the day he stops breathing, himself !

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*Couple of Weeks Later*

"After finishing off this, only u will get to walk out of the room. Ok !" Radha Said in gentle but stern voice, as she place a plate of aloo paratha in front of madhu who is sitting on the bed, silently taking in her surrounding, before Looking up at Radha, Giving Radha a small smile. Radha caress her hairs lovingly before walking out of the room.
Madhu leans back against the headboard, her eyes staring at the retreating steps of Radha, the care she showers upon her, it made her nostalgic. Madhu took a deep breath looking around the walls painted in cream colour. She didn't thought that she would see the world again, see the colours again.. COLOURS in terms of life, she never thought she would smile again, but she did, just a second ago at Radha.

She has been living with Rk in his apartment in The city where he Works, and Rk's Parents Sometimes comes to visit them, and they don't showed any hesitancy in seeing madhu. It overwhelms her, that her parents only loves her, But Rk's Parents Loves, understand & Supports her too. She has had Always lacked to create this open, understanding & supporting bond with her parents. Rk has brought her back to life, fetching her from that deep purgatory, keeping her protected in his apartment away from the city, The lives, the issues, and her parents even unless she wanted to meet them. She was brutally pushed away by her own parents in the time when she needed them most, she has no grudges for it but the Hurt in her heart is deep, and the Bone chilling experience she had, it stopped her from communicating with anyone, though she has overheard Rk reporting to malik about her wellbeing.

"Hii !" The soft greeting broke her out of her thoughts, as she looks at the handsome but hesitating face, of Rk, sitting in front of her. She gaze at him, as she smiles softly at him. Its not too difficult to forgive, when the time is itself a great healer. Rk had made just one mistake, and the favour, expectation of her own family members, the hurt & betrayed feeling of her own heart, had led her into the horrible lane of life.
"Mom is making another & u haven't finished one even." He gently scolds her, as he tore a piece of paratha from plate, dipping it in curry, he extend it to her lips, feeding her, like he always does. It has became a habit for him to feed her, whenever he is with her.

"We have appointment with doctor in evening." He spoke to her, as his eyes flickered back to her wrist, which still had the raw mark of silt. She is healing, she has made through the worst, he was on verge of losing her forever, but by god's grace she survived, giving him his breathes & his life.
"Am fine Rk !" Madhu gently touch his hand, as she saw the same flickers of Agonised pain in his eyes.
"I know.. But sometimes it just.." Rk trails off, as he took her Hand in her, gently brushing his lips over her knuckles.
"My one mistake brought this to U !" He looks up at her, with the raw soulful eyes, not hiding his agony.
"It was a bad phase Rk !" She Said softly at she looks at him. Yes, its a bad phase for her, and she will never face it again, Rk has called for everything to get her divorced, breaking the last thread which held her to her past.

"I cant express what u means to me. All i want is to keep u to myself, hold u forever, seeing u breathing every second of my life, to cherish u forever. I beg for this right to You.. Marry Me Madhu !" Rk spoke solemnly looking at her, with her Right hand clasped between his two large palms & he is proposing her for the third time, after getting her back. The first time she heard him, she was shocked, the second time she heard the same she was apprehensive and the third time, when she is heard him say the Things again, she is hopeful !
"U will accept me ?" She whispered in disbelief, staring back at him with hope of life, cause all she knows is that a woman becomes invalid in the society once she get married or divorced.
"Will YOU accept me ?" He Asked in return causing the Tears to free flow her eyes which she was holding on, as she nods her head in positive, throwing her arms around his neck, opening the door of Love & Hope for herself & Him !

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Entangled in satin sheet over the soft mattress, he held her back against the bed pinning her hands by the side of her head with his both hands, as pressed his body more into her, overlapping her, burying his face in her bosoms, as he sensually plays with the bulge of her erect flesh on her breast, wrapping & rolling his tongue over it, gazing it with teeth, licking, biting, nipping, as She arched her back more, wanting him to devour her more as she felt the Building sensation inside her for the second time in row.
"Rk !" She moans, panting hard, as his hot lips left her breast letting her hang in between, carving for release. His fingers kept playing with her curves, As he drop a chaste kiss on her sweet lips before moving down on her Parting her thighs, while caressing her apex with his slight touch, making her groan. More than her he is frustrated to be inside her, for first time, after their legal marriage. He has dreamt of her, since the time he has grew serious about her, but destiny had other role to play.
"Ready ?" He asks her Breathing hard, locking his eyes with her, as he waits on the entrance of her. In response, madhu bites her lower lips rolling her head back on the mattress, her body more than eager to take him in.

Rk Hovers over her, as he ease himself into her in a quick move, making her Flinch at the invasion of her territory. Madhu grips the bed sheet in between her hands to let the feeling of pain & pleasure sink in her, as He Ease out of her, only to be back in her in swift movement.
"Madhu.. " he whispered breathlessly kissing her fuller mouth, urging her to open her eyes, he is Filled with Various emotions, and one of them is most prominent.
"U're virgin !" He breaths out the first thing, as she looks at him, lacing her fingers in his thick hair. He was Literally startled when he felt it inside her, and he was Elated too somewhere deep within spotting the red.
"Urs only !" Madhu whispered earnestly, a soft smile illuminating her lips, to be only his. A raw emotion crossed his eyes, as he buries his head in the crook of her neck.
"U have taken me there ! I love you !" He whispered against her neck, as he Started to move inside her, uniting the bodies & soul.

Before too he loved her, but he never knew the intensity of the love. Love was there, but it was not strong to fight for her, but Time taught him, How to be Strong, How to risk everything To hold her to himself, how to love her with his soul !
The Strom of the Love has Given CHECKMATE to the Breeze of his errant mind, his irrational revenge, and The Tough times of Their Lives !!

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Aaniya :)

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Res

Unres..

Amazing ending to an amazing story Aan⭐️..

You made me cry...

It was sooo emotional...

what rk did was wrong but his Love was beyond his revenge..

He just did a mistake but it changed their lives upside down..

But really.. I liked the way rk stands for her..

Her parents did more wrong that what rk did to her..

Malik said he played with madhu but his Love wasn't a play they didn't even try to listen him..

But if her parents had given her sometime they she could sort out with him before reaching in the verge of death ..

& Sultan & his family..They are really pigs😡

What they are thinking..?? Women are just machines..?

& that spineless pig sultan..

Shameless creature he is...

What he is thinking.. Wife is just for his & his Family's needs..??

Glad madhu act smart saying she is in her date..lolz.. I like it..

Poor madhu she tried to end her life & her in-laws just dumped her when she was fighting for her life..

& Rk...he was soo sweet.. His love is so intense so is madhu's..

He & his family helped her in the tough phase of her life..

& madhu gave him a more chance..yes, it wasn't tough for her to forgive him coz his Love & care for him washed away the small mistake he had done..

Mistakes are common & if no one was ready to forgive the other then their wouldn't be any couple exist in this world..

Madhu acts brave by forgiving him & of course he deserves it..

& now their life is not less than a heaven..

Loved the last part where Madhu is saying she is only Rk's😳...

Lovely story Aan..

Thanks for writing this & giving a happy ending.. 😃

Edited by aishu007 - 7 years ago

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pillowtalk

@pillowtalk

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Thank you for the updates loved them amazing updates

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dharsii

@dharsii

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Superb Update aani..
Loved it..
Arthav is too bad.
For his revenge,he spoiled madhu's life..
RK loves her truly..But situation was not in his side..
No way for him ,to explain about his ..
Madhu also didn't believe him.
And totally confused..
Her parents didn't give time for her..
IF they give..she will over come from that issue..and patchup with RK.
Sultan is spainless creature..
Have to kill his parents..
His mother is too bad...she wants madhu's death .
Finally RK came for madhu..
Rishbala married.. Superb..
Like that dialogue,"I am urs only"..
Happy end..
Thanks for pm..

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#156

awesome update yar...

Totally loved it

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Amazing update!

Loved how RK took his stand when he got to know about Madhu!

Poor Madhu, she has to go through all these things before getting her picture perfect life.

This part has everything: love, anger, tears, happiness...

Enjoyed it!

Thanks for the PM!

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Great ending

Finally they both are together & happy

Thanks for PM

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ROYALRED

@ROYALRED

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Finally finally u update it waiting for so long to it superb update loved its ending finally them become one thanks for pm that mind blowing story loved to read it one of best story