RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Lily30

Love the start👏

Eager for the next part.

Thank you for the pm😃

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Superbbb update dear...
totally loved Rishbala moments...
I hope he didn't do something foolish...
looking forward for next part...
update soon..

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

lovely story but rk is doing wrong totally wrong feeling bad for madhu

Originally posted by: Zarine_94

wow very beautiful story. I really like Trishna. How RK asks permission to hug or kiss Madhu is very very cute. Some of the scenes were very hot. I hope this is not a revenge plan of RK. Madhu undeserving of this and she trust RK, I hope he will not destroy her trust. Thanks a lot dear for the new story, waiting for next part

Happy birthday Deepti.

Originally posted by: dharsii

Happy B'day Deepti..

Superb update Aani.
I thought,the groom is Rk at first..
Trishna finds RK for Madhu..
After long time of friendship turn into love..
But RK is using her for revenge..
Oh No..will Madhu forgive him?
Poor madhu,,..
Eagerly waiting..
Update soon..

Originally posted by: UniquePrincess

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEEPTI AKA RM14 .May God Bless u..

Aani yaar Amazing one..I loved the whole ..
Honestly 1st I taught that Rk is the Groom but nah u kept a Twist, Yaar U made Rk and Madhu's bro as Enemy..Its definitely thrilling to read now.
This trishna na is surely doing a great matchmaker over here..
After reading the last line, I am getting nervous over here.
DARE U AANI,IF RK REVENGE MADHU,I am gonna kill u.
Yaar Madhu is sweet and she trust Rk , Rk should not break the Trust..
I so knew it someone gonna fall in love, But Rk is First here..
Tu story likhe aur INTIMATE Scenes na Ho,Aisa Ho sakta hai kya????? .
Can't believe yaar ,Both r in Fast mode doing it on Hotel and all.I can believe now but its Aani's story..lol..
Really loved this..Thrilling one..
Just can't wait for the Next part..
Thanks for this story and writing..Love u..God bless u.

Originally posted by: meera_02_82

Beautiful update 😊

Originally posted by: cutical

ya right but madhu have a self respect so after this madhu fully broken down do its veeter she leave him so he regret for hurting diplai cheated him so wy nt revegeing her wy madhu he is hypcarte hate rk nice plz di this time nt a open ending type nice updare soon also update chahat as well

Originally posted by: shree001

Happy birthday deepti...

Awesome thread aani...👏👏👏

Res for story..

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Awesome story...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Superb job aani...👏👏👏

I hate Madhu's parents...😡

she is only 20... if she don't want to marry then she don't...She has her own life...

and 12 years difference... is too big...

Thank God rk is not that person...

Trishna seems to be genuine friend ... i liked her...

Loved the way how rishbala relationship progressed!😉😊

Rk seems a guy with moral values...

I don't think rk is cheating with madhu...

Last part is too scary...

Is really RK going to avenge Madhu because of her brother... plzzz Nooo...

I don't want sad ending...plzzz...

Waiting for the next part...

Thanks for pm...😊

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Happy birthday Deepti...

Have a great day ...Enjoy...🥳

Awesome thread..😃

Res for comment on story...😳

Aaniya...congratzzz for becoming Sizzlers again...🥳..

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Awesome...really, loved this story so much...

Madhu and Rk's journey of love...wah!!..😳...It was so cute and so real lovestory...friend getting both's connection, and Madhu's inexperience, her hesitance, scare of parents...so real...

Their gradual change in relationship...slowly becoming intimate...I loved the first hug...how he asked it and she gave in...

But, last part scared me...revenge???...He really loves Madhu right...and is he thinking of revenging Atharva now through Madhu???😕...I am so scared...don't do anything wrong Rk...