RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Mikolingam

Fantastic , fabulous . Love the story line very much. Great start . Romance was well written. Madhu taking her time to accept RK. And RK not forcing her. Such an understanding between them. The relationship is good. Waiting who is going to spoil it. Pls continue fast

Originally posted by: silverfire

Hi Aaniya. How r u buddy.😃

Sorry for the late comment.

Lovely start n all was going well. Don't tell me RK is on revenge mode. NO!!!😕

And that last line 'his hatred is gonna cost someone's dear life !!' is giving me goosebumps.😕N that poem is giving me negative vibes. Is gonna marry that uncle ji n teach RK a lesson? Oh God! Hope madhu does not 'checkmate ' him.

<font color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">As usual ur stories r a pleasure to read ..only thing is I don't have time to come to the forum that often. If I do login , I'll choose ur stories first.😛</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks for the new story n also for the pm.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Belated happy birthday to u n Deepti di!!!🤗</font>

Originally posted by: RM14

Remaining part - Is Rk cheating on Madhu ?😕

Hope not but with Atharv than? What was that he thinking !

OK Madhu agreed n Rk moved ahead with her consent. n she to likes him ..😳

Waiting for next !👍🏼

Awesome n b'fully written part.⭐️

Originally posted by: RM14

Rese 😳

unres

Finally read first part 😃

Awesome start dear AA..👏

loved how Trish ne bana di Jodi 😉😆

and loved how RK -Madhu relationship progressed ..⭐️

loved it n so b'fully written ..

enjoyed it a lot ..
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and once again thanks for such lovely story and cute part ..❤️

hope Rk not taking revenge ..as of now Madhu and Rk both are in good terms and now friends.

thanks for pm dear Aaniya.🤗

Originally posted by: susan7

Superb update..

Continue soon..

Thanx for d pm dear

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm. Nice update. Everything was going smoothly n sweetly until the last point of the update. I was shocked as after getting so dreamy update the last point smell of conpiracy. Like everything was fake n means to cheat only. I m sorry for late comment as i was shocked by rk's expressions. I just crossed my fingers that whatever u quote in the poem was just a quote n does not have anything with heart of madhu. Waiting for next.

Originally posted by: -LoveAnnie-

<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">first of all wishing u a very happy belated birthday deepti RM14.🥳</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">now coming to the TS...😛</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">i have no words yaar . honestly i don't😕 .. at first while reading the story ...</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">i thought that RK will be that Groom uncle Madhu doesn't wants to marry,😆😆</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">but you shocked me and completely rocked it.⭐️ !and what a turning point you wrote at the end giving the hint about upcoming track.😲👏 And out of all of these the best part was the quote at the end. it was like a lesson at the end of the story * a moral type* 👍🏼,</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">i was surprised to know that you wrote it in a hurry😲. lol... i can't still believe it that someone could be this much talented that she wrote such a deep quote in a hurry.🤔</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">Hats Off !! you nailed it Aaniya..👏</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">now please please please and pretty please don't make us wait a lot to give the update of it.😭😭 It's really hard for us readers to stay without a Rishbala Doze of yours ;)😉 especially ME.. i have not fully recovered ! remember that😳.. and i might need a doze again ;) hahaha😆😛😃</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">As i have a surprise waiting for you 😉. So i wanna sincerely apologize for not giving a lengthy comment this time. but will surely give one on next update.😳😳</font>

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<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">Take Care.😛</font>

<font size="3" color="#cc33ff">Saranghae :* ;)❤️</font>

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Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Awesome story dear.Congrats for the new story dear🥳.This story was amazing and i loved it so much dear.Madhu's parents want madhu to marry a uncle type man.Madhu and rk's relationship was so superb dear.Rk and madhu loves each other verymuch and their scenes are awesome dear...I am excited to know what will happen next?.

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Omg Ani you just mak me it feel like erotica story. I loved it. L loved how you narrated the whole story and it was a long story. Best and the bestest. Superb