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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharsii

Superb update ka..

THANKS

Abhay kidnapped her for his bro..

YEAH
But he was killed..
Is malik killed him?.

THERE IS A MYSTERY BEHIND IT.WILL REVEAL IN COMING EPISODES

Her saviour is Rk..
Waiting for his intro...

YEAH IN VERY NEXT EPISODE

Update soon .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update

THANKS

So abhay kidnapped madhu
Malik killed abhay's brother

YEP

Poor abhay

YEAH I TOO HAVE A SOFT CORNER FOR ABHAY AFTER ALL HE IS GOOD AT HEART BUT CIRCUMSTANCES MADE HIM CRUEL

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

1Madhu got her first proposal from her kidnapper.

YES THATD STRANGE NA😊

Now Abhay want to kill her for revenge. .

YEAH A TYPICAL DRUG DEALER FAMILY
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Interesting..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Nice update dear.

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Abhay kidnapped madhu and malik killed abhay's brother

YEAH HE THOUGHT SO

.Now madhu in danger and who will help her?

OF COURSE OUR HERO
a nd where is our hero rk?

WAIT FOR NEXT EPISODE
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Originally posted by: manna43

Nice start.

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Abhay kapoor kidnapped madhu.

YES
Madhu 's father is a drug dealer n killed abhay 's brother

YEAH YHEY THOUGHT SO
.Now abhay wants revenge what will madhu do ?

OBVIOUSLY HE WILL BE THERE FOR HER
Reallyenjoying the thrill.

THANKS ..I AM THRILLED TO WRITE IT TOO

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Hi friends here is the next episode .it's a small episode.we have to give the oxygen for our forum for it's survival..so please do read and please.. please comment...
Mysterious Saviour


Part2


Abhays POV

Madhu ran out of the house to the woods.i didn't follow her I am sure that she will find dead tomorrow .wild animals will attack her and shred her in to pieces.my heart told me to go back and get her safe but my brain is really against that idea.i was head on my heel for her at the first sight itself but I loved my brother more than me..then what I could do to Madhu .I can only punish her and.there by getting an answer for my brother's blood.but I know he won't come back.this is why I hated this buisness very much . I always like to be a cool lecture .here only one law an eye for an eye.when father said about Bhai and to kill Madhu..I was confused what to do .I lost my control and messed up everything in the room.then she came to me .she was really worried about me.then this idea strike me .I let her run.my conscience hoped her to be safe in someway.i hoped she may get past the wolves.but I Know no one survived it.i went back to bed and lay down hoping to get a good news tomorrow.there are some tribes living in the forest.but it was on the other bank of river.they never crossed the river as they are superstitious .they thought they will get sinned when they cross the river.i know about them because on the other side of the river we had our ganja cultivation.the tribes help is in that and the Police never get a clue about it and even if someone intended to betray us..we have our own men among police and the traitor will be soon no more.but I hope someone cross the river and they help Madhu to escape.
I opened my eyes when I heard the phone buzzing.i didn't realize I sleep thinking about madhu.i looked at.the time and realized I slept for hours...that means madhu.i Opened the balcony door and stood leaning to the railing.i heard the wolves howling and whimpering.the wolves howling is Normal in this forest but today I feel it something different.is it Madhu..the wolves?no it won't be.i prayed to God to help her.my phone again buzzed.i took the call..it was my father.i know what to say him about Madhu
"Hello Abhay"my father's voice was a little shaky.i Know he loved Aryan Bhai very much .
"Abhay"he again called.i came out of my train of thoughts
"Han papa"I said
"Abhay where is Madhu?"he asked
I know papa is very much like a don.he never forgives his enemies.
"Abhay..Aryan came back"papa
"What?"I asked
"Yes ..he is alive.malik brought him back here"papa said
"But how?"I asked
"The face of that body was charred and I got confused .there was a letter with that body saying Malik done the revenge."my father
"That means someone tried to cheat on us ?they wanted to make us fight with each other.but who done this papa?"I asked
"We will sort it out...now we cleared all the differences between us and Malik is convenient to do the business with us.you bring back Madhu"my father
"Madhu..but papa..I...I.."I stuttered
"You .. you done it?"my papa asked
"No...Han.. actually she ran out to the jungle"I said
"What?oh god...what we will we do.what I will say to Malik."he said
"Papa..Madhu...I don't know what to do"I said
"I will ask sikky to accompany you .go and search for her.lets hope nothing wrong happened with her otherwise we are going to pay for it."papa sighed
"Yes ... papa... sikky will be here in one hour?"I asked
"Yes.."he cut the call
I felt frustrated.i am getting mad at myself.i Should have waited before taking the decision.it was something out of spite.but I pray to God to keep her safe.i am scared of the consequences and also I am scared of losing my love.

Madhus POV

It's been an hour I am running through the woods.the faint trees shadows cast some demonic images.it frightened me a lot.yet I wanted to get away as far as possible.the thought of abhay following me sent shivers through my body.thank god for the full moon day.it lit the path somewhat to make my way easy.but I am scared to the core.
I felt like my legs are giving away and I should stop .but I can't ..I am still afraid he will follow me and I should find out a way back to an area where someone can help me.i looked back to saw the mere forest and some how convinced he won't follow.i slowed down .i tripped on a large root of a tree.i managed to get up and my ankle was hurting like hell.i felt I can't walk an inch.but I should otherwise it cost my life..huh..what the guarantee if I walked away from Abhay I will survive..I am not sure about wolves.i heard some distant snarls.i dragged myself to walk.i reached a clearing and walked further to see a river.the full moon glistening on the ripples of water .I sat down entranced with the serene beauty.
I thought about how papa abandoned me.how he could do such a brutal thing.i was always adoring my father for his smooth character.i didn't ever saw him shouting at some one or I didn't Know that my father know how to do it.but...wjat if abhay lied.my papa had nothing to do with it..no.then y he will kidnap me and held me captive for weeks..I couldn't make any conclusions out of it.i don't know whether I would escape from here .but if I get a chance I will certainly ask papa..why he Abandoned me and why he is doing all this .
I felt so much devastated by the few days struggling.i felt like I want to sleep.i lay down in the damp soil and closed my eyes.
I opened my eyes when I heard a sound of twigs crackling.i slept for hours or minutes I am not sure .it rather felt like minutes.i looked to the dark forest from where I reached the river bank.nothing was visible but the ultimate darkness.i felt cold and I hugged myself to get some comfort.i looked at the sky where the perfect moon smiling at me..I folded my hand in prayer.
Please god .. please help me..I closed my eyes and a drop of tear flow down my cheeks.i kept on praying until I heard a sound of snarling.i Opened my eyes and saw a pair of Yellow eyes looking at me.it was distant and I couldn't make out what was it.those eyes started to move towards me and I stood up from my position.i felt a lump in my throat and I tried to gulp it.i felt the hair in the back of my neck erupting and a shiver passed through my body when I realized what it is.it was a faint wolf it was snarling at me..I saw its sharp teeth glistening in the moon light .I felt myself sweating even in such a cold weather.i gently stepped back and the wolf.advanced towards me.i had only two optionsto run for my life or to face my death . Allow that animal to tear me into shreds.i couldn't make out what to do.i just keep on looking at it and it also waited for my movement...I heard my heart pounding against my chest.next instant I wanted to run and I started running with my damaged ankle.but it didn't felt like aching because my life is on stake I should survive from that animal .but unfortunately I tripped down again.i tried.to stood up but the wpolf reached me.he was pacing slowly and cautiously towards me .. snarling.next instant it intended to jump to me and my courage give away .next thing happened is..yeah obviously..I blacked out
I opened my eyes and find myself in a comfy four-poster bed.the plush duvet felt so comfortable under me.i tried to sit up but my body was aching..the wall was painted with light blue color giving the room an elegance.there was a wardrobe and a night stand .I sat in the bed with much effort.
Where am I?in heaven ? definitely I will be.. because I haven't done any sin against God.so this is heaven.oh..god heaven looks like a normal human house.i thought
I heard a foot step..may be god.i Don't want to sit on the bed when he came.what if he feel it disrespectful.i tried to stood up.
A manly voice boomed"don't.. your ankle is really bad"
I looked at god .he was clad in a blue vneck t-shirt and a track pants
God is also modern..keep up with modern trends ..why not he created everything.i expected him to be in some Kings attire.well this look is good for him.god looked at me amusingly..
I was literally staring at him.why not ...I am seeing him for very first time.he is perfect ..his eyes which showing his angelic heart and innocence.his plumpy lips..oh god my dirty mind..pardon me..I am a human .
"Madhubala you are doing a sin in heaven ..you will be dropped to hell now.you listing on god"my inner self scolding me
But I couldn't stop checking out him.his perfect jaws..T-shirt is hiding his muscular body I can bet he will definitely have a six pack.how could some one be so perfect ..o
"He is god damn..."my inner voice
"No..no cursing in heaven please"inner voice
"You like what you see?"god asked
"Ahmm...are you God?"I asked
"No. ..I am an angel"he laughed
Then I noticed his cute dimples..ah god..
"No..Madhu.. don't sin"my inner voice
"Angel...but I heard angels have wings"I asked
"Wings...yeah..I gave to polish it"angel said
"Oh...you have to polish it?"I asked
"Yeah weekly once"angel said
"Oh..you can remove it from your body..I didn't thought it"I said
I felt he is struggling to suppress his laughter.may be I am just assuming things.angels are different from human.
"Ahmm angel do you have a name?"I asked
"Yes...my name is rishab ..rishab kundra..you can call me rk"he said
That sounds like human..he have a surname too.. whatever ...I am happy now I am in heaven"I thought
He looked at me eagerly for my next question.
"Well..can I get a chance to meet god?"I asked
"May be"he shrugged.
I Smiled at him.thn I remember about my glasses .I have it in my pocket when I ran out from there.i tried to pull it out .then I realized I am wearing a t-shirt and a PJ pants .the T-shirt definitely is an oversized one..but who changed my dress?
Oh ..buddhu..you are a soul..may be it's the uniform in heaven"I thought
"Is it the uniform in heaven?"I asked
The angel started laughing cletching his stomach .I looked at him confused.his eyes welled up with tears .he wiped it
"Yes..it's the uniform"rk said
"Oh..then y you laughed?"I asked
"Nothing..you were looking for your glasses?"he asked
"Yes..I can't read anything without my glasses"I sai
"You need not read anything here"rk said
"Oh..are you sure.. nothing like Gita.. Quran..Bible?"I asked
"Nope"he said
"Oh..so praying and all is for human in earth?"I Asked
"Yeah...your glass is broken ..I will get it corrected in few days.take rest you will be hungry.i will get you something"he said
"Do soul need food?"I asked
"Soul?"he asked
"Yeah..I am in heaven ..so I am a soul only"I said
"Yeah soul needs food and medicine..now lie down I will bring something for you"he left
I lay down on the bed thinking about my life in earth

Rks POV
The minute I went back from the room..I started laughing.oh..god I don't know ihow I controlled myself from laughing.trish saw me laughing and she came to me bewildered
"What's it Bhai"she asked
"That girl thinks she is deadand she is in heaven.you know she believes I am an angel"I said
"What?"trishna burst out laughing
I said her the whole conversation and I saw Trish fell on the couch laughing
"She is the dumpest girl..Bhai"Trish said
"Yeah ...cute too"I said
Trish frowned at me.
"She may be hungry get her something."I Said
Trish went back to kitchen with sandwich and a glass of juice.Trishna went to the guest room and I followed her . she looked at trishna and back to me
"Take food"I said
She nodded and started eating.while chewing the food she again looked at trish.
"I am trishna kundra"Trish said
"Angel?"she asked
Trish smiled looking at me.
"Yeah...my sister"I said
She nodded and again concentrated on her food.she again looked at trishna
"Is today your wing polishing day?"she asked
Trishna went out of the room quickly.
"Yeah"I said
"I am sorry ..she felt it awakward..I am new to here so I don't know the things in heaven..please told her I apologise for my mistake"she said
"Okay...btw what's your name?"I asked
"Madhubala Malik"she said
After few minutes she looked at me confused
"What?"I asked
"I heard about a book in which you enroll our name and keep a record of our sins and all.so if I am in heaven you should be supposed to Know my name"she said
"Yeah ..but chithrgupt took a break today..so i think yamraj may looked through it and he send you here without giving us the information about you.he may be pissed off by hectic work"I said
"Oh... really he took brakes"she asked
"Yes ... like human he also get tired by same work"I said
"Yeah ...you are right"she said
I couldn't take any more .so I said her to take the medicine after food and sleep .she nodded and I went back to Trish laughing.
Trish had a laughing party after I said her everything.she is really dumb ..but something in her pulls me towards her..may be her innocence .



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing Update ka.
Abhay is nice one..He allowed madhu to escape..
Madhu thought,She was dead..
She drolling over RK..
Rk is angel..Haha
He can't control laugh..of course me too..
Uniform in heaven..
Trishna and Rk are teasing her..But she didn't know about that...
Her talks are like childish..
Waiting ka...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Poor madhu
Rk and trish are making fun of innnocent madhu

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