Rishbala||short story||Soulmates 2(completed|pg 31||dt 14/7) - Page 18

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Nice episode aishu

I am sick of Madhus shildish character
And rk ..he had to behave a little mature .
He had to understand her pain and situation rather than spit out the word divorce
Hah..when will they behave normal.
After all they are rk and Madhu
Theen tigada kaam ho Gaya believers(I don't know the words are correct.nammude Hindi alle😆)
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Please update soon

Thanks chechi.. They are rk & madhu.. Pakka pagals.. It's tough for them to Behave normally😆& Hindi Sheriyano ennu entaduthu chodikkallea.. Enikkariyankilallea 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Nice update dear.Madhu should understand rk's situation.I guess he is not responsible for malik's death...

Thanks Dear😊.. Yep.. He is not responsible for that..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harini_

Awesome update,
can understand Rk's situation after the way Malik insulted him its not easy for him to behave normally with them like nothing happened,
Madhu is behaving childishly and her ego is not letting her to accept him and blaming Rk for Malik's death and Rk instead of understanding the situation he too agreed for the divorce,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thanks harini😃.. Yes they both are stubborn.. Gonna update.. Thanks for reading..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Awesome update ...

I think...Madhu shouldn't have blamed Rk for what happened with Malik..he didn't know Malik's condition...
And in past, how Malik behaved with him ..it was not something easy to forget ..may be Rk really would have come other day morning to meet Malik..may be he really had work
Their relation ended so easily..due to ego from both side...hope they clear everything soon...I can't see them separated this easily...

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Thanks kaus.. Yeah he really had work..me too can't them separated..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

ok.. so.. people are blaming madhu..

but.. ok..
if we see from her pov ..
she is not wrong..

Yep.. You got it.. Yes it was her situation.

yaa.. its misunderstanding & misconception..

but, the moment of insecurity & all..
sometimes can make people think like that..

and its all hapenning coz of communication gap..
and only one person is nit responsible for communication gap..
but both are !!

amazing update..
tnx fr pm !!

Thanks Aan..pls keep reading..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anntempleton

nice part.

madhu is blaming rk for everything has she tried talking to him? what if he actually had some work? I am not trying to point anyone but rather than ego it's miscommunication and lack of understanding. Rk doesn't understand family and relations, so he may be partially to be blamed but give the guy a break. Instead of getting divorce and blame game rishbala should talk to each other.

Thanks Dear😃.. Yes.. They have to talk but what can they Do if ego rule over them.. But it will come to an end soon.. Pls keep reading..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Sorry for commenting latr.

Emotional part.
Though RK has ego, Madhu is not right to blame him for her father's death. She was there. She should have worked out something.
I feel she should not force her child and keep her away from her father.
Would love to read RK's pov also.

Thanks dear.. No Need of sorry.. Yep.. Ridhu have the right to Live with both her parents.. Will try add rk's pov on last part.. Thanks for reading.. Pls keep reading.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for reading dear.. Pls keep reading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends.. Here is the next part.. Thanks a lot for your love and support.. It means a lot to me..get ready to slap me...but this thunder storm will end by next part as next one is the final part of this story..pls read on & drop your reviews.. Pls ignore mistakes..



Soulmates 2


Part 5


Night


"Y r u silent rk..??say something.. "mukund asks agitated..
"what should I say.. V lost that deal.. That's it.. "rk said coldly..
"that's it.. Rk it was ur hard work.. How can u forgive that bi**h so easily.."mukund asks clenching his fist seeing rk's cold nature.. "how dare she.. She stole ur quotes.. & send it to the same company in her name.. Don't she feel ashamed of stealing someone's hard work..??v shouldn't believed her.. "he added..but rk was still mum..
"v should report this rk.."
"nothing happen if v report about her.. The quotes are already published.."rk says taking a long breath..
"so..?? "mukund asks questioning..
"I quit.. "he said in a final tone..
"Rk... It was ur hard work from the past 6 months.. How can u leave it so easily.. It was ur dream project na.. "
"yep.. Bcoz of this dream project I lost everything... My family.. My happiness.. Everything but look now what happened.. "rk says with a mocking smile.. "everything goes in vain..it's a punishment for me mukund..i should tolerate it.. "
"Rk.. "mukund tried to console..
"I am complete loser..i want some peace mukund.. I don't want to be in my senses..pls.. "


In rk's apartment


"ma.. y r packing.. ?ridhu asks by swaying her Saree's tip..
"v r going to dadi's home tomorrow.. "madhu says.. Ridhu smiles hearing her..
"papa also coming with us.. ??"came her next question..
"no.. Only v r going.. "
"y..?? "she asks pounding ..
"go & sleep ridhu..v want go early tomorrow.."she said & made her lie on the bed.. Once the packing finished she laid near ridhu & closed her eyes.. But bcoz of an unknown reason she didn't get sleep..she felt restless..for the first time she is getting a strange feeling like this..


In vie lounge


Rk took his 7th shot of vodka..
"rk stop it..u r over today.."mukund holds his hand when he was about to take the 8th shot..
"don't stop me today.. I want to celebrate my failure.. "saying this he took the 8th shot... 9th & 10th came next..
"u should stop this right now.. "mukund says in a raised voice..
"do you want me to stop..? OK.. I am not taking anymore.. "he smiled at him with a vague vision..
"u r spoiling urself... "
"I am already spoiled.. "with sadness crept in his eyes..
"I will drop u at home.. "mukund offered..
"I don't have home.. I have no one.. "
"stop it rk.. Come with me.. "mukund said getting angry..
"I can go by myself.. "he said & starts walking out from there.. Mukund settled the bill & walk past him..


Morning


Madhu was getting ready while she heard a knock at the door...She went to open the door & saw dips on the door step..
"hah Dips..i was about to come there.. To give the keys.."madhu smiled at her but she gave her a worried look..
"what happened dips.. ??"she asks her confused..
"y ur mobile is switched off..??"dips asked..
"oh.. That I didn't charge it yesterday.. So it got switched off.."she said..she looks her concerned..
"what happened.. Y r u looking me like this..any problem...?"
"madhu.. It's.. "her voice broke & tears welled up in her eyes..
"what happened... Is there any problem.. What's it dips.. "she asks by shaking her..
"madhu.. Yesterday... Rk..he..he met with an accident.. "
Madhu couldn't understand what she had said for a while as her mind got blank..
"I called u.. But ur phone was switched off... He is admitted at city hospital.. "she Concluded..
Madhu felt like her head is spinning..she pressed her hand against the wall for support...there was no tears in her eyes.. She was numb..
"madhu.. "she jerked back into reality by hearing dips..
"ha.. Dips.. I will come now.. V will go there.. "without any changes in her expression she went inside which made dips look her perplexed..
Madhu came back with ridhu in her arms..
"come.. V can go.."she said locking the door & put the keys inside her hand bag..


After half an hour they reached city hospital...

"ma.. Y v r here..??"ridhu asks madhu when they stepped inside the hospital..but she was lost in thoughts so didn't hear her..she continued asking only to welcome silence from her...
"v came here to see ur papa... "finally dips speak out..
"y he came here...??"
"I will tell u later.. "she said caressing her hairs...they stopped before the ICU & spot mukund there.. Dips went to mukund while madhu sat on the three seater chair & made Ridhu sit on her lap..
"mukund..what happened actually..??"dips asks him in a low tone..
"it's dips...yest his mood was not good... He said he want some peace so v went to a pub but yest he boozed more than usual.. I said him that I will drop him but he didn't heard my Word...i tried to stop him but he left from there before I could reach..after sometime I got his call.. He said me that he is going from here.. I thought he is just saying it under the effect of alcohol.. But then I heard a eerie sound...police saying that a truck hit on his car.. I tried to call madhu many times but her phone was switched off so I called u.."mukund said..
"what's his condition now..??"this time dips asks in a very low tone..
"dips..it's.. "he seeing fumbling dips asked "anything serious..?? "
"he is now on life support system.."
Dips palmed her mouth to Condrol her sobs..time starts to run as usual bringing vesper..for all these while madhu kept sitting there like a statue..dips made ridhu eat something not before calling madhu.. But she was deaf to her calls..dips felt restless seeing her behavior.. She never seen her like this..she was staring at madhu.. But she tore away her eyes from her when she got a call from her father..
"ha papa.."
"yeah..v r still here.. "
"no..no improvement in his condition... "
"no...they won't allow visitors inside.. "
"I am worried about madhu..she still sitting here.. Neither she talked about him nor did she asked about his condition... I didn't saw her like this before.. I am scared.. I don't know what's running in her mind.."
"yes.. I called her many times..but no use.. "
"yes.. I informed her family about this.. They will come tomorrow..."
"Ok..papa take care of urself & aryan.. Tell him I will come tomorrow.. "saying this she disconnects the call..
"Rk.. "hearing a whimper dips look back..
"madhu.. "she went near her..
"Rk.. "she stood up from her seat looking as if she wokes from a dream..
"madhu calm down.. "seeing her fidgeting dips tried to console her..she jerked her & went near ICU.. She pushed the glass door & opened it entering inside..
"madhu.."dips went past her calling her..
"mam..u can't be here..pls go outside.. "a nurse who was there tried to make her understand.. Paying no heed to her words madhu moved towards the bed where rk is lying unconsciously..
"mam.. Pls..he may get infection.."she said holding her hand but madhu pushed her away who is stopping her from seeing her husband..seeing the situation going worse deepali also enters inside..madhu touched on his hand gently with her soft hand.. Her eyes are wet now..
"Rk.. Stop ur drama.. Wake up.. "she said shaking him which is not good for his condition now..
"mam..aap kya Kar rahe hein..??"the nurse pulled her away from him.."even a simple movement can dangerously affect him.. He is on life support system now.. "
"no.. "she shook her head in negative.."nothing will happen to him.. He is just playing with me..he is angry on me.. U ppl r lying.."she said with filled eyes..
"madhu.. Pls.. Come with me.. "dips says her pityingly..
"no.. I want to be with him.. I promised him.. "she said again trying reach near him only to stopped by dips..
"madhu.. Stop it ..come.. "she said holding her wrist..
"leave me dips.. I want to be with him.. Rk.. "she screamed out..
"stop ur drama.. Y r u acting as if u r worried about him..??where was ur love & promise When u filed for divorce.. "dips burst out at her unintentionally..she was enough of the mess that madhu is creating..finally she hugs dips give in to her tears which she was holding since morning...dips hugs her by patting on her back consoling her.. They went out of the ICU..dips made madhu sit & offered her water but she denied it..
"madhu.. At least take some Water.. U r so tired.. U didn't take anything since morning na.. "dips looks her with tears in her eyes..
"dips..if I die will u take care of my daughter..?? "hearing madhu's words dips looked her bewildered..
"shut up madhu.. Don't talk like this again.. "
Dips says hugging her..
"I really don't deserve happiness.. I wasn't loyal to anyone..bcoz of me my rk is now in this condition.. Did I deserve to live..?"she asks in a hazy tone as she is very weak..
"madhu pls have something.. U r really weak.."dips said getting worried..
"no dips.. Till my rk open his eyes & call out my name I won't take anything.."she said with determination..
"I wanted u to realize this..now I can see how much u love him by seeing ur eyes..madhu even one mistake can destroy everything in a second ... "


Inside ICU


"Rishab.. Rishab.. Wake up.. "
Rk opened his eyes hearing a voice..he saw a man in sixties standing near the bed smiling at him..
"come with me.. "saying this that man removed the oxygen mask from his face & made him sit on the bed..
"who r u..??"rk asked him confused..
"I came to take u with me..come i have many things to show u.. "he said..
"what..??"
"ur beautiful life which u lost now.. "he said..
"what.. Is I'm dead..??"he asks shocked..



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Sorry for the disastrous update..
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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
So emotional update.plz don't make them die.

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