RishBala SS: Orenda (Completed - 01/08 - P:40)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Poor RK is sandwiched between brother and sister.
Sultan is cool about his sister loving RK.
Madhu's message asking RK about his favourite dish.
Whatever it is she loves RK crazily.
Like brother like sister.
Love the sibling bond and how well Sultan knows Madhu that she will listen to her heart.
Will RK give in.
Awesome update loved it.
Curious to know what happens next.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thanks buddy!

Glad you love their bonding and this part!

What do you think? Will Madhu leave him freely until he accepts?

Will update on time!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: dharsii
Nice update..
Poor RK..Sultan and madhu are crazy..
Madhu is too bold .
She doesn't care about anything..
But RK is different.. He has feeling for her..
But hiding..
He has to express. There is no way for him..
Waiting..
Update soon..

Thanks yaar!

Yup Poor RK! LOL

May be your guess is right!

Wait until tomorrow to confirm!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Superb update dear

Thanks dear!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: harini_
Awesome update,
like sister like bro both are crazy he has no problem with his sister loving his friend he knows her too well and is scared of his sister,
Rk too likes her but he is not admitting it,Madhu tried to be distant with him but she couldn't able to stay away from him,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thanks buddy!

I'm glad that you are liking it and I hope it continues!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
its good that.. they are talking it out..
hehehe..
rk is going through real tortures..

madhu'smessages..
i bet one day he will crave for such messages..
tnx fe pm..
grwat update :)

I'm too happy that Sulu let them talk!

What can we name the tortures? Sweet tortures? Do you agree?

I too hope he craves for these sms!

Thanks a ton!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan
Superb update dear.Madhu loves rk a lot and he also had some feelings for her...

Thank you!

And I hope he gets to tell that! Else I'm going to murder him through Madhu LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Superb update
Rk is scared of madhu but he started to melt for madhu n starting to realize his feeling for madhu

Thanks a lot dear!

Hope the melting process continues! LOL😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Fantastic update
Sullu is tge main cupid.
He wants madhu n rk together.
Rk is shaken with madhus behaviour
This madhu is damn bold lol
She is actually rkish he he.
Waiting to know what rk will do.
Thanks a lot for the pm.
Do update soon

Thank you so much buddy!

I love when people are bold with their own characteristic and limits! And I hope this Madhu could be like this LOL

RK, the poor soul!

You will get to know tomorrow what is going to happen.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#179

Hey!

Thanks for all the positive responses I'm getting for this story.
No blah blah, straight to story!

Link to previous part: Part 8

Happy reading!

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Part 9

He took a deep breath and started:
"I'm an orphan." she opened her mouth to say something but got closed by his index "I was abandoned by my parents when I was few months in front of the orphanage where I grew up.
I have never seen my family. My blood related one. For me the grandparents from there are my real ones. They gave me their name and they were and they are my support.
I never imagined of my life with any other family. I wanted to do something for myself and the orphanage.

I never felt the things I feel with you.
I don't know what is it.
All I know is you are special to me.
Since when? I don't know.

You have a future.
A better one.
A good family who supports you.
I don't want to come in between your beautiful life." seeing her eyes begging him he shook his head:
" I know what you want to hear!
I like you.
I don't know if it can be called love as I don't know what is love in general. I'm going to ask you something that you will not want, you will not like." he took another deep breath and continued:
"I want you to forget me.
I want you to have a bright future.
I want you to be the person you want to be."

She palmed his mouth and said
"I will have a future when I want to be the person I want to be, which is to be your half.
To be The only lady in your life.
To be One among your existing family.
And" she removed her hand from his closed mouth to close it with hers.

This time he reciprocated the feeling she showered until they broke it breathlessly.
"Add few members in future." hiding her shy face in the crock of his neck, hugging him tightly.

"You have a future"
"Only with you!" she completed with her words.
"But"
"If the reason is my studies. I will complete what I always wanted to do with your help." facing him "You are my inspiration and I want you to be my perfection." with a smile.
He smiled for her craziness and said "If I don't agree?" in a questioning tone.
"I will rape you!" in a menacing mischievous way.
"Too bad Miss."
"Not with you Mister!"

"I need time." he said.
"If it's for my studies. I promise you I will do what I wanted to do. Please." not knowing why she was pleading.
"I will be a disturbance for you."
"No, you will be my guide."
He smiled!

"Hey! I finished my 2nd round of dinner! Can we work?" Sultan screamed knocking on the door.

"Are you staying?" she asked with hope without giving a pounce to her brother.
"Hmm No"
"Please stay! I will not disturb. Promise." pinching her throat.
"Ok!" he accepted after a lot of pouting and pleading puppy dog faces of hers.

She peeked his lips and jumped out of his lap and hurried to the door.

"How is my friend?"
"He is more than fine!" grinning.
"You didn't eat him."
"Slowly and steadily Bro!" exiting from the room.

Sultan started to close the door when he was stopped by his sister's commanding ton.
"I will be back with my book! Don't close!"
"We have to work on a project Choti!"
"I know I will not disturb."
"Hmm Ok! You aren't going to listen me."
"Correct!" turning back to her room and screamed "I'm getting the guest room ready! And I will come to your room!"
"Guest room? Oh! Okay okay!" he answered to his question understanding why.

Like she said, she went to the guest room which is the next room to hers, to get it ready before taking her iPod and her book, along with a juice pack and few snacks.
She entered Sultan's room to find them concentrated, so made herself comfortable on the other side of the king size bed after putting all the items except iPod and book on the table.
The boys turned to acknowledge her presence and went back to their work.

Around 1 AM.
The partners stopped working and packed everything they have put around them.
Seeing this, Madhu got up and put the empty packets in trash can and went to her brother's closet, took a pair of black night pants and a loose white shirt.

"Are you going to wear that?" Sultan enquired.
"Hahaha funny! It's for Rishab!" she said shyly the last part.
"Oh!" her brother exclaimed.
"I will show him the guest room!"
"Can I trust you with him?" enjoying the teasing session until he received a small punch from his friend.
"Whatever!" saying that she went out of the room with the dresses and her objects, waiting for Rishab.

Saying good night to his fried who is grinning ear to ear, he came out only to hear the door to be locked behind him.
"This way!" she said showing him the way.
He followed her and stopped before entering the room.
"Thanks!" he said laying his hand in front of her.
She took hold of his hand and pulled him inside before closing the door.

"I was asking for dresses!"
"Oh! I thought! Never mind!" brushing it off.
He opened the door and extended his hand.
She closed the door and put the clothes on the table near the bed and sat there.

"What is it?" he asked.
She patted the place near her.
He sat there waiting for her to say something but instead her head rested on his shoulder as her right fingers interwind with his left hand's ones, while her left hand played with their fingers.
"Can I sleep here?" hesitantly.
"No!" the first word he thought hearing her.
"Just sleep! Please!" lifting her head.
"No please!" shaking negatively his head.

"I hate you!"
"That's what I want!"
Freeing her fingers, she pushed him on the bed and rolled over him, coming face to face with him.
Pulling his hands around her waist, she started to trace his jawline with the back of her right hand.

"Get up Madhu!" trying his best to move her.
"Just 10 minutes and I will go!" she made herself comfortable with her head over his chest and her hand over his hair and left check.

Hearing his heartbeat, she said:
"I so want to be like this forever and ever."
He smiled, taking his right hand from her back to her head.
"Madhu"
"Hmmm"
"Can I ask you something?"
"Hmmm"
"In school"
"I will be just your student." she completed.
"We can't go out now. I want you to"
"Finish my studies and be a good girl."
He smiled and added "What do you want to study?"
"Before answering to your question, I need to know when will I get to see you or talk to you as yourself and not my teacher?"
"Once I talk to your parents!"
"When?" lifting her head from his chest.
"The sooner."
"Oh! And by the way I think I will become a Chemistry teacher!"
"Is it because of me?"
"No! I always wanted to!"
"Okay! What about Maths?"
"I love Maths but Chemistry is my favourite!" grinning she added "When we do biology we will make little little CheMath."

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Next part: Part 10

- Maithili

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