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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Maithu awesome update loved it
Loved the bold Madhu and her confession too.
Rishab is scared to accept though he may love Madhu thinking of student-teacher relation and also thinking he is an orphan.
Sultan is happy on knowing that his sister is happy and the reason is Rishab
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thanks a lot buddy!

Glad you loved this form of Madhu too! I was a bit scared if the transformation will be accpted. And I'm happy that you all are liking it.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Awesome update. I love this madhu n rk. Poor rk is stuck between his duty n this girl. Sullu is happy for his frnd n sis. Evn me lol. Rk is now truly trapped. Thanks for the pm. Fo update soon

Thanks yaar!

Glad you are loving them.

I'm too joining the club of Sullu & co! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Madhu confessed.
Sultan is cool.
He has warned Rishabh and rightly so. Madhu is not going to leave Rishabh.
Nice going.

Thanks dear!

Poor Rishab! I really pity him along with you for what he is going to go through.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Awesome update
Madhu confessed her love to rk n sultan is happy for to n madhu n warned to that she will get him

Thank you!

Hope you like the next part too!

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Awesome update,
Madhu is too bold,
loved her confession,
poor Rk he is so lost he is thinking their relation will not be acceptable,
Sultan is so happy that his sister is back to her usual form even after knowing his sister loves his friend also he is so happy and doesn't have any problem with their relation,
Madhu is not gonna leave him and will surely make him confess his love
thanks for the update

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: harini_
Awesome update,
Madhu is too bold,
loved her confession,
poor Rk he is so lost he is thinking their relation will not be acceptable,
Sultan is so happy that his sister is back to her usual form even after knowing his sister loves his friend also he is so happy and doesn't have any problem with their relation,
Madhu is not gonna leave him and will surely make him confess his love
thanks for the update

Thanks a lot buddy!

Glad you loved this Madhu's confession!

We are all happy along with Sulu!

You have just got this Madhu correctly!

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

oh my goodness ...
this girl is going to claim my Rk's chastity..
oh god someone save him..

but on second thought..
he is exactly where, he belongs too..
lolz..

exactly after passing out there wont be any teacher .. student relation..

she is a female.. and he is a male..
and they both knows whats gonna happen...
rhyming naa..
hahahaaa

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
oh my goodness ...
this girl is going to claim my Rk's chastity..
oh god someone save him..

but on second thought..
he is exactly where, he belongs too..
lolz..

exactly after passing out there wont be any teacher .. student relation..

she is a female.. and he is a male..
and they both knows whats gonna happen...
rhyming naa..
hahahaaa

Your comment made me smile dear! Thank you!

I don't know who will be the savior of RK here.

@bold It's so rhyming! ;-)

Glad you are enjoying RK's state.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Hey!

How are you all?
I can see that you like how the Lady turned her ground.
Hope you like her more with all her naughtiness.

Link to previous part: Part 6

Happy reading!

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Part 7

He don't know what to say to her, so came up with what he remembered from school.

"There is no love. It's only infatuation." trying to move her away with no pressure.
"In that case, let's test it." putting her hands on either side of his shoulder.
"Madhu listen! I" and no words couldn't get out of his mouth as they are sealed with her lips.

She kissed him with all her life and he was too shocked to even react.
It didn't take long as it's her first and she didn't knew what to do.
She just put her lips over his and kissed him as if kissing a kid on cheeks but here it's a man, a teacher, her teacher and that too on his lips.
She broke it immediately and said:
"I love you!" she attacks again his lips when he opened his mouth to say something.

Locking her hands around his neck and pressing herself against him for support and to not let him push her away, she takes the life out of him this time.
She starts with the same process as the first one but this time she got lost in the kiss that she extracted all the juices from his lips along with his saliva.
Leaving his lips free, she came back to ground with her face resting over his chest.
He tried to move her away saying "Madhu se" she closed his mouth with her palm.

"I didn't know you were the friend my brother talked about all these days. I know most of the things my brother knows." with her body stuck to his, eyes talking to each others and his hands a bit shaking from the happenings "If it was infatuation, I would have never wanted to wait for you. I would have never wanted to spend my whole life with you."
Taking a deep breath she continues:
"I wanted to show you how much I want to love you.
I wanted to show you how much I deserve you.
I will wait for you.
I Love you."
Closing her eyes she adds:
"I want to marry you and become mother of your children." opening her eyes "Please don't avoid me."leaving his mouth free.
She peeked his lips one last time before leaving him alone in the hallway inside her house as she ran upstairs to her room.

Not knowing what he should do, he closed his eyes and rested his head on the door.
Few minutes passed before he opened his eyes and got his phone out of his pocket to send 2 messages:
"I don't know what you will remember when you read this but I need to say sorry!
Will be waiting to talk to you tomorrow." to Sultan BF

"Close the main door!" to Unknown Number

Putting it back in its place, he exited from there and went to his apartment with a solo resolution 'Avoid Madhu 100%'.

All this while, the lady in the world of love was smiling ear to ear, imagining her future with her now Maths teacher.

The night went faster than expected for Sultan but as slow as possible for the rest of human beings.
One in hope to see her Mr. Perfect while the other expecting this year to finish as quickly as possible.

Once Sultan was awake, he searched the whole house for his sister but she was no where:
"Did they eloped without informing me?" muttering this he picked his phone to see that he has received several messages and his attention went toward two messages.
One from his friend and another from his sister.
"Going to school!
Lemon juice in fridge.
See you this evening!
Love you!" from Choti

He typed a reply:
"Thanks Choti! ;-)"

He next opened his friend's message and replied:
"Thanks from dropping your future wife's brother at his home. DEVIL
What should I call you now?
Tell me when we meet this evening."

He immediately got a reply, so checked:
"Nothing! :-|" and Sultan checked the time to find it to be 8:47 AM.

He laughed to himself and went to grab the lemon juice which is waiting for him.

Time started to slow down for Madhu as she was restlessly waiting for his class which is the 2nd one in the afternoon.
The moment he entered the room, he went directly to his table and started to do his routine work except to have an eye contact with Madhu as she is only watching him and all his movements.
She tried to ask a question to get his attention but he escaped seeing her by turning his back to her as if writing interesting things on the board and asked her to say what she wanted.
He even prepared himself to not do any exercise today as she is the only person who raises her hand to answer.
Keeping a regular track of time, he got out of the class 1 minute before the normal time to avoid her.

Having lost her patience, she got her phone out during the 10 minutes break and typed a message:
"I said to not avoid me!
I really have a question in Maths.
Whom to ask?"

"Send the question!" he replied.
"Why is Y going away from X?" she texted and smiled.

She didn't got any answer.
And she know that the next day, she will meet him if only she had a chance to cross him in the corridor.
Else she has to wait for Thursday class.
And most probably that is what is going to happen.

After finishing all his lessons and taking a small rest in his apartment, Rishab went to his evening class and there his friend was waiting for him in the parking lot.
"So Dude! How was the class with my sister today?"
"Sorry!" he said sternly getting out of his bike.
"There is nothing to say sorry about!"
"Come let's go in!"
"What happened last night? Did she do something?"
"No! No! Nothing!" with a little agitation.

"So something happened!" raising his brows.
"Nothing!"
"Are you sure?"
"Mmm! Yeah!"
"I think I will ask my sister!
She will be more than happy to know that I'm with her and she may even say things that would have happened in her dreams."
"Nooo"
"Why?"
"Time for class! Come!" pulling him by his shoulder.

"Did you both confessed?"
He glared him.
"Oh! I'm sorry!" with a sorry poker face "I mistook you both. Did something something happened? Like kiss or" Rishab palmed Sultan's mouth and glared before speaking.
"She is my student and she is your sister. So stop talking like an idiot.
And please no more questions, neither to me nor to your sister.
I want her to forget me and move on." leaving his friend free.
"In your dreams buddy."

Seeing their professor come, they entered their classroom and shut their mouth which opened only to answer.
Once they finished their class, both the buddies made their way out talking:
"We need to finish this project by this week-end." exclaimed Sultan.
"10 more hours of works and I think it's done."
"Why don't you come and stay at my house this Friday, after your classes?"
"No!"
"Listen me fully buddy!" Rishab asked him to continue by nodding "We can work as much as we want without any interruption." he raised his brow.
"Yeah! My sister will be there but she is not going to be stuck to you." he opened his mouth to say something but Sultan stopped him by showing his hand.
"I will be there and I will not let her eat you! Don't be scared of choti."

"You are unbelievable! I may come there after all the guarantee you gave me but I will not stay"
"Why not?" interrupting him.
"I don't want."
"Please!"

After a lot of discussion Rishab agreed to stay.

As predicted by Madhu there was no sign of Mr. Kundra existing in the world until he entered their class on Thursday.
Time flew in the same way as it flew on Tuesday.
And this time, the message she sent might have given him a mini heart-attack.

"Mr. Hot!
Please don't avoid me!
You don't know what I can do if I get a hand on you.
I wanted to discuss about our future and you left 2 minutes before the end.
Bad boy!
No problem! We will discuss about it through messages!
What do you think about the name Rish?
I think it's the best name we can find for our little baby boy in future.
How sweet of me? I am thinking about our future.
If you want a girl, I will try to come up with a name. Promise!
I'm stopping here as we will discuss the rest face to face.
Take care. Eat well. Come to meet me!
Tons of love & kisses!
- Miss Future-MRK (Madhubala Rishab Kundra! I love this name! Thank you for giving it to me.)"

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How was the kiss?
I mean did I keep it simply sweet or it was harsh!
Let me know it through your LIKES & COMMENTS.

I can't say if I will be updating in the morning or evening as I will be busy with my parents marriage anniv.
Next part: Part 8

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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