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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Awesome update...

THANKS

Possessive and jealous Rk...
loved it...

😊



but I hate dis Ria...


SHE IS EVIL


loved Abhay pia and madhu bonding...

THANKS

looking forward for next part...
continue soon..


UPDATING SOON


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: janu2006

gr8 part

THANKS

cont.soon

UPDATING SOON


thanks for pm

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THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mgadatia

Very nice

THANKS

please update soon


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THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

rk agin call her to taunt her knie point out at her charcter also thinking her that she is useless cant do anything

YEAH

n wy madhu talking to him n hoping frim that jerk who nt underatands her just said his descion


SHE LOVES HIM


rk calls madhu imature si eat he is n that bitch ria teliing agindt madhu to rk n he is sileny egoistic man ho n marry ria wy nt ria leave hwr hubby n marry rk


😆😆

rk alrrady left madhu so wy nt ria both monkey live togther


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i hope madhu gave damn to rk n listen hima ny mire n nt care fr him any more nor degrade heraelf more becoz its enough know its rk turns to beg her



YES

i eish rk also weep n brg madhu n madhu show him dame rudness n treatment that done to her n also madhu ask abt divirce from rk so rk realoz e wat he done to her



LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENS



n i m happy madhu slapeed ri a that bitch dersve that n more thn that


YEAH


plz make madhu a string character nt some weak sat savtri types meak i dont like weak women who always beg from men women should be respected


YEP


just hate rk so muchhh plz madhu no more pleadings n begging from him



SHE WONT PLEAD


n8ce update soonnn


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dodesharma

Awesome very nice dear

Lovely it


THANKS

Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

Lovely update!

THANKS


Glad Madhu started to stand on her own and be brave!

YEAH


Good to see that RK is still fighting with his ego for one good go!
MIL & DIL combo was lovely!


😊


Hate Ria as much as Dips! They are made with same sample!

RIA IS SOMETHING MORE


So we r heading back to America!

YEP

Waiting waiting

UPDATING SOON



THANKS MAITHU


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Part-8

I am really sorry for the late comment dear. My laptop was repaired so i am not active in india forums...


TAKE YOUR TIME DEAR

Superb update dear


THANKS

. Finally madhu realized her mistake by trusting dipali's words blindly. She suffered a lot in these two months


YES

. Pia hepled madhu in her studies and job. Dipali was not a good friend to madhu because when madhu needed her the most that time she left her alone

YEAH


. Rk also missing her badly but he don't want to aacept the fact.

HE IS AN EGOIST


Wow rk called madhu and he heard madhu scolding dipali...I think they will reunite soon...


YEAH..LETS HOPE SO



THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING..



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bhumi1492

When will you update next part?

IN FEW MINUTES


Please update soon.

UPDATING SOON



SORRY FOR THE DELAY


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi friends
Happy new year
I am back with the update
It took a little more time than I expected
I am really sorry for that

Guess what⭐️..I am on cloud nine walking to seventh heaven..it's 51 likes and it's a great thing you people had done for me..as a writer I feel proud ..thanks alot

Here is the next update
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Married@America

Part 10



America
Rias home
"Honey...I am home"Sultan entered smiling.he hugged ria and tried to kiss on her lips.she pushed him back
"Ahmm... Sultan..rk is here"ria
"So what...you don't mind it..right rk"Sultan said
"Yeah.."rk Smiled
Sultan sat down on the couch across to rk
"Honey I am really tired ..can you make a coffee for me and rk"Sultan
"Sure"ria said rolling her eyes at Sultan .rk didn't notice it
Ria went inside to make coffee.she filled the coffee pot with water and placed it in the coffee maker .she was eveasdropping Thier convo.
"Well...rk...I know no about your tragedy.yaar...i have something to talk with you about it..we are good friends and I think you will take my advice seriously."Sultan said
Rkllooking at him for his opinion on his desastered life.
"See rk...you know how you Married Madhu and the situation behind it..you both were not prepared for eachother and the situation even became worse because of her immature behavior.but rk she is a teenager and it will be Difficult for her to cope with this situation.she is alone, away from her family in an unfamiliar place"sultan
"R u trying to justify her Sultan..she slapped your wife,my best friend and hurt my feelings"rk scowled
"She needed it"Sultan said under his breath
"Forget whatever happened..you are destroying your own life rk...look at yourself..how much you have changed from your old self.", Sultan said
"What you want me to do?"rk asked
"Accept that you love her so much "Sultan said
"No..I hate.."rk stopped
Sultan laughed"you are trying to convince yourself..but failings miserably"
"See rk..life is not a game .. Sometimes we have to forget and adjust..you can't survive without her..so call back her and live a happy life"Sultan
"No Sultan ..I can't...I don't need.anyone except my friends... moreover that she had moved on and have some friends at college and work place.i told her to quit her job and College"rk
"Why you don't want her to complete her education and doing w job?"Sultan
Rk brushed his fingers through his hair"I...I don't know"
"You are scared ..to lose her..you fears that she might move on"Sultan
He averted his gaze from Sultan and stared at the floor as if it will give him the answer for his dialemma.and somewhere he knew Sultan is right
"Don't think so much rk..just accept her.she will make your life a heaven.she is a nice girl but a little immature.you can change her too..but with patience"Sultan said
Rk bite his nail thinking about Sultan' words
"Sullu honey...can you help me with this snacks"ria Called out from the kitchen
"Yeah.. coming"Sultan excused himself to the kitchen to help his beloved wife.sultan entered the kitchen and ria pushed him to the wall as it was a sudden attack he stumbled and smashed his head on the wall
"What the..."before he could complete ria held a knife on his neck and glared at him.sultan looked at her wide eyed
"Honey..."Sultan called her
"Don't... don't dare me to call that...you were digging my grave..you bi**h"ria said furiously further pressing the knife earning a small cut on his neck
Sultan winced on the pain
"Ria..I didn't do anything."Sultan said innocently
"Don't...don't act so smart..I heard everything you talked with rishab..what do you want ..Han?..wanted to spoil my plans...you want me to attempt suicide again?"ria removed the knife from his neck and her eyes welled up looking at the whitemmark on her wrist
"Oh..baby..don't cry and don'tddo anything stupid..you know na..I can't live without you and I can do anything for you..I love you so much ria.. please don't do anything stupid"Sultan said
Ria wiped her tears and placed an the knife on the kitchen island.
"Then go and correct your mistake.. manipulate his mind "ria said handing him the tray of snacks.sultan stayed there looking at her like an idiot.
"Go Sultan...you b****rd.. otherwise you will sleep in the guest room today"ria
"Don't do that to me baby..I need you..I need to sleep beside you"Sultan
"What you will do when the plan worked out?"rias face adorned with a sarcastic smile
"I won't allow it to happen at any cost"Sultan said under his breath
"We will meet somewhere else na.."Sultan asked with anticipation
"Yes.. of course"ria
"Never..you ullu.. stupid..you are just a facade for me to attain my aim"ria said under her breath and Smiled sweetly at him.she took the tray of coffee and walked to the living room followed by sullu
"Rishab...here is your favorite snack"ria placed the coffee tray on the table and forwarded her hand for the snacks.sultan handed her the snacks and sat down on the couch
"Have it rk"ria extended the plate to rk
"No ria..I am not hungry"rk
"You are not hungry or you don't want to take it..come on"she sat down close to him she leaned and took a cup of coffee rubbing her Shoulder to him in the process.sultan coughed and spit out the coffee.
"Sultan..are you a kid?..now Clean your own mess"she pointed her finger to the coffee on the floor.sultan nodded and went to collect the rag to wipe it.
Ria looked back at him.she took the coffee cup and forwarded it to his lips.rk sipped it and took it from her hand
"Good boy"she said pinching his nose.rk Smiled at her.she took a cake piece from the plate and forwarded it to his lip.
"Have it please"ria .rk took a bite from it.
Sultan came out collecting the rag and he was flabbergasted by the scene in front of him.
Ria looked at rks lips and gulped the imaginary lump in her throat.she saw a morsel of cake on the corner of his lip.she took it from his lips and rk startled from her sudden action
"It's..it's just something on your ..."ria stuttered
"It's okay"rk Smiled awkwardly.
Sultan started wiping the floor .hurt was evident in his eyes.he cleaned it and walked back to the basement.he turned to see ria eating the tiny piece she collected from rks lips and closing her eyes as if she is enjoying his lips.sultan clenched his fist and stride back to his destination.rk was reading a message on his phone and didn't notice the duos .
"Rishab.."ria called
"Hmm.."rk hummed
"I don't think Madhu was a good choice for you..you needed someone more stylish .she is an old fashioned country girl...you needs someone who understands you..support you..but look what she had done..she slapped me"ria tried to manuipulate his thoughts highlighting the slap thing.
"You are right ria...but..I can't forget her"rk said
Ria gripped at the cup and it broken injuring her hand.
"Aahh.."ria cried out
"Ria...omg..how this happened..."Sultan ran to her taking a first aid box and gently wiped it with antiseptic.ria winced at the pain and she gripped rks hand.he gently caressed her hand soothing her pain.ria closed her eyes feeling his hand on hers.sultan bandaged her hand .rks phone rang and he left rias hand and stood up .ria gripped on his hand
"Please don't go rk..it's really paining..if you stay here with me..I will feel good"ria
"Okay"rkssaid sitting near her and he received the call
"Oh..okay..thank you sir"rk said happily and cut the call
"Whats it Rishab?"ria asked
"Our project is approved by the company and they are giving us a party"rkssaid happily
"Oh..that's great..a party wow.."ria said
"Tomorrow evening"rk
"Oh..so I must buy a new dress...will u help to select a dress for me rk?"ria
"Sure"rk
"Let's go for shopping"ria stood up from her seat
"Okay.. I am also going to get ready"Sultan
Ria rolled her eyes at Sultan and gestured him to follow her.ria closed Thier door and gripped on Sultan's collar with her good hand.
"You want to ruin it..right?"ria
"No...I.. thought.. "Sultan stammered
"No..make some excuse..you understand?"ria glaring at him
"Yes"Sultan nodded

Mall

Rk parked the car in the parking lot and followed ria to the mall
"Let's go to ladies section first and then to gents"ria
Rk nodded and followed her to the ladies section.
"Can you show me some new collections"ria asked to sales Girl
"Of course mam"salesgirl said .she looked at rk wide eyed and picked some dress for her.ria explore among them and she tried one by one and asked rk about it.rk disapproved them.
"I had tried most of them..but you don't like any of these?"ria asked
"No.."rk strode through the collection and fond a dress placed on the counter.
"Here"he pointed at it
"Sir...you had already selected it na"salesgirl said
"What?.."rk
"Oh rishab you wanted to surprise me?"ria
"No ria..it's not me..she might have mistaken"rk
"No sir...you and a girl came here and selected this .you said to keep it here till you find out the matching jewelry"salesgirl said
"Wait...with a girl?..no way"ria
"I am sure mam"salesgirl
"I think she is insane..let's leave and find another one"rk
"No rishab..ria.never compromise with the second choice ..I always want the one I had paid my eyes on and moreover it's your choice"ria smiled.sweetly at him
Then the glass door to the shop opened and a man entered . everyone looked at each other astonished
"Sir...you?'the salesgirl looked at the look alikes in front of her
"Pack the dress"Abhay ignoring the two pair of eyes gwaking him
"Excuse me Mr .."ria
"Abhay... Abhay raichand"Abhay
"Hmm... well...you two look really alike.. like identical twins"ria
"I can see it...so..?"Abhay asked raising his eyebrows.
"No...I just.."ria stuttered
"Just..what?"Abhay
"I am ria.jaiswal and he is my friend rishab kundra"ria
Abhay gazed at rk this eyes filled with hatred.rk glared back
"So..?"Abhay
"We have a party tomorrow and I liked this dress reay very much ..can you give it to me?"ria asked
Abhay smirked and scratched on his chin like he was thinking.a girl entered the shop and looked at them and her eyes widened when she saw rk.she collected herself and went towards Abhay
"Let's go Abhay"pia
"But here is a situation pia...this girl needs this dress"he said sarcastically
"Are you Abhays girlfriend?"pia scoffed
"What??"ria asked embarrassed
"Abhay bought this for his girlfriend"pia smirked
"But...I love this dress and rishab like this one"ria
"You mean your bf..but what to do ..we are look alikes buty girlfriend is not you...so forget it"Abhay turned to leave
"Sir... please"ria
Abhay turned back
"I will give it to you ..but what you will do for me?"Abhay
"I will give money for it"ria
"Money...I don't want it.."Abhay smirked look at pia.she smiled back and winked at him.
"Well...what about a night with me?"Abhay asked tilting his head and leaning on the counter supporting with his elbow
"You ba****d"rk gripped his collar .Abhay shoved his hand
"Don't do this again and you will not have that hands "Abhay said at him in calmedttone
"Then don't spit out such words to my friend*rk
"Hah...it hurt you...I just wanted to see your response my look alike...well you are a flame...but this girl...she is a filth..don't touch the filth because it will dirty you and make you stink"Abhay said and left collectng the shopping bag.he turned and said
"And this dress is for someone special who deserved to wear it...not for a filth"he turned and left with pia
"Quite rude..might be some millionaire"ria
"Yeah...I don't like his vibe...I feel like I am going to see him often and hope on Earth we look alike?"rk said
"Haven't you heard about 7 people being created identical by god"ria
"Might be...ria can you select your dress..I am totally fed up"rk
"Okay.."ria sighed
Hotel room

Madhu Opened the door hearing the knock.pia entered with the shopping bag
"Here is your costume for tomorrow party"pia
"Thanks Pia..you know na how much I hate shopping"madhi
"Ya..lazy ass I Kno...btw we met your mighty rishab kundra"pia
"What? where?when?how?"Madhu
"Oops...chill girl..I will explain you "pia say down on the bed and explained her everything
Madhu sighed
"So he was with ria?"Madhu asked sadly
"Yeah...but there is something with that girl...we have to find it out"pia
"Leave it pia...we are.here for the meetings and party..we will leave this hell after this"Madhu
"Okay as you wish"pia
"But I am not gonna leave it"pia Thought

Next day
Party

Everyone was presented themeexcept the chief guests.evwryone was waiting for them eagerly and then they arrived to the party hall.
Sikky took the phone and announce
"Let's welcome our chief guest ...Mr raichand ..the GM of raichand industries and his personal manager Mrs madhubala rishab kundra... welcome sir and man"
Rk looked at Abhay and the girl behind him .he couldn't believe his eyes .he felt like he was dreaming .
Madhu took the mic from sikky and said"I think Mr sikanrher Bhatia announced my surname wrong...it's madhubala malik"she handed back the mic to sikky leaving his mouth wide open.madhu looked at rk with hatred and pain was evident in his eyes.


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Edited by magicalmirage - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update chechi..
This ria is such a bi**h.. Sultan loves her but I think she loves Rk.. Sultan & ria are not married..?? I think so..

If I say truth I didn't like abhay's move.. Why did he say the dress was for his gf.. ?? It will only make problem more worse when rk see madhu in it ..
& madhu.. She said she is madhubala Malik.. Did she forget that she is married.. Why this much hatred for Rk.. They both done the same mistake..
& Rk is just considering ria as his friend & not trying to create any facade but she's trying to make him jealous..
What she is going to prove by this.. ??

If say truth she hurted him the most & couldn't bear it when it comes to her..
Did she even think how it feels for him..??
These both are just dumbos.. Letting the ego guide them...
Both deserve punishment here so I don't think madhu punishing him is a nice thing..
They both deserve the same...

Madhu was behaving all stupid & Rk did a stupidity because of her.. Hope they sort out everything soon ..
I have a doubt.. Did my comment become a bit violent.. Lolzz...
Sorry chechi i couldn't help it reading madhu's dialogue at the last part.. Somehow I feel she did a wrong by saying that because I could see how hurt Rk was then.. Why he was suffering everything without his mistake..

I'm saying this from Rk pov may be things will be different from madhu's pov.. But pls chechi.. Don't hurt him more.. I really feels he doesn't deserve more punishment..
Update soon.. Thanks for the pm..
Edited by aishu007 - 7 years ago

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