||~RM FS~Mere rang main rangne waale~Holi sp~Updtd Pt3&4@p6~(18/3)

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Hello friends ..happy holi to all of you!!🤗
wishing you all a holi😃
filled with colors of love and happiness ..fun and joy.👍🏼
have a safe holi.😳

enjoy and have a great time ahead.🤗






i have written new Rishbala story ..its holi special
hope you like it.😳

i am posting here two parts of this Rishbala FS ..
wanted to post whole story at once as its written specially for holi but some protion yet to be written 😳so thought to post the parts which are ready 😃and will post remaining parts hopefully on Monday or in a day or two..till than enjoy these parts ..😳

celebrate holi with our unique couple Rishbala ❤️
whose Holi was the most unique on Indian Telly..👏




scroll down for part 1 and 2 in next posts..and pls give your lovely feedback ..and tell me howz it?😳

thanks friends.❤️





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Madhu said "Rk here is your coffee ..have it na ..o/w it will become cold.."she was trying to wake Rk up but he wasn't waking up ..
she went near him and sat beside him on bed side ..cupped his face and said again ..Rk ..and with a sudden pull her face touched RK's face ..she realized it than that Rk holding her and was awake ..

"Rk tum jaag rahe ho ?"

"Yes biwi ..main jaag raha hoon.."he winked

"Not fair ..main kab se utha rahi hoon tumhe aur tum .."she made angry face ..

"Everything is fair in love ..war and holi.."he embraced her in his arms more firmly ..

"Acchaji ..ye quote toh kuch aur tha nahi ?"

"Haan par Rk apne quote khud banata hai.."he rubbed his cheeks against hers ..which made Madhu blush hard ..

"Leave me Rk ..I have to go .."she said all shy ..

"Sure will leave you but to again hold you ..after all its holi my dear.."he whispered in her ears ..and loose his grip ..she was about to go when he again hold her while standing up and put some color
(Gulal) on her face making her all surprise and hinted the packet under his pillow which wasn't visible to her before ..

"Happy holi biwi ..only I have right to color you first .."he softly spread the color in her face

Her eyes widened ..she wasn't expecting this ..its their first holi and her husband Rk is making it all the more special ..

"Rk ..happy holi to you too.."

"How can I miss coloring you first ? I was waiting and was pretending to sleep .."he lift her chin up and said lovingly ..

She was so happy and than she quickly picked up the packet and with gulal colored his face too ..

"I also don't want to miss coloring you first .."

"I am already colored in color of your love .."

"Me too "she said with eyes down..

"Today you don't need to turn red . pink etc ..coz today real colors are there ..he he .."

She hugged him..he too reciprocated..

"I love you biwi.."

"I love you too pati."

"Now do me a favor ..let's play holi .."he started singing and lifted her up in his arms ..took her to washroom ..opened the shower and kept singing while she was stooping him ..both were becoming wet and holi fever raised on her too ..she too joined him in singing and started singing..he hugged her so tightly ..
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She came in senses with the ringing of the door bell..it was Padmini ..her mother ..she got up and opened the door ...what the ?Madhu thought ..she was dreaming about Rk ? She was watching a show on TV but when holi scene came ..why she was imagining him and her in place of hero and heroine?
Now scene was ended but her thoughts continued ..

She is missing him but he don't want to talk to her either ..

But than also she was feeling shy for what she was Imagining..
Madhu this all happens in TV or movies only ..not in real life ..you are mad ..

her mother came and said "Madhu are you ok ? You opened up door so late. beta I know your condition but.."

"Maa I am fine ..don't worry ..sorry I didn't heard the bell..I was .."

"Its ok Madhu ..but you said you don't want to play holi ..tell me what will I say to everyone ? they think that you and Rk are happily married ..we are with you but. you know ..I mean .."

"Maa ..I won't play holi like before but I won't let anyone know about me and Rk ..I have taken this step to know about his feelings ..but I won't let it affect you ..sasumaa ..you all ..so don't worry about me ..i will handle it and if I want your help ..will tell you .."
"Madhu beta..I know you are my strong girl .."his father also came and listened their convo..
"Yes she is .."Padmini added and both got emotional and hugged her..she too with teary eyes hugged them both ..


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In Rk mansion ..

Where is Madhu? Maa!! "

"Why are you screaming ? she went to her home..you know na."

"But she didn't came back ..why?? she must have met her mom -her dad by now ..so why not here ? "

"Coz its Holi ..her mother called her and she went after asking me ..and now she will stay there till holi at least ..and if she wants after words too..and good na ..you don't want her so you should be happy.."Radha asked angrily..

"What the hell?? Now when I need to talk to her ..she is not here!!and she can be there after holi too !! hell no..i want to talk to her .."

"Why ? when she was here you were ignoring her and now searching ..Rishu you are impossible..i understand that you didn't wanted this marriage ..and till one month ..i thought you are not accepting her but you will afterwords..its not her fault that your father and her father fixed this marriage and she started liking you too but you neither said no to this marriage ..coz of your father fear and nor you accepted her after marriage..she tried hard to come close to you but you ..sometime made excuse and sometime was genuinely busy ..but that was not the way..you couldn't say anything to your father ..the reason which I also got to know later on that ..you didn't want marriage early ..you are a superstar whose image matters a lot ..you don't want to be married at least for some years more ..but what is her fault in this ? but you thought its your right to ignore her..to being rude to her ..its two months now and now when she has gone ..you need her ..can I ask why?"

"Stop mom ..pls stop ..for God sake .."

"Why should I stop ? tell me ..good she has gone ..now you must be happy."

"God I need to confess to her that I love her..and when she is not around ..I miss her ..badly ...her absence is affecting me ..i realized it now..that I love her ..yes ..yes..I love her. .so I need to talk to her ..now ..yes I am late to realize it and regret it too..but now can't wait more.."he changed his expressions from angry to sad ..to surprised ..to happy ..finally he said loudly.."I love you Madhubala "

Radha hearing it and by the time Bittuji also came ..and got to know the situation..

"Really ..you love her now ? or making stories ? "

"Maa I love her and I want to tell this and want to apolozise..pls understand .."he hold Radha's shoulder..

Radha face beamed with joy .."If its true than go son ..and rectify your mistake..meet her and tell her .."

He nodded in yes .."Maa I will you all later. How it happened ? But right now need to go."

"Sure ..go ..I am so happy ..for you and for my sweet ..bahu Madhu..but remember ..she must be angry so.."

"I know..and I will manaofy her..and confess her my true feelings."he kissed her for head and left.
Radha said to Bittuji to go with Rk and she will not tell Madhu about Rk ..let her surprise but she will tell Padmjni so that she can be aware about it..
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Rk and Bittuji in car..

"Chief do you really love bhabhiji?"

"Bittuji ..I hate her. "

"Than why you said you love her ? "confused Bittuji said.

"Bittuji I love her. . I said na in front of mom ..can't you listen properly ?why asking again ?"

"Oh chief ..sorry ..i was just confirming whether you are going to tell her for real or some .."

"Shut up Bittuji ..will you ?..i am in a good mood but not that much that I want to listen your silly questionire ..this is head phone ..listen to music and don't disturb me.."

Bittuji thought its better to not talk this time..
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Rk reached Madhu's society
Madhu opened the door ..Padmini and Shams her left just than to wish holi to other society members ..Padmini left Lil early coz she wanted Rk-Madhu to be alone ..


Madhu surprised seeing Rk ..though she was expecting him to come ..she thought to leave home so that if he has some feelings for her than he must come but now she was really surprised .coz when Rk was not even talking to her properly ..what made him come here?


She thought let's see for what he has came ..is he missing her ? She was missing him badly ..but she was fed up with his behavior ..so left home ..how long she tolerate his ignorance and why? He should not have marry her if he don't like her..she fell in love with him ..but enough is enough ..he has to be clear ..what he wants ? She is angry with him too..what he thinks of himself ? and her mind and heart was divided ..on one hand she was happy that he came ..and on the other hand ..she was in angry mode too..but she calmed herself ..took a deep breath and thought .. now see what he is up to?
"You here?"she said.






part 2 in next post.😳
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"You here?"


"I can't come here ? Is it so ?"

"No but ..ok come inside .."she get them side

Bittuji greeted her and she too ..when they came to know that her parents went to hall in ground floor to meet other members where all will celebrate holi party holi party ..he said ..he will join them later and going to meet them ..he left ..

Madhu wanted him to come but she was angry and hurt too ..she thought ..first see what he wants ? he is unpredictable .

"You didn't went in holi party ? "

Rk was feeling lil awkward ..how he will confess ? Don't know how she will react? But RK being RK didn't said at first. .he also wanted to see what's in her mind.

"No..you didn't go to holi party in studio ? Which papa(she was referring to her FIL Mohan kundra) organized? "

"No.." He thought in this way he won't able to tell till evening so he stood up and went near her..

"Madhu I .. I .."

Someone knocking at door ..she opened and greeted that person ..he said something and she gave him plate full of Ghujiyas(Special sweetdish of Holi) saying that to take these special Ghujiyas she made .. he smiled and left..

She put more Ghujiyas to plate ..and asked him if he wants something ? Cold drink..juice ..coffee ..tea..water..anything to eat..he said "Juice but of .."

"I know mix fruit juice ..your favorite .."she knows that ?my fav juice ?..than he thought why special ghujiyas ? For someone special ? how can someone be more special than me in her life ? I will eat them .."

he didn't gave a second thought and picked one ghujiya from another plate ..keeping there.

she was bringing juice ..but when she saw him having Ghujiya in his hand ..she yelled "Rk don't eat that !!!!"

"Why ? I will ..they are special na ..so I must eat them .."

"Rk listen ..pls stop .."

But before she could say anything ..he had one bite..Madhu gave shocking expression and next moment Rk was screaming .."Aah!!!!
OMG!! Chilli !! Mirchi in Ghujiyas ???? Who put them ? You ? How can you ?"


Madhu went near her murmuring "Tujhko mirchi lagi toh main kya karoon?" she couldn't control her laugh .. his face became red due to chilli...he was coughing badly and his eyes watering ..he hold him tightly and asked "What you just said ?"


Madhu felt bad for him .. she stopped him but he is RK ..and as usual he did not listened to her..

Some Juice in her hands fell upon him as he hold her tightly and she got a jerk ..she realized and wiped his tears with one hand and let him drink some juice ..

"Give me water ..can you ??"

His tone made her smile again ..she found him so cute that moment ..she hinted with her eyes that he is holding her ..he loose his grip ..she bought water "Look I stopped you but as usual you didn't listen ..the Superstar ..Rk thinks ..he knows everything .but he don't .."
she laughed again .."Sorry sorry ..ok I wont laugh now ..(she found him glaring with fiery eyes..)but don't stare me like this ..you was wrong here ..couldn't you ask why they are special? "

His tone came down ..yes why he didn't ask ? He should or should stop if she was saying to not eat them..

"How would I know their speciality? Ok fine .. tell me now ..why you did this?"still he was coughing ..she patted his back in order to give him relief ..
he felt better ..she gave him another Ghujiya but sweet one not chilly filled. .

He felt better than..she explained than that these chilli filled Ghujiyas are for the people who misbahave with anyone in holi party ..every year some ppl do weird things on holi taking advantage of festival so this time we decided to do this..no one else eat them ..so these are special na ..but he thought its for someone special..

Knowing the reason Rk eyes went down ..he misunderstood her ..
"Sorry .."he said

"Rk the superstar is saying sorry ..OMG!!"

"See.." he was about to say something when someone knocked the door again..this time another man..Madhu hugged him and wished him happy holi ..he was ready to color her but she denied ..he agreed ..she than gave him another plate full of cutlets ..and she kept some cutlets in plate saying that she has kept his share..when he will finished his work ..he can come and have them..she will make tea also for him..she knows that he's fond of cutlets made by her..


Rk got furious ..and was jealous too..why she is behaving like this ?? kept cutlets specially for that guy ?why? no way ..anything special made by Madhu is must be his first ..no matter what..


She was washing her hands meanwhile he picked up the cutlets and ate them one by one .. Madhu came near him and saw he is eating them..
"Haww ..you have eaten all? I have kept for him.."she made baby face..
"So what ? you can made for him some other time..i was hungry so I ate them..and they are yummy to.."


He said as if nothing happened and Madhu's face was like what happened to him ?

"Thanks superstar ..you liked the cutlets ..but I can make more for you ..those were his share..he must be coming on sometime ..so ..

"He can eat these chilly filled ghujia ..if he wish too"he said very calmly but one can understand his feelings seeing his face.

"Aww someone is jealous ? I didn't about your possessive side Rk ..my God ..bad haan ..you can let him eat these mirchi wali ghujia?? "

"What do I do ? now cutlets are in my stomach now.. "Seeing Rk s face Madhu laughed..he made a baby face as if he was feeling guilty for eating without asking ..she relieved him

"Rk chill..he is like my bro..his name is Sultan ..but pls don't assume much.."

Uff again he got it wrong ..what is this happening? Is he complicating things more ? he is not saying for which he came there ..now he must say..and seeing her b'ful face he is loosing himself ..why he realized it so late that she is such a sweet girl..he suddenly started feeling urge to hug her ..to tell her ..he went lil closer to her


"I am sorry .."

"Aww its ok..i mean in this way you will doubt everyone nah !!chalo leave it ..i will give him something else to eat and if you liked the cutlets ..i will make more..ok ..you want something else?"

He couldn't say anything but kept staring at her..her blue eyes..her glowing face ..she was looking damn gorgeous..he picked up glass of juice but didn't drink it ..rather looking at her without blinking ..

And she too was lost in his deep brown eyes..he looked so hadnsome..unknowingly they came closer and their lips were inched apart .. they were having an eyelock.



To be cont.








Thanks friends.❤️

Deepti😳

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Sending pms ..😃
ignore mistakes if any.😳
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Wohooo..
Am the first one to like :)

Much needed post..

Holi is here..
And without rishbala..
Holi dont feel like holi even..

Banner superb DD...
Oh.. How i missed the holi epi..

Gosh.. I love this rk..
And is sooo admirable..

Doh.. Madhu was dreaming all those..
And then Rk is there to put colour on his biwi first..

Hahahaa ..
Had kar di Rk..
He eat mirchi.. In jealousy..

And the cutlet..
I was laughing when he kept eating one by one..
Lolz..

Awesome piece Deep..
Thankyou so much for writing this :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy Holi Deep..[BR]Nice start..[BR]Rk didn't like madhu at first..[BR]He is missing her after left from home.[BR]How many obstacles for his proposal!![BR]Poor boy..[BR]waiting for his proposal..[BR]
Nice thread Deep..
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Awesome start.Rishbala r married n our hero has not realised his feelings.Love possessive , jealous n confused Rk. Banner reminds holi episode n now I will see that episode again.
Wishing you n all a very happy , colourful safe Holi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy holi deepti..
nice story..
hope rk will soon realise his feelings for madhu..
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Happy holi. .
beautiful story. .with beautiful banner. .
possessive rk and his cute wife. .
dream part was so romantic. .
in reality ...
rishbala are married. .
rk didn't want to get married so early. .
so he ignored madhu. .
madhu come her parents home. .
and rk miss her ..
come to confess his love ...
and gets jealous. .after seeing madhu made special gujiya and cutlets for boys .
thanks for pm. .
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Happy And Safe Holi Deeps and to everyone.
Loved the update it's fantastic.
Congrats on the new story.
RK is jealous.
Madhu is angry.
Holi is going to bring them near.
Thanks for the PM dear

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