RISHBALA SS- Love Triangle...(Last part pg 20 dt 17/4)

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Hi pals..
i am gonna start a new story of rishbala..
Rachana chechi aka magicalmirage told me about writing a story from one of the best malayalam movie shajahanum pareekuttiyum..its plot was bit confused one becoz its not a love story but it has love..if i write the actual version of that movie then rishbala cant be united..they will seprate at last..but i cant do that..so just made some changes in the plot & updating a prologue..rachana chechi i am dedicating this story to you...as usual plz ignore grammer errors..so here it starts..








Love Triangle



prologue




city hospital [mumbai]



"Rishab open ur eyes slowly..."dr.sultan tells to rk who is lying on the bed..he slowly opened his eyes & looks around..

"rk r u ok now.."dr.sultan..

"hmm.."he nodded.

"fine..let me tell ur parents that u r perfectly all right.."when he was about to leave rk holds his hands..

"sultan..''rk.


~.~.~.~.~ ~.


in a chawl at mumbai


"hey madhu...come fast.."ria knocked on ms.madhubala malik's door..the door opened with a sound...

"i am already ready..''madhu tells with a beautiful smile.


~.~.~.~.~.~.~.


"autyji...u know na rishab is not just a friend for me..he is like my brother..but am really sad to tell u that our rishab is affected by amnesia.."dr.sultan.

"what..sultan beta.."radha asked in shock.

"yes auntyji...he forgot all the things that happened in a particular period...if say correct he forgot all things from past 3 years.."sultan..

"how can u say that..my rishab will surely recognize me.."saniya tells in confidence..

"no saniya plz understand..he will not recognize u..he dont know u r his fiance.."sultan.

"u plz move from my way.."saniya.

"then ok..go.."sultan..she enters & the very next moment they hears a sound from inside & saniya came out by crying..

"what happend beti..y r u crying..?"mohan.

"uncle..Rk throw vase on me.."saniya.

"for what..?"mohan.

"dont know uncle..i just hugged him & he says go & hug ur boyfriend pramod..he dont have any memory loss..he remember everything.."saniya.

"i told u na he only forgot about the past 3 years..all others he know very well..& anytime he can regain his memory till that v can wait.."sultan.


~.~.~.~.~.~.~.


"madhu...here v reached.."ria.

"ria..i am going.."she runs inside the hospital by calling rishab..



"rishu..how u feeling now..?"radha.

"hm..better.."rk replied..suddenly madhu opened the door & came towards rk..he looks her confused..

"Rk.."she hugs him and cries..all present there r shocked..

"who r u..?"he breaks the hug.

"what..rk i am madhu...ur madhu.."rk.

"which madhu..i dont know u.."rk.

"rk..dont u remember me..?"madhu cupped his face..some hazily images came to his mind & he pressed his head..he looks her..

"Rk.."they hears another voice and saw deepali comming inside by crying..

"Rk what happend to u.."she came near him & tries to hug him but madhu pulls her away..

"who r u...?"madhu.

"who r u lady..i want to talk to my rk.."deepali.

"your rk..?he is mine.."madhu.

"no..u go away.."deepali sits near rk.

"rk i am your dips.."she cries.

"who r u..i dont know u both..plz get out from here.."rk shouted..

"Rk.."madhu & dips...







so how is this friends..
if u like this story plz hit like and drop your valuable comments..







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Insaneniyu thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start
Rk affected by amnesia he doesn't remember madhu saniya n dipali was he dating three of them?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for the story aishu.nice start.continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for dedicating me the story
Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story. .
oh god ..
one boy...3 girl..and he didn't remember anyone. .
it's crazy. .
early waiting for update. .
thanks for pm ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Awesome start,
Rk is having amnesia,
Saniya is his fiance but he remembered her as someone's Gf,
he didn't even recognized both Madhu n Dipali,
is he dating with 3 girls,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice start. lol u put rk in amalas place. do update soon. thnks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aishu congrats on the new story.
OMG one RK dating 3 girls at a time or more to come.
He is not having memory loss just pretending to be like that.
Sultan is a doc and his friend too.
RK is doing this with some intention or is it to find out who loves him truly.
Curious to know what happens next.
Continue soon waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start.was he dating 3 girls together?
may b dips has onesided luv for him or she ditched him after which he fell in luv wid madhu but due to sum misundrstnding he got engagd to sumone else.cont soon dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrates for new one aishu..
Sema start..
Rk is affected by Amnesia..
Saniya is his finance..
Who is this madhu,dips?
Thanks for pm.
update soon.

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