Rishbala FF Mislead In Love completed page26 DT 24/4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is a new story.it is based on a Malayalam movie.When aishu requested for a story based on that film I was pretty much confused because I didn't watch that movie.then she sent me the entire story .After reading it I was really blank.but today an idea strike me and I decided to pen it.so... The story dedicated to my beloved aishu.hope this may be a new concept

Mislead In Love
Prologue

"it's really a busy day."mukund
"Yeah"rk smiled while cleaning the table.
"I am feeling so much tired.hw could you manage to stay awake at late night "mukund
"It's me...Rk"rk
"Yeah we are struggling for our livelihood.So we have to do this."mukund
"Han mukund... Tomorrow we have to pay our college fees"rk
"Do you have enough money?"mukund
"Yes I have saved it from the salary..."rk
"Oh...Buddy how could you?"mukund
"I am not having any expenses like you.i am always thinking of future and so I won't booze or partying like you"rk
"Yes boss I know"mukund
"Mukund I have an aim to achieve.So it's my only concern"rk
"Yeah...I too have the aim to get a good job..But parties and drinks I can't leave that"mukund
"Hmm..Girls too"rk smirked
"Yes of course... Girls ..They are really expensive yaar..They always expect gifts."mukund said in a sad voice
"Then y you go behind those ria tia dia pia.."rk
"Just for fun..If we didn't enjoy life in this age ..Then when I supposed to?"mukund
"You are not a teen aged boy mukund.you are 25 and doing your pg.act like a mature man"rk
"Oh...ho dadaji you are 250 years "mukund
Rk laughed."not 250...Cut that zero ."rk
"Rk..."mukund
"I know mukund ..I saved the money and I will give you..But you should pay back in two months."rk
"OK rk I swear...I will give you on time...I will save money when hotel manager gives the salary"
"Okay"rk
"Rk can you clean that dishes...I am so tired..Just want to take a short nap"mukund
Rk rolled his eyes"mukund"
"Please ..."Mukund
"Okay..."rk smiled .Mukund went to the staff room to take rest.rk looked at his watch it's 11:30.the town is almost silent.few vehicles are passing.noone seems to stop for food.
Rk put the closed board on the glass door.he went to the cash box and began to settle the accounts.he heard a knock at the door and saw a girl standing out side .He wondered because she was alone.he went near the door and opened it.the girl entered and looked at him accusingly
"What?"rk
Her eyes welled up .
"Mam...How can I help you...We are closed..."rk
The girl came near him and slapped on his face.
Rk looked at her confused.



Please like and comment.and of course be open to say it's a damn ..Boring repetition😊😊












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GOODLUCKANGEL thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start.For a change,Rk is a waiter,i guess.strange she slapped him n was giving him accusing looks.Is she madhu n mistook him to b sumone else or she is very rich (daughter of hotels owner in which RK works)cont soon dear.I like it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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RK is waiter and also studying.
Seems the girl is Madhu. Did she mistook him for someonr else.
Interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for your new story,
Nice start,
Rk is a waiter and also studying,
who is that girl why she slapped him,is she madhu,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrates for new story ka..
Nice start..
Rk is doing part time for studying..
Who did she slap him?
Waiting ka..
Update soon...
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start
Y that girl slapped rk
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting start
rk nd mukund are doing job for their study
rk want to achieve success in his life
who is this girl?
first meeting nd slap 😆
Congrats for new story di
thanx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start...seems like the girl is madhu n she thought rk as mukind n slap him coz mukund has so many affairs n she may beloong to someone he broken heart...
Just guessing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats di for new story. ..
you have handful going story. ..
6 story. ..how you managed. ..
back to the story. .
rk and mukund do job for study. .
who is the girl. .she slap rk. .
was she misunderstood rk? ?
early waiting for update
thanks for pm. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Interesting start why did slap n looked at him like that?

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