RISHBALA FF-FOR MY LOVE last part pg 29 Dt 3/3 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Interesting concept
Eagerly waiting for next update 😊

Thank you..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Congrats for new story. .
oh ...I love supernatural. .story. ..
superb start. .
padmini give baby to shamsher. .and
she said she is not ordinary child. .
aishu you make radha. ..shamsher wife. .!!
first time I read radha shamsher as pair. .
early waiting for update. .
thanks for pm. .
update soon. .

Thank you sapna..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: dharsii

Nice start Aishu..
Congrates for new story..
Madhu is not a normal child.Who will come after 18 years?
Radha & malik are pair here.different pair...
Waiting..
update soon.

Thank you akka..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

awesome start aishu. continue soon

Thank you so much..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aishu congrats on the new story.

Padmini gave her daughter to Shamsher and vanished in thin air, wow supernatural powers Madhu too must be having, interesting prologue.
Continue soon waiting to read more of it.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you ananya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Supervampire

Congrats for new story

I love supernatural story alot
padmini gave her baby to shamsher nd disappear
his wife radha dead
he named her madhubala
madhu is not an normal girl
thanx for pm Aish
interesting prologue

Thank you so much..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

FOR MY LOVE

Part-1

Shamseer saw a chain in madhu's neck...it has a..but only half part...half part of a locket...he saw some special patterns it..but he did'nt understand anything so just leaves it and thinks "what happend in her 18 year...who come then..no i wont allow anyone to take her away from me..."he looks madhu and said.."madhu plz dont leave alone your papa.."little madhu smiled...
"Papa.."madhu's voice made shamseer woke up..
"Good morning..''she gave him tea & leaves..shamseer sips the tea & thinks "oh...y i saw this today...its all over..then y..?y i saw that incident today..it happens before 18 years..then y now..?"he thinks for a while..
"18 years..oh no today madhu's 18 b'day..''he looks at the calender hanged on the room..padmini's words came to his mind.."take care of her till she reach 18..after that he will come..''
"But who..?"shamseer..
"Papa.."madhu called him from kitchen..
"Ha..coming madhu.."shamseer gets up & goes to wash room..madhu comes to hall with serving bowl in her hand...shamseer came their & takes his seat..madhu serves him food...madhu sees him sitting like a statue without having the food..
"Papa.."madhu snapped..
"Hah.."shamseer came out of his thoughts..
"What happed to u.."madhu.
"Nothing dear..today is your b'day na.."shamseer..
"Oh..i forgot about it..papa u remembered this hah.."madhu.
"How can i forget this day.."shamseer.
"My sweet papa.."madhu hugs him..
"Today is sunday na..today i have lot of work..bye papa.."madhu.She waves her hand and leaves from there..madhu is working as a saleswoman in a textile shop...madhu reach there by 9:00 am..she looks on her wrist watch & says.."oh madhu..u r late...''she rushes inside...for her luck the owner of that textile sultan excused her...
She stars her work...
In malik manision shamsser is sitting in the sofa with a worried face..padmini's words resonate in his mind...he take his cell & dialed madhu's number...
"Hello papa.."madhu..
"Madhu..r u ok..?"shamseer.
"I am ok..but i thing u f not ok... is any problem..?"madhu.
"Nothing..i just..ok bye.."shamseer.
"But pa.."he cuts the call before madhu tell anything..she thinks for and then move back to her work...
"Can u help me...?"madhu hears a voice & looks..she saw a hansome young man standing before her..their eyes met...but she did'nt notice one thing..the locket in her neck began to glow brightly...

plz read like & comment friends...
Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Awesome update
Now madhu is 18 year old n shamseer is worried that who is coming for madhu
I m really curious to know what is madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update,
now Madhu is 18yrs old,
Shamsher is scared of Madhu leaving him and go with that person,
Sultan is also there he is textile owner,
in the end Madhu met that person
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Supetb update
Who is the guy
Is he rk??

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