Rishbala || Never Let You Go || Shot 1 - Pg. 6

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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting start !

Nice plot.. that guy must be Rk bcoz it's his nature being pompous always LOL.

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Ronita03

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Radhika_G
Congrats for your new story...😊
Nice start dear...👏👏
I think madhu bumped in to RK.. RK ahh irresistible...and Madhu doing for number..😆
Madhu should find her Mother in safe...
Waiting for your next part...
Please do continue soon...
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Thanks. . Keep reading 😊

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Ronita03

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: mahimesha
Interesting😃

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GBR

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Amazing intro

Its interesting to see how madhu gonna found padmini..n is that rk n madhu's encounter? , its awesome

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manna43

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nice start.Madhu in search of her mother bumped into rk .Rk n his attitude is there.continue soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: manna43
Nice start.Madhu in search of her mother bumped into rk .Rk n his attitude is there.continue soon.

Haha.. Without attitude our RK is incomplete no.. 😛 and thanks

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting prologue dear...curious to know what will happen after...continue soon...

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Very interesting start..
And good to see u back..
I still miss ur scrabble drabble..
So, madhu is in search of her mother.. And her mom left her & madhu is product of unnamed relation..!!
Then this guy.. Hahaa.. Full of attitude..
Loved their convo..
Is madhu sure he only made her fall or may be the guy didnt realise that he made her fall..
Either way, they met & wished not to meet ever..!!
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Ronita03

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank you so much for likes and the comments. It really means a lot to me. Keep showering your love guys.

Never Let You Go

Shot - 1

"Radha.. Radha.. Where's my blue shirt?" Mohan shouted from his room while searching for the shirt, Radha walked in saying, "That must be in your closet Mohan."

"No. That wasn't there. You check." Radha shook her head and about to walk towards the closet when she heard another shout from outside, "Maa.. Where's my nail Polish remover."

"Trishna.. Check your dressing table properly. " Radha shouted while searching Mohan's shirt.

"Did you find my shirt?" Mohan asked as he was being late for office.

"I'm searching.. Have some patience. I remember, I kept it here..."

"Maa.. Maa..!" Sikky walked in the room. "Now what problem you have Sikky?" Radha sighed.

"Maa, I didn't find my shoes."

"Its strange. From morning everyone didn't find their stuffs.. And usually it never happens before." Mohan said thoughtful.

Sikky looked on when something strikes his mind, "No dad. You're wrong. It only happens when..." Sikky paused and raised his one eye brow at Mohan.

"... When he comes." Mohan completed. Radha looked at them confuse, "What you both are talking about?"

"Where's your chotey nawab..?" Mohan asked scratching his forehead.

"You mean Rishu?" Radha sarcastically asked and laughed a little saying, "You forget.. Today he has flight. Then how come he arrived?"

"No maa.. Dad is right. Only he can do such things. You know he can go any extent to bother us."

"But Sikky if he arrived then he would have met with me."

"Radha do you think he would?" Mohan asked. "You go and check his room. I'm damn sure, he is at his room or you ask Munna or Patil. They'll definitely know something." Mohan added.

"Okay." They walked out from their room when a old lady climbed down the stairs. "Mummyji..!" Radha hold her.

"Radha.. Have you seen my rocking chair?" Radha looked at Mohan and Sikky and they sighed in frustration.

"I told you." Mohan shook his head.

"Dadi.. Come you sit here. I'll find your chair." Sikky made her sit on the sofa and they were about to go upstairs when few people walked in house.

Hearing their footsteps, Mohan asked "Yes?"

"Mr Kundra.. Is everything fine at your place?"

Mohan stared at the people confuse, "Yes. But why are you asking?"

"No, last night I saw someone entering your house through the balcony. So, I thought he was thief."

"What..? You saw yesterday someone entering my house through balcony and came today to inform you.. How stupid people you are..! Did you come to inform me or to show the circus here? GET OUT..!" Mohan shouted angrily, the people left embarrassed.

"Calm down Mohan." Radha calm him down and they headed to his room.

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Radha walked in the room and shocked to see the scenario. "Rishu?" She gasped his name from her mouth. Sikky and Mohan walked in and gets shocked seeing him standing on his Dadi's rocking chair, he was fixing a picture on the wall. Dadi also walked in and saw the scene, she got furious.

"Rishu...???" She shouted and ran to him and hit on his bump with her stick, "Get down.. How dare you to stand in your grandpa's chair.. I said GET DOWN..!" She shouted and beat him.

"Dadi.. Dadi.." He tried to defend himself when Sikky ran to him to rescue his brother.

Rishabh climbed down the chair and rubbed his arms when his eyes fall on his parents who were furiously glaring at him.

"Maa.. I didn't.." Trishna walked in his room and paused seeing Rishabh there but her eyes fall on something else. "My nail polish remover.." She ran up to bed and grabbed. "What are you doing with it bhai?"

"Uh..! I.. Uh.."

"Dad your shirt.." Sikky pointed when Mohan almost forget his anger and ran to the bed and grabbed his shirt.

"What are you doing with it?" Mohan asked.

"Where's my shoe Rishu?" Sikky asked.

"Why did you bring my rocking chair here?" Dadi asked.

"When did you arrive Rishu? Why didn't you meet me?" Radha fumed at him and everyone showered him with questions and Rishabh tried to answer them but they were not listening and enquired.

"SHUT UP...!" Rishabh said placing his both palm on his ears. Everyone became silent. "Enough is enough." Rishabh stared at them and snatched the things from their hands, he looked at the rocking chair when Dadi stood in front of the chair, he shook his head and looked at them.

"Dad.. This is your shirt.. I took it in morning to wear it as I didn't unpack my luggage yet but unfortunately some ink fall on your shirt, so I couldn't wear it." He said handing the shirt to his father and then handed the remover to Trish saying, "I took it to erase the ink from the shirt but it didn't work. Completely useless thing."

Rishabh looked at Dadi saying, "Your rocking chair was placed near to my room and I needed something to stand on and I found it near my hand.."

"... And mom.. Yes.. I came last night. Actually I landed in India before a day then I spend a day at Pune with my friend and yesterday evening I boarded on train and reached at home around 1am. I saw the main door locked, so I thought to enter through the balcony." He said looking at Radha. "Now everyone got your answer. Let me go.." He said and walked out from room making everyone shocked. Seeing him walking out, Radha called, "But Rishu..!" She followed him along with the others when Sikky realized he didn't get his shoe.

"Rishu where's my shoe?"

Rishabh stopped and smiled saying, "On its place." He said showing his feet to Sikky.

"Why did you wear my shoe?"

"Relax brother. Some of my shoes are lying in my room. Go and wear anyone which you like." He said patting on Sikky's shoulder.

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"Uncle.. I reached and took a hotel room but soon I'll find a suitable house for me. You please don't worry and pray to God, so that I can find my mumma soon." Madhu talked with uncle over the phone and then hanged up the call.

"Madhu, though you assured uncle but where will you find home? But to get a home you need to earn first. You have to do some job." Madhu thought and searched for some job in the news paper when he eyes fall on a Ad. "Kundra industry..! I think I should try there." She thought.

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Radha was serving the breakfast to her family when Mohan said, "Ask Rishu to come with us in office."

"Mohan, he arrived today only. Let him enjoy few days." Radha tried to convince on her son's behalf.

"He enjoyed enough. Now it's time to do some work. Ask him to get ready, he is joining from today." He said sternly.

"Okay." Saying this she was going to leave when Trishna came saying, "Where are you going? Bhai isn't in his room."

"Where he gone now?" Radha looked on. "God knows when will he change his behavior..! Which girl will agree to marry him..!"

"Someone who must be mad will agree to marry him maa.." Sikky chuckled.

"Ma'am.. I've clean the guest house." A servant informed when Radha nodded and asked him to leave.

"Guest house?" Mohan curiously asked.

"Yes Mohan. I was thinking to keep the house on rent. No one use the house so I thought it can be use in someone's help. I even talked with a broker, he said if any family approach, he will inform us." Radha said.

"That's a good idea. But keep it in mind that Rishu shouldn't know about it or else he would pay his pranks on them to throw them out." Mohan warned and everybody agreed.

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"The job is your Miss Madhubala." The manager of Kundra industry interviewed Madhu and signed her as the employee of their company.

"Thank you sir. Sir, can I join the office after a day? Actually I shifted here recently and I need to settle down somewhere."

"Sure..!"

"Thank you." Madhu smiled and took leave from there.

She walked out from the office and wondered what to do when her eyes fall on a coffee shop. Madhu walked in the shop and took her sit, she ordered a coffee for herself when she saw the card in her hand, she called the broker.

"Mr Kashyab? I am Madhubala. Actually I got your number from Kundra industry." Madhu said.

"Yes. How can I help you?"

"I want a house to live. No matter big or small but the area should be nice and the family as well."

"Okay ma'am.."

"Please arrange for it as soon as you can." She said and hang up the call. "I just hope that I get a nice house so that I can resume my work." She thought when she saw a guy walked in the cafeteria while talking on phone and took the opposite chair of her. That time the waiter served the coffee to Madhu and without saying anything he grabbed her coffee mug and his action made her fume. He was about to take a sip when Madhu quickly approached to him and placed her palm on the cup to stop him, he looked up at her and they shocked to see each other. "You?" Both said in unison.

"Are you following me?" She asked sarcastically, "Anyways..! Keep the coffee."

But RK continue his talk on the phone and about to take sip, again Madhu stopped him saying," Keep the coffee." But RK didn't listen to her, so she snatched the phone from his hand.

"Are you mad? What's wrong with you?" He asked irritated.

"Such a manner less guy you are.. Without my permission you sat on my table and then took my coffee. I said keep the coffee."

"One second..! Is it your coffee? I mean is there your name written?" RK asked while checking in the glass. When they were arguing, few people were watching name when Madhu said to them, "What are you all watching? Go and do your work."

"No.. You also check. Did you find your name on the glass?" RK asked showing her the glass.

"It's my coffee. I ordered it and I reserved the table first. What happened? Keep it." She glared at him.

RK rolled his eyes and took sit saying, "Are you my boss? What would I listen to you. I'll have the coffee." Saying this he was about to take the sip but Madhu again stopped him, "No. This is my coffee and I will have it." Saying this Madhu snatched the glass from his hand and about to take her sit, RK took her sit and snatched it and they argued when suddenly Madhu's phone rang, "Yes Mr Kashyab? Where? Okay.. No.. No.. I don't have any problem, I will go.." Madhu was talking when she saw RK was going to take sip, she shouted, "NO..!"

"No.. No.. I will go.." Madhu corrected herself over the phone when again RK was trying to take sip, Madhu quickly hang up the call and stopped him when by mistake, she placed her hand on his hand and their eyes met for a moment when the waiter arrived saying, "Your bill..!"

They looked at the waiter and quickly take out money." I will pay it." RK said.

"No. This is my coffee." Saying this Madhu took the bill from waiter's hand when RK tried to snatch it from her hand and they tried to pull the bill towards each other but being defeated, Madhu angrily placed the bill on waiter's hand and paid the bill and left from there, RK also fumed and left before paying the bill when the waiter smiled getting double money.

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Hope you all like the update. .

Edited by Ronita03 - 8 years ago

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