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Never Let You Go..

She stepped down from the train and looked at the crowded station - the city of dream.. where people came to fulfill their dreams. "Mumbai" She pronounced the name on the board and looked at the chain on her neck "Mumma's last symbol. But I promise mumma I'll find you." She kissed on the broken heart shape locket and looked on..

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"You aren't orphan Madhu. Like other's kid, you also have parents." The owner of the orphanage said to a Madhu who was crying vigorously as few people teased her about her parents. "If they're alive.. Where are they..? Doesn't they love me.."

"Your mumma loves you a lot.. Wait.. I've something for you." Saying this he left and returned with a box in his hand. "What's in it.." Curious Madhu asked.

"When you were only one day's, your mumma took you here and handed me the box to the asked me to give you when you grow up and I guess this is the right time." Curious Madhu opened the box and saw a letter.

Madhu read the letter, "Madhu.. How are you.. Hope you are doing well.. You might be a big girl now and you might be angry with your mumma right.. And it's obvious.. Your mumma left you when you need her most but Madhu.. I had this option left to protect you.

Madhu, I asked Mr Suri to give you the letter when he feel you are capable to understand things because whatever today I'll tell you is truth of your life. Madhu.. You know.. We came into this world with bundle of relations.. When we born, we were someone's daughter then we'd became someone's sister and then with the time relationships changes.. There was a time when we became someone's wife, a daughter in law and then a mother. But in these relationships, there was a relation which we can't give a name and that relation I had with your father and you are the symbol. Madhu that time I had to protect you and that's why I took the drastic step. Please don't get mad at to your mumma. Your mumma loves you a lot and being a mother my first priority is to protect you from evils which I did."

Madhu looked at the man when he picked a envelope from the box and handed her saying, "Your mother Padmini Choudhary." Madhu opened the envelope and saw her mother's photo for the first time.

"And my father?"

"I don't know.. People said when Balraj Choudhary got to know about your mother's relation with your father, he tried to kill both of you but Padmini dropped you here and your father.. May be Balraj's men..." He paused.

Madhu shut her eyes as she couldn't bear the truth and then asked, "Where's my mumma uncle.."

"Last time when she called here she told me she was in Mumbai.. But now..!"

"Mumbai? I want to go there uncle."

"Madhu... Mumbai isn't a small town, it's huge city.. Where will you find Padmini?"

"Uncle.. I don't know how, where.. But I have to find her. And I am sure, I will find her in Mumbai." Madhu said confident and read the rest of the letter.

"Madhu.. There's a locket.." She moved her eyes inside the box and saw a locket, she took it in her hand and saw it when Madhu noticed the broken heart shape. "Madhu, you might be thinking why is the locket broken..! Actually the another half piece is with me. You know what Madhu just like without the another piece this heart is incomplete.. As same without you.. Your mumma is also incomplete without you. Please don't mad at me or don't hate your mumma.. She always loves you." Madhu cried holding the chain near to her heart. "Uncle, you arrange my tickets for Mumbai. I will go there and will bring my mumma back in my life."

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"Mumma your Madhu is coming to take you back." She thought and about to carry the luggage when someone bumped with her back and she fall on her face. "Ouch..!" She moaned and turned and saw a guy was standing showing his back at her. "Such a shameless guy..! He made me fall and still had no sense about his mistake." Madhu fumed and stood on her heels, she patted on his shoulder and the guy turned at her.

"Yes?"

Madhu checked him out and crossed her arms on her chest asking, "Will you please remove your glasses from your eyes?"

"Why? Am I looking so handsome that you want to stare into my eyes. Well.. No problem..! Let me fulfill your wish.." Saying this he was going to remove his glasses when Madhu said with rolling eyes, "What? Handsome? On which angle?"

He just stopped from removing the glass and looked at Madhu in disbelief. "Please haan..! Don't make stories in your mind." Madhu roamed her eyes all over the station and said, "You know what.. That guy..!" She showed him a guy who was helping a old lady. "He is much better than you."

"He? Eww.. Your taste is like you.. Third class..! I will give you number of some eye specialist, if possible go and consult with them." He said while shaking his head.

"No. You need it. And I know that guy isn't good looking but still he is better than you because he is kind hearted.. Not like you." Madhu said turning her face other side.

"Oh.. Hello..! What I've done that you're talking like some scissors."

"Oh.. Wow.. First you did mistake and then instead of saying sorry.. You're asking what you've done.. Great.." She said in disbelief. "You made me fall..!"

"What? Really? When? I saw you standing behind me then when did I make you fall?" He asked sarcastically.

"You did it. And then I stood up on my own."

"Good story but I won't believe.. Oh yeah.. Now I got it..!" Madhu looked at him confuse. "You want my number so you made such story.. Nice.. Well.. I am so irresistible that girls can't control themselves. Wait.." Saying this he was about to give her the card but she refused saying, "You keep it for others. I am least interested in you. And you know what I did mistake that I thought you would apologize but I was wrong. You're such a jerk.. This is the worse thing happened with me today that I met with you. Now I pray, I never ever need to see your face."

"Same here.." He faked a smile and they both turned at opposite directions, Madhu carried her luggage and they both headed on their respective ways.

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Please drop your comments, so that I can give you early updates..

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Radhika_G

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for your new story... 😊
Nice start dear...👏👏
I think madhu bumped in to RK.. RK ahh irresistible...and Madhu doing for number..😆
Madhu should find her Mother in safe...
Waiting for your next part...
Please do continue soon...
Thanks for the PM

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ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ronita congrats on the new story.

Good to see you here after so many days.

Wow Risbala bumped into each other and the irresistible RK is showing attitude. Madhu is come in search of her mother.

Continue soon waiting for the next update.

Could you please PM me.

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keerthana selvaprasd

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for the new story
Interesting and emotional prologue too
Loved it
Padmini leaves madhu in orphanage when she is one day's baby for her safe and also told to give her letter and a locket when she can unerstand things in her life
Padmini's letter was emotional...So madhu is going. To Mumbai to search her mother...
In there she number in to one...I think that is our rishabh...
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the pm
All the best Dr...

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sapana

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for new story. ..
superb start. .
madhu come to search for her mumma. .
I think she bumped with rk. .
early waiting for next part. .
thanks for pm. .
update soon

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call me shradha

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank for the pm ronita

Awesome start dear looking forward for the story

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harini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for your new story,
Interesting prologue,
Padmini left Madhu in orphanage,
her mother is alive and she asked to give a letter to madhu when she is capable of understanding things,
she left her to save her from evil
Madhu came to Mumbai to search for her mother,
continue soon

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dharsii

@dharsii

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice start.
Madhu is in orphanage.but she has mom.
She is going to meet her mom.
I thought,that guy is RK.
Starting itself ,they are fighting..
update soon.

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow yar nice start..continue soon plz..

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