My heart beats for you : Rishbala FF *Note on page 4* - Page 3

Originally posted by: aravindam100

1st f all Welcome to the Forum Misty.🥳

And about Storyyy. Gr8 start, it looks diffrnt. Dancr & Waiter hmm 😛😉 I m interestd. Plss Continue yaarrr

Thank you so much 😃

Congrats for ur first story misty

Interesting start
Pls cont
Eagerly waiting for nxt update

Hey there..!!
A story from u.. Wow..!!
Madhu is breathing her life.. She hasnt yet got touched by the word love..
And her parents too seperated.. Reaskn not know..
She has fiancee too but she dont love him..
And rk is waiter here.. Well, a handsome waiter.. Hahahaa..
Cont.soon..

Congratulations for your first story.Nice start.Rich madhu n rk is poor waiter.role reversed.waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: patelshradha50

Great start dear

You can show that RK is doing this job to complete his studies as a part time job

You can also show him as madhus hero he will save her when Akshay tries to molest her

Thank you so much. 😳

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Interesting start.

Madhu is rich but wants to break free.

Shamsher forces things on her.

Akshay seems to be gdnuine person.

Rishabh is a waiter and seems to love Madhu.

Like your writing styld.

Do continue.

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Supervampire

Congrats for ur first story misty

madhu is rich but not attitude girl

rk is waiter...

madhu's parents are separated

madhu is engaged with her father's choice

continue...

Thank you so much. 😊

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Interesting start
Pls cont
Eagerly waiting for nxt update

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Hey there..!!
A story from u.. Wow..!!
Madhu is breathing her life.. She hasnt yet got touched by the word love..
And her parents too seperated.. Reaskn not know..
She has fiancee too but she dont love him..
And rk is waiter here.. Well, a handsome waiter.. Hahahaa..
Cont.soon..

Thanks for your feedback 😳