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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
They both r falling in love with each other rishabh is feeling guilty n want to reveal his identity to her n she there she started to realizes that she is falling love with her
Beautiful story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 11


Mayuri opened her eyes only to see the fields around. She knew she was in Malikapur. The drive was longer, than she expected. Or it must be the painkillers she took made her sleep for a longer time.

Her eyes fell on the cattle around and few people walking on the steep paths around the fields.

Only her family had cars in the whole village, rest of the people owned the carts, cycles or scooters.

The easiest way to reach the shops was rickshaw. Meena patted her shoulder "how do you feel now...we are almost home"

Mayuri smiled and looked at her mother who would have to listen to all the bad words in the world... Ever since Mayuri was five she saw her mother bearing all sorts of snags in the house because of her.

Her Grandmother and her Father blamed her for not giving the heir to the family. Her father even beat her mother in front of her eyes for silly things. He just made an excuse to start the fight.

Mayuri rarely spoke to her father, she was far more than petrified of the whole family. The only person whom she spoke a little was her mother.

The car entered the huge aluminum gates... Her heart beats started as she saw her grandmother sitting on a swing with a beetle leaves in a plate and a cutter in her hand...

She liked making pan herself and eating most of the day...

Mayuri tried to step out when Meena gave her a hand...

Kamlavati spit the pan from her mouth "came back from the holiday?"

Meena rushed to Kamlavati and touched her feet for the blessing but Kamlavati as usual started her oration "what do you want now? Already finished our family. Get lost now"

Meena quietly left to reach Mayuri and helped her towards the room...

Kamlavati saw Mayuri limping "did you lost your feet?"

Meena turned around "no Mata Ji, Mayuri slipped off and hurt her ankle"

Kamlavati raised her eyebrow and observed the plaster on the ankle "must be running around the whole wedding, told you not to take her along...but you don't listen"

Meena ignored the harsh words of her mother-in-law and took Mayuri to the room. She asked a girl servant to look after her.

Mayuri's room was large, but she never slept alone, her Grandmother slept with her. Only girl servants were allowed in the house.

Kamlavati had a very conservative thinking of not letting the girl sleep alone. Mayuri still recalled how her mother begged for her to let her study in one of the best design colleges in Delhi and even there her Father had sent his men who followed her from the hostel to the college to keep an eye on her all the time.

Mayuri wiped her small tear around her eyes. She was extremely helpless when it comes to her mother.

Soon she heard a noise outside. She peeked out of the window behind her and saw her father Surya Yadav beating a poor farmer with a stick... just because he may have done something wrong...

She was tired of watching the violence all the time. She closed her eyes and tried to sleep when she heard her phone buzzing...

Frightened she closed her fist...thank God, it was on silent. She somehow managed to pull her bag closer and took the phone out to switch it off.

She decided not to talk to him anymore otherwise her Father will simply kill her and other mother. She was more concerned about her mother.



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Rishab walked in and was about to go upstairs to his room when he heard his grandmother "Daadi..."

He rushed to her and hugged her tightly... Rishab was Durgeshwari's only weakness... "My Rishab...how are you my child"

Rishab smiled as he hugged his Daadi "not good...you went for a whole month"

She smiled at him, while Maya gaped looking at their relationship...

"Come dinner's ready"

Durgeshwari looked at Maya "have you made something sweet?"

"Sweet?"

"Yes, I have a good news for my Rishab"

Maya nodded her head, thinking it might be the same. She must have bought farm for him or purchased some land that she had been doing all these years...

Rishab smiled at her "what is it Daadi?"

"Come, sit I will tell you" Durgeshwari took the seat and Maya sat on her left as usual and Rishab on her right...

Dinner was served by the servants...

Maya was about to eat when Durgeshwari started...

"Rishab, you are big now. And I think this is the right time to get you married."

Rishab coughed a little... but didn't say anything...

"So I have found a nice girl for you"

Maya fumed in anger and closed her fist "but Mummy Ji...we must ask Rishab at least. He has to spend his whole life with that girl and..."

"Maya...I have seen the girl and the girl's family. So don't tell me all this. I know Rishab's happiness because that is the most important thing for me" Durgeshwari gawked at Maya who sat silently after that...

Maya knew now there was no point discussing with Durgeshwari as she will not understand.

"Fine, you can decide but at least let Rishab select the girl for himself" Maya added
Durgeshwari looked at Rishab "I will show you her photograph, but I am sure you will not say no"

Rishab started eating and went on thinking...his mind went back to her. The girl he has never seen and only spoke to her few times. He was in love with her and wanted to meet her once at least. But here Daadi was fixing his alliance with some random girl of her choice and he never wanted to lead her down.

He will talk to her today, he must meet her and tell her how much he admires her.
"Rishab, I am asking do you like someone." Durgeshwari asked Rishab who nodded his head saying he doesn't.

Maya observed Rishab who went quiet, she wasn't happy as she wanted Rishab to choose a girl for himself.

"Which family does this girl belong to?" Maya queried

Durgeshwari looked at her daughter-in-law "I told you my old friend, her Granddaughter. She belongs to the Yadav family of Malikapur"

Maya shook her head "you think a girl from a small town is fit for our Rishab?"

"Yes Maya...even you were from a small town. Don't forget my mother in law chose you" Durgeshwari frowned at Maya making her go silent...

Rishab finished his dinner "Daadi, goodnight"
"Goodnight...do you want to see her photo" Daadi smiled a little and gave him an envelope.

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Rishab looked at the envelope and kept it on the side... he quickly picked up his phone and dialled her number... every time he tried it was switched off...

He kept thinking about her. Why wasn't she picking up and where she was? She had hurt her ankle... was she sick...all sort of things came in his mind.

Again and again he picked up his phone expecting her call.

He can't say no to his Daadi for this marriage...he's never seen the girl, never met her and how will he spent his whole life with her. There won't be anything common in between them.

"I hope you're alright" he murmured

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Mayuri saw her Grandmother patting her head and asking the servants to look after her...

"Did you had dinner?"

"No...I am not hungry" Mayuri answered not looking at her...

Kamlavati smiled "you must eat. You're here only few days now."

Mayuri looked at her in surprise... "Few days..."

"Yes then you will go"

Mayuri expected Kamlavati talking about the studies

"To your in laws" she completed

Mayuri shivered a little in shock... "In-laws"

Kamlavati took some chillies in her hand and moved across her from top to bottom "this will save you from the evil eyes"

Mayuri wanted to cry loudly... She wanted to continue her studies and wanted to become a designer and here her family is getting her married...

A small tear occupied her eyes and fell off her cheeks

Kamlavati smiled "you are lucky that my friend liked you. She wants you to become her grandson's wife.

Just look after yourself and yes those people are coming next week to see you. So make sure you don't cry anymore. I don't want any dark circles around your eyes"

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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
😛v nice update...so the guess was correct but the mystery of how rk n mayuri will come to know the facts is the scoring scene...beautiful...waiting and happy for your early updates...👏⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Nice update.
RK is fixed for Mayuri.
But They didn't aware of that.
Rk is thinking about her..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Mayuri is back in her house.
Are they getting married to each other?
loving the story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
brilliant update
both dadi are frnds
rk's marriage is fixed with mayuri
but both never see each other
if they will come face to face ...don't recognize each other

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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Thanks for all the lovely comments my readers...
love u all
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Chapter 12



Mayuri went silent with the news of her marriage. All her dreams were devastated into pieces, she had never thought her life would play such a bad game that she would be so stranded...

She thought about her mother, her negative answer can kill her mother...

Mayuri had no choice but to unwillingly marry this guy whom she has never seen and it's not important because her family has already said yes.

She looked at her phone that was switched off from the evening. She took out the sim card and kept it in the inner pocket of her purse. She will make sure she never calls him back.

Her mind constantly went back to him. He was considerate, empathetic and moreover she liked talking to him but she hardly knows him. She doesn't even know his name and how could she think about him.

She wiped her tears and decided to forget him and move on with her life.

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Rishab got ready in the morning and checked his phone few times but she hadn't called at all. He tried calling on the number but as usual it was switched off. She had now become a dream for him...

He walked downstairs for the breakfast when Durgeshwari smiled at him "did you see the photograph?"

Rishab had almost forgotten about opening the envelope... "Hmm...Yes I did"

He had to lie, not hurting her Daadi with his stupid acts...

"Did you like her?"

Next question came hitting down him on the heart and he had to pretend "hmm...yes"
Durgeshwari gave a broad smile "see...I told you Maya, my Grandson will always keep my word"

Rishab tried concentrating on his coffee to relax his mind off this. Maya was surprised but she knew Rishab would never say no to his Grandmother...

"Ok I will leave for work" He hugged her Grandmother and mother

Maya was concerned for Rishab and wanted to see this girl herself now... "When are we leaving for that town...I forgot the name"

Durgeshwari smirked at her "its Malikapur...and we are leaving next week. So get ready"

"Why didn't you let Rishab know?" Maya queried

"Because he's not going with us" Durgeshwari poured the juice in the glass

Maya was surprised at her mother in law "but mummy Ji he has the right to at least talk to her and ..."

"In our families boys don't talk to their would be wives." Durgeshwari made a clear point to Maya who was feeling bad for her Son. God knows how this girl will fit in the family and moreover how will she go along with Rishab who is so picky with every little thing.

Maya had no way to stop her stubborn mother in law to break this decision. Without bothering much about the situation she left for her meetings...


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Rishab couldn't concentrate on his work at all, he looked at the design on the front page of the magazine and recalled her. He was missing her badly and wanted to talk to her... all he wondered was she would be fine.


On the other side


Mayuri was in deep thoughts, she was not allowed to step out of the house even for her own wedding shopping. It was decided whatever Kamlavati decides she will wear that.

The Yadav family was happy about the alliance, when Meena came to know she was upset and wondered her daughter's dream shouldn't be broken...

She even asked Mayuri to say no...but Mayuri didn't listen to her mother... Meena wasn't happy but she was helpless.

Kamlavati fetched new ornaments and expensive saris for Mayuri who didn't like a single color. All the saris were so rich in color and she didn't like so bright colours but she had to obey and choose one sari for next week.

"Will the boy come along Mata Ji" Meena asked softly to which Kamlavati shouted angrily

"You are shameless and that's why you wanted your daughter to study. How can a boy meet a girl before marriage? Don't you know that?"

Meena kept quiet and walked in...she thought she would personally meet the boy and ask him to reject the proposal but now that seems to be so difficult.




A week later


Mayuri looked at herself in the mirror, she hated the bright sari she was wearing and such heavy gold ornaments as if it was her marriage today...

"Mayuri, are you happy" Meena asked while adjusting her sari...

Mayuri didn't look at her "it doesn't matter Ma..."

Meena felt bad for her daughter who was so young for the marriage... She couldn't ask her husband anything, he would simply yell at her or even slap her on the face...

Kamlavati walked in and saw Mayuri "You're looking so beautiful. May God save you from the evil eye...those people are on the way. And make sure you don't talk anything in front of them. They are very rich people"

Mayuri nodded her head...


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Durgeshwari saw Maya covering her mouth with a cloth "this is a fresh air and you are covering your mouth..."

Maya couldn't believe her Son was getting married in a village... she wanted to shoot the old lady for bringing her in this dirt...

"Mummy Ji...if these people are so rich, why are they staying in the village?"

"Because they have not forgotten their roots like you"

Maya was angry at the retort but she had to bear all this... she knew Durgeshwari was an expert in fighting...

Maya asked the driver to close the windows and turn on the aircon...

Durgeshwari shook her head


The car reached the house... Maya looked at the huge aluminium gates and was little calmed after looking at the house... thank God at least it was not a small hut made of mud...

As she stepped out she wrapped the sari around her, she saw the house was really big... with fields all around...

Kamlavati embraced her best friend Durgeshwari "come..."

"My daughter in law Maya" Durgeshwari pointed at Maya standing at a little feet away
Maya smiled at Kamlavati and wished her...

Maya was more relieved after glancing the huge lounge room with three air cons... that was just not expected in the village...

So they had servants, but they looked backward...Maya saw few men were standing outside the house with sticks and two of them with guns...

Surya Yadav walked in wishing Durgeshwari and Maya...

"This is my Son Surya Yadav...he's the head of the village and is standing in elections this year"

Meena came with the servants holding huge trays of drinks and snacks she wished Durgeshwari and Maya...

"This is my daughter in law Meena"

Meena touched Durgeshwari's feet and took blessings "I can imagine your daughter."
Kamlavati smiled... "Meena's parents live in Madhya Pradesh, her sister is in
Mumbai... have you heard about Chaman Thakral?"


"Yes, the deputy chief minister" Maya said

"Yes...he's her sister's husband" Kamlavati said... and asked them to drink something...

Maya was little happy hearing their political links. Well they were not sophisticated but illiterate rich.

The moment they saw Mayuri coming in the room Durgeshwari gave a broad smile

"come sit with me"

Maya wasn't happy at all looking at her sari and jewellery. It was so out of date. But Maya thought once she comes in as her daughter in law, she will do a complete makeover that will make her look stunning. She wouldn't let her wear this stupid heavy saris at all...

"So what do you do?" Maya asked

Kamlavati smiled and asked Meena to tell...

"She's doing design in college" Meena said...

Maya confusedly looked at them... when Mayuri said "I am doing fashion designing from Delhi College"

Maya was impressed "wow...that's good"

"Which year?"

"First year"

Maya thought Mayuri was too young for Rishab. She was only nineteen and Rishab was twenty seven.

Durgeshwari happily kissed her on the forehead "we accept her as our daughter in law"

Mayuri wasn't happy but Meena was somehow satisfied. Somewhere in her mind she thought the boy will be nice after looking at Maya and Durgeshwari...


Both the families decided the date and venue of the wedding...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Superb update
So unknown to madhu rk's proposal has come for her
And both are unaware of this situation
I m waiting for the moment when they will come to know about eachother.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
superb update
both old ladies are irritating
kamlawati scold her daughter-in-law nd durgeshwri is irritating her daughter-in-law
both mother in same situation
both wants to stop the marriage but after meeting they feel relief
maya also like mayuri...she is not typical mother-in-law
love the update...continue

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