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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: leena45678
nice start dear.special congrats for writing new ff.Loved the starting.
lol u made dips rks sister.thats good.
plz update soon.

Thank u.keep reading. I like dipali that's y I give her a positive character

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
Awesome part
Good that though rk was not ready to search madhu all these years but now atleast he wanna know her

Till now she is successful in hiding herself now eagerly waiting to know what happens

Thank u.rk doesn't believe in love he thinks that the relationship between man and woman is lust and nothing else.so he didn't search for het.eventhough her music changed his.he is not aware of it.and now he decided for dips and radha.

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: dharsii
Res

Unres.
Awesome update.
I like it.
Madhu loves her mother very much.
That's the main reason to love him.
oh,Madhu sing for only her mother and RK.Wow.
What a love on RK.
Abhay is playboy.That's why he didn't get any girl.
Madhu's introduction is nice.Different way of proposal.
Rk's friends are tryed to find her.
Feel bad for madhu,Because of padmini.
Why she didn't say to malik?
Because of food and money,she has worked.
Padmini wants her salary also .Too bad.
Update soon Ka.

Thank u priya.will update soon

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rachana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: manna43
Nice part.Madhu has bad present with her stepmother.But she sings for rk as she loves him as much as she loves her mother.She stops sending CD because she doesn't want to caught by him,but after becoming star he has so many fans so now she sends CD n flowers daily.
Great going story.
Thanks for pm.

ThAnk u.yeah madhu thinks she is safe.but she is going to pay.aakhir rk tho to hai

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sapnaf52
beautiful update ...di
madhu mother was died...
she have stepmother... 😭
and padmini didn't love her...
madhu mother learn her to sing..
and she sing for her..
now she sing for rk only...love the way madhu introduce herself..
rk friend also want to saw her..
but rk didn't want to search her...he though this was also new style of proposal..

till now madhu save her ..
let she..how rk find her...
thanks ...di

Thank u sapna.especially for your suggestion on song.I too want to write the episode of rk find out mmf.with in 3_4part I will try to reach.

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Bhavshii

@Bhavshii

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Read all parts...

Awesome story Dear...

Loved it...

Feeling bad for Madhu her mother was died and her stepmother didn't love her... Rk's father left his family for extra marital affairs... that's why Rk don't believe in love...

Dips is rk's sister...

waiting for next part...

Edited by Shree6 - 8 years ago

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Awesome update, loved it.

Madhu went through so much but she never leaves an opportunity to make RK happy, she is truly soulmate and true love of RK. Padmini is her step mom and ill treats her, how bad is that. Madhu working as newspaper girl for pocket money and for food. RK and his gang of boys.

Curious to know what happens next.

If possible please PM me.

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Awesome update, loved it.
Madhu went through so much but she never leaves an opportunity to make RK happy, she is truly soulmate and true love of RK. Padmini is her step mom and ill treats her, how bad is that. Madhu working as newspaper girl for pocket money and for food. RK and his gang of boys.
Curious to know what happens next.
If possible please PM me.

Thank u.madhu is a very sweet girl.will pm you when I update

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

amazing update rach..!! madhu a singer.. Wow.. And she sings for Rk.. Such a nice mysterious fan she is..!! And paddu mummy.. Uff.. disturbing that poor soul madhu..!! Her knoght in shining armour is here.. But they need to afront each other..! Tnxx fr pms

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

My Mysterious fan

Part8

Rk mansion

Rk was watching a movie.bittuji knocked and came in"chief, the man,sikhander Bhatia is here"

_"ok I am coming"rk

They greeted each other. "I am sikhander bhatia and u can call me sikky .I am your big fan and very pleased to work for u"silky

"oh Mr silky let's come to the point.do bittuji informed the case?"rk

"yes Sir,I will find out the girl.u don't have any clue about her name then give me her photographs."sikky

"what?"to glared at bittuji.

"oops..sry Sir I mistook the case with someother. I have so many cases to handle.yesterday I got call from American president, he need me there in thier secret intelligence department.but I denied, I like to work for our country"sikky boasting.

"bittuji gave the Information but I want to hear her song "sikky

"for what? U r here to find out her, not to admire her song "to said furiously.

bittuji thought'to even like me to hear her song then how could he allow this bhander."

"ok Sir, is it by post or courier"sikky

Bittuji said"we will ask the watch man "

Watchman came in and salute rk.silky got up and came near the watchman and asked"you r the one who helps that girl,traitor "

watchman startled and asked looking at rk"which girl?""

"no sikky he is working here from years, no doubt on him"Rk

"tell me who brings this CD and bouquet daily "sikky

"Sir there are alto of bouquets daily, I can't trace one from those.but most of them comes by courier,I sign for it daily"watchman

"so u have to check tomorrow who brings that "sikky.watchman nodded and left.

Dips and radhaji came to the visitor room.dips asked "who is this bhai"

"he is sikhander bhatia our private detective"rk

"nice to meet u Mr Bhatia"dips

"mam' call me sikky"sikky

"what's your findings"dips."nothing mam, everything is vague, but I will find out"sikky

"ok I have to leave, bye mam bye sir"

"bittuji I don't think he could find out MMF is quite smart.she left no proof"rk

"he is a bandher chief but he worth for the job"bittuji

"dips dint tell about this to anyone else not even Trish"to

"y Bhai"asked dips."MMF knew about my conversation with madhu and that too in the college campus.someone near to us informing her about me.so it should be a secret in between us "rk

next morning,madhu was selling the news paper she didn't notice to coming and she yelled out"rks New film on launch "

Rk heard her and thought"MMF?"then he looked at the girl and find out madhu."hey madhubala"

Madhu heard Rk and said in her mind"omg trapped"

She smiled at him and asked "you remember me "

"y not beauty,we had so much inbetween last two days"he wincked,Madhu blushed"you r a newspaper girl too?"

"just a timepass"madhu shrugged."early in the morning? time pass? Not bad,madhubala aahaan,give me a paper, you were shouting rk"rk

madhu smiled and give him a paper.he picked his wallet.then she denied "no Sir it's ok "

Rk looked at her and said "first of all don't call me sit, call me Rk,second one you r doing this for time pass, then take money from Rk for a time pass"he gave her a 2000 rs currency."but sir oops...rk I don't have change to give u"madhu

"who asked u the balance?daily give me paper till we settle the amount".rk

Madhu nodded."then u do your timepass and let me do mine bye madhu"he gave her a flying kiss.rk continued and madhu back to her work.

College

"hi ria "madhu sprinted towards her and hugged her."hai mam,y r u so happy? Won any lottery?"ria

"yeah, look here"madhu showed the currency to her and said"guess who gave it"

"prime minister"ria teasing madhu

"no my rk"madhu said in ninth cloud."rk?what?when?how?where?"ria wondered."oh ho I will explain calm down"madhu said all that happened in the morning. "so madhu treat "ria try to catch money."I will give u a treat but not with this"madhu"I am going to keep this forever"

"u r the craziest one in love"ria

"yes I am " madhu

So how is it frndz.I were pretty distracted by some personal issues.hope this episode is not a clumsy one.please comment