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Posted: 8 years ago
My Mysterious fan
Part9A

Rk mansion

"Bhai how we're your day? "
"it's normal a little bit tired.han I met your friend madhubala on street today morning.she is a newspaper girl"rk
"oh really bhai,I didn't thought that she would be that much struggling"dips
"don't know she told that it's just a timepass"rk
"hmm... May be.Bhai any news about mmf? "dips
"no I am not sure about that sikky.but bittuji is confident.where is my parcel dips?"rk
Dipali handed the bouquet and cd.rks face lit up.dips asked"may I hear it Bhai "
"you can hear it but after my turn"rk
"you r so possessive bhai"dips
"possessive on her voice and not her "rk
He went to his room.dipali muttered "you r not possessive you r obssesed.how could that girl handle his rage when she was found out.after that how will be his life"dips
Rk dropped his coat on the couch and played the CD.
"rk my love, how was your day.tired?"close your eyes and rest jaan"
Jab tak tujhe pyaar se
Beinteha main bhar na dun
Jab Tak main duaoon se
Sau data tujhe pad na loon
Han mere pass tum raho
Jayne ki Barth na karo
Mere sath tum raho
jaane ki bath na karo
Rk closed his eyes


Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update .
Rk waits For Madhu's Bouquet and her CD for daily.
He possessive on her voice only.
But what will he do? if he knows about madhu.
I am waiting for that moment.
Update soon ka.

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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update. ..di
rk was possessive for her songs. ..
even I didn't think sikky find out. .. 😆
madhu call rk ...jaan 😲
I am excited for what will rk do if he knows his MMF is madhu. .
loverly update. .
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
My Mysterious fan

Part 9 B

Bittuji went to rks room and said "chief sikky is here."
"yeah coming"rk
Sikky was taking with the watchman."yes Mr.sikky u got any clue?"Rk
"yes Sir,I were asking the watchman. He noticed the courier man and remembered him bringing the parcel"sikky
"he is the agent from dt couriers. Now it's easy to trace her"
"ok that's good.bit don't be overconfident sikky"rk
"chief their office is near to dips college"bittuji.
"so v can conclude to some student at college?"sikky
"May be and may not be"rk
"Sir there is any one very close to u at that college. Who have all Info about u"sikky
"trish?" bittuji.
"sikky keep an eye on trish"Bittuji
" if it's her then dips would have known about it "rk
"yes, but what if she doesn't said to dips about it"bittuji
"but she sings?"rk
"anyways keep an eye on trish and continue your investigation on courier boy"rk
"it's not going to work bittuji mmf is very much she didn't leave any clue "rk
"I myself searched for her but couldnt find out and you know bittuji. I had to bear my sister's fashion show"rk said realizing Dipali coming there."she walked like a duck on the rqmp"rk imitated a duck,
Dips got angry and punched on rks abs."ouch...what are u made up of man?iron?"dips shake her fist in pain."what is it dipali?"radhaji asked."she punched me and got hurt"rk told with a smirk."ma this moron is teasing me on my fashion show"dips
"what are u callimg your bhai dips"radhaji
"and u rishu she was a little girl. It's obvious she don't know ramp walking"
rk laughed and again imitated a duck"Bhai I will kill u "dips.rk ran to his room and closed the door.dips kicked on the door and hurt her leg.she said"I will c how u get your parcel tomorrow"
"oh no dips"rk abruptly opened the door."sorry,I will make it for u"rk
"then drop me at college tomorrow."dips
"college no anything else please"rk
"it's decided"dips
"ok"rk
Radhaji smiledand said "rishu changed alot"

"yes auntyji"bittuji


Maliks house

Madhu said padmini "chottima I heard papa saying his friend that he cannot afford my fees this month.I have to buy some books too.I can't give u money this month"
"no money means no food"padmini"I can only serve u one time a day.u can decide wether to study or to survive"
After sometimes madhu said "I prefer my education"
Padmini didn't serve her dinner.madhu drank some water and went to bed

Rk mansion

Rk lie on bed.he thought about madhu."her smile is very pretty"rk fell asleep
Rk saw madhu standing near a cliff. She was wearing a black Saree which lit up her beauty.rk came near madhu.madhu sing the song jab tak tujhe...rk caught her by her waist and pulled her close and nearing to a kiss.then madhu said"rk I am your mysterious fan"rk looked biwildered.he pushed her and madhu fell down from the cliff.rk shouted madhu...
Rk opened eyes and found he is in his room.he wiped sweat on his forehead."what was it? Madhu mmf? Not it's just my minds play"he thought
"but I felt madhus voice familiar yesterday morning? It might be a coincidence"
"what if madhu is mmf?"
"no she can't be "
"if so will u accept her "
"what? Accept?"
"you r in love rk"
"no love bulls**t "
"realize it rk "
"shut up "
Rks mind battling.
bittuji came to rks room running and asked"what is it chief I heard u screaming"
"nothing it is just a nightmare"
_"ok chief" bittuji came out of the room and said "chief I heard u calling madhu"
Next morning rk was waiting for madhu and madhu were pedalling cycle to reach quickly.she saw rk from a distance and waved her hand.rk saw her and waved back.she reached rk and give him the paper.she couldn't say anything because she is breathless by riding.rk said"relax madhu I am here.why are you in such a hurry"
"I...I thought I am late and you will left"madhu
Oh so u want to c me, right"rk
"no,I want to give the paper"madhu"so u don't want to mete me"rk
"no I want to meet u "madhu
"so u like me? "rk
"yeah madhu smiled.
"oh god I can't help her smile makes me insane"rk thought.
"what madhu asked."madhu u looks pale."rk
"no rk no problem"madhu"ok madhu bye c u tomorrow."rk


So guys read and comment.thank u for song sapna




Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update loved it.
Padmini is one evil woman, poor Madhu slept without food.
RK dreamt that Madhu is his MMF

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Posted: 8 years ago
nyc update
madhu is working soo hard for her education
rk don't know that madhu is poor
omg rk notice madhu's voice...what happened if he have started suspect on madhu
why rk push her when he dream that madhu is his mysterious fan
thanx for pm rachana
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Posted: 8 years ago
Padmini is cruel poor madhu
I hope rk comes to know about this soon
Superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update. ..di
oh..
sikky find clue. .. 😆.so fast... 😆
great job. ..
rk falling in love.. 👏
thinks for madhu, even saw her in dream.
but what !!!
she tells she is MMF. .
but he push and madhu fell down. . 😲
me thinks after she told. .he just hugs ...
but here .. 😕 anyway. .it was only dream.
excited for their real meeting 👏 after he knows madhu is MMF. .
padmini is such a bad mom. . 😡
she didn't give food. .madhu only drink water and sleep 😭
this time. .dipali not tell her friend also and she didn't tell ria. ..
now I think they know MMF. even rk was some suspect in madhu. ..
let see what happens. .
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
Will sikky find madhu?
I am waiting eagerly.
RK-Dips bond is really nice.
RK has doubt on Trishna.
Padmini is too bad.
Madhu is working hard for her studies.
Why didn't madhu say to Malik?
In dream,Madhu told ,"I am MMF".But RK don't accept it.
But he has some feelings on madhu.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome parts,
Rk is very possessive on her voice,
Sikky is very confident,
bittuji said that it can be trishna,
loved Rk-dips bonding,
Padmini is evil step-mom she didn't give food,poor madhu feeling bad for her,
Rk is falling in love but he didn't realized it and he dreamt that Madhu is his MMF,
again Rishbala met and Rk noticed Madhu is looking so pale,
thanks for the pm

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