Rishabala FF : Just Married (II) : Part 14 on Page 1 (11/11)

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janu2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear

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Chitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome update well done loved it thanks for pm

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

OMG!! amazing update...shocked to know dips and mukku together...glad that other than RK's family , no one is right now against their relation...

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: book.worm

that RK won't be all that interesting or outspoken after a bit... and I have no idea how to take the next chapter and forward... will try hun😳

HAHAHAHAHA u r too funny hun... thank you so much for the sweet words.. love ya🤗❤️

Sudha ka asked my doubt before itself... Thank god di!! you are not going to quit writing! Like she said... You have some power with words and it makes me forget my current predicament instantly and get involved in your story. It is way too beautiful and indescribable. Whenever I see your update I just start reading!!! So you needn't worry how the story turns up... You are the Captain and you are leading it so beautifully!!!

And yes di... Reconsider your decision on 'Dance, beats and drums'. Other two stories you haven't written but this one you completed 7 parts na...

Take your time di but don't discontinue it 😳 A small request 😊

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Lo Di I didn't comment yet...

Wow!! RK has to deal with two OCD people then. Such a rare opportunity for anyone... I wish I am there. Hehe so that I don't have to bother about cleaning. They themselves will do it as they please Lol!!

Lol this Patil na... It reminds me of the one from 'The last minute Groom'. I think few readers guessed the same. He would be bossing around and behave as if he owns the house and RK himself will wonder whether he is the illegitimate son of his parents ROFL!!!

Haha yes now they have silly fights... Coz the trivial matter is solved.

RK reads books and Madhu... Hehe she watches serials. At least it helped her in guessing who really is Dipali! RK's questionairrre regarding that pregnant girl...lol!! Proves how our soaps revolve around the same angle...

Dipali!!!! Thought her to be negative. Never expected she is such a devoted lover of Mukund. Lol! Usually she is RK's bhabi but here she is Madhu's bhabi Lol!!! What a twist!! You have linked it wonderfully Di! I am in awe of you... You made it so convincing!

Haha RK is ready to revolt once again... To show the world Madhu is his wife. Thankfully Madhu stopped him.

Safe bet. They can build their home away from Trish so that she won't come there often Lol!!

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logambika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Wow... nice update... mukund and dipali turned out to be lovers... amazing... Patil and his RKmania...

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-jaya-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Loved this update completely as usual lazy. .. Initial part was so funny. Patil and madhu and their OCD 🤣 that's creating problem for RK and madhu 😆
And that serial part was also funny...

Dipali and mukund in love and they all are related to each other 😆 This coincidence is too hard to believe.. It seems dipali is a nice girl and everything is looking good but still it doesn't feel right to me.. I feel like RK's mother has asked dips to lie that, might be some hidden plan 😆 I know there's no logic in that but just I'm feeling like that 😆
And last part where patil gets fired while boasting and he comes to rishbala 🤣

Amazing update..
And sorry to remind you again but I think you forget that I told you to add me in your pm list 😆 please add me if you see this