Rishabala FF : Just Married (II) : Part 14 on Page 1 (11/11) - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Superb update,
loved it
first part was so hilarious poor Rk got stuck with two control freaks Madhu and Patil and got tired with their continuous fights,
liked the way Rk threatened them to stop their fights,
finally they patched up,
continue soon,
thanks for the update and pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Lazy,
I never comment publicly but I have messaged you on Wattpad. I even joined IF because of you. I wasn't into Indian TV a lot. Still not... But stories I like and I almost feel like they have their own life.. At least the good ones do.. It's not just words for me. Someone said books feed your soul.. That's how I feel.. I know sometimes you need inspiration and there are so many people out there who are ready to drag you down but don't forget that your words reach so many other people who love it. Not everyone has that kind of imagination or creativity.

No story can be perfect. Creativity doesn't allow perfection. I am a silent reader but I know you're having problems with other people stealing your work or negative feedback.. Let me just say I don't usually go for Indian authors and I am talking about professionals.. but you have something that made me want to wait for your next idea. It's tough trying to make your readers connect with your characters but even more tough when they have a preconceived notion about those characters.

I only tell you that an incomplete story is worse than a bad one. I know you're busy. But take some time to just think you don't have to write or read just see the people around you and get your inspiration back.. Writing is not something you can quit because I don't think its something you decide. You are good.. so what if some people don't think that.. I won't tell you to ignore them because they just might help you in a way that your supporters can't.

All the best.. I promise we will be patient and awaiting your stories whenever you're ready to write..

Zoe

P.S.- Sorry for the long comment.. Just needed to say it for a long time...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
In spite of the delay its a nice part.
Poor RK.
But loved Patil and Madhu's bickering. RK considers Patil as family.
Waiting to see how the things go in the marriage.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Madhu n Patil fights r soo funny..
N bechara rk struck btw these two crazy people.
Loved their romantic moments..
Loved d way rk refused to come home without his wife n Patil..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Awesome update, loved it 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
awesome update 😃
they are cute and adorable 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Amazing Update
Things are going well between Patil and Madhu. Both are planning how to keep everything clean in the house and around RK.
Balraj wanted only RK to come back into their house till Trishna's marriage is over.
RK told him that he will come only if Madhu and Patil also are allowed to come into the house.
Thank You for updating this story Lazy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely update ! madhu & patil fries Rk' s mind.. still he loves them.. and Now they are going back to the mansion..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
Beautiful update Lazy... But I miss reading your stories regularly because of my busy schedules niw a days... Anyway.. Thanks for the pm n please keep sending me pms for your Rishbala stories
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lazy,, finally u updated.
Was busy with my exams so read it just today..
Loved the update..

So now patil n madhu are fighting for rishab's food n plates lol... Two people with ocd RK will go mad..🤣
also loved the part where madhu n patil become friends...

Balraj is stupid ..and i am hoping u will be updating soon before u completely lose interest on this story..
This one is very interesting among all ur other stories.. So please lazyy lazy mat bano n.update jaldi 😉

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