Rishbala SS 'ImPassiOned' ||COMPLETED@PG.71|| (30/11)

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Congrats for new story.

I thought rk was Don but it was sullu. Seems he would build a modern-day Taj Mahal for madhu.

Rishbala were so cute. Madhu is chatterbox. I loved when she said Rk sound box defect.he he. Rk's monologue on madhu was funny as well. Looking forward to this chatterbox madhu and brooding Rk combination.

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

I actually am waiting for next very eagerly.. its so really interesting.. madhu's naive n sweet character n in rk's dark, ruthless, emotionless character along with sultan, the don who is in love with madhu..looking forward for more of madhu's talks

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

superb update dear 😊 I loved this crazy madhu and rude rk. 😉

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Interesting start 😃

So rk is a goon loved it 😃

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Thanks for pm,Dear.😊

Congratulations!! for New Story.😊

It was so Happy to see you with another Story on Rishbala.😊

It was So Different and Amazing.😊

Madhu Part was so Nice and Interesting.😊

Sultan Love Khushi at First Sight.😲

Madhu Antics were so Interesting.😊

Madhu keeps talking Non-Stop,it was so Nice.😊

Sultan sent Rk to take care of Madhu,it was so Interesting.😊

Rk ad Madhu Conversation was so Nice.😊

The way Madhu keeps questioning Rk was so Interesting.😊

The Story is getting so Interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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rima11

@rima11

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

That was super awesome , fresh n different

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Rishkara

@Rishkara

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

dear,aniyaa

no words to say..

🤗

totally loved it...

when you started the story.

i thought rk was in place of sullu..

but you made rk his bro..

oh that was😊

I realy really loved it..

madhu's encounter with both rk and sullu was very interesting..

madhu is a chatter box😆

thanks dear

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POULOMI22

@POULOMI22

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

I thought rk and Madhus meeting was like Rochester and jane in jane eyre .Rochester mascule and virile but lamed and madhu childish and slender creature. Being handicapped could be used as a metaphor for rks inability to feel emotions much or remaining impassive or cold.it seems in the story the royal eagle (rk) chained to a perch is forced to entreat a sparrow (madhu) to become its purveyor

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Haha what a funny start yaar. With rk me too want to hit my head in wall on madhu blabbering. Really she is out of the world. Dont know how rk will tolerate her till MADHUMAHAL creation.but i believe he will miss her talking whem she left him.waiting for next part. Thanks for pm.