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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mikolingam

Loveing RK the gangster. And Madhu is so talkative and irritating RK Good start a little different.

thanks dear.. Glad u like it.. Thanks for coming..!!
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Aww.. Seema.. Thankyou.. Good to see u here..!! Hahahaa.. Yeah.. Sultan chahe ghar banaye ya mahal.. Ishq & junoon toh rishbala ka hi hai.. Thank you so much seema for coming..!!!
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! a new story...amazing start dear...loved it

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Thank you everyone for likes & comments.. I loved them all & have replied too.. Sorry for being late..
Subh navratri everyone.. And happy durga puja..!!

ImPasSiOned
Part- 2

Rk stops his car near an old house. Madhu looks at the house. From outside it looks like an old broken house. Rk parked the car opening the door he pulled her out from the car by fetching her arms. She still has her hands tied in her front & her mouth sealed. He holds her tied hands in his firm hold & starts walking inside the house. Madhu tried to resist but he pulled her more harshly. Getting inside he switched on the lights & starts descending down the stairs. From outside it looks like an old house but its an underground lavish mansion from inside. Madhu started looking everywhere in awe. Richness is dripping from every decor of the mansion and
THUD..!!
"Shit" rk muttered & quickly kneeled in front of madhu & find her shaking. They were walking down the stairs when madhu slow down her pace observing things. Rk got irritated with her slow steps & he tug her hands roughly taking fast steps ahead when madhu couldn't match with his step, lost her balance & rolled down the stairs landing on floor with a Thud..!!
"Dont hurt her" rk remember sultan's words. He looks at madhu who is shaking while sitting on the floor.
"Must be hurt" he thought & remove the tape from her mouth. As the tape got removed madhu burst out laughing falling on the floor. Rk looked at her stunned. He thought she is hurt & crying but here she is laughing madly.
"Is she playing tricks with me?" Rk fumed at his thought.
"Stop laughing" rk pulled her arms making her sit straight.
"Sorry..sorry.." Madhu said between her laughter "U know i got deja vu wala feeling of my 12th class. I am always clumsy on stairs. In 12th std, i stepped on a water bottle unknowingly & rolled off the stairs. That was the biggest fall i had & now too" Rk gave her his disapproving looks.
"Mad girl.." He muttered under his breath.
"Why sultan fell for her? She is high degree silly stupid mad girl" rk thought.
"Do u have experience with dead bodies too ?" Rk asked extra calmly stopping her Laughter.
"Hun ?" Madhu looks at him bewildered.
"we have corpse room too.. Where we store corpse for business. Like to spend a night with with ?" Rk asked raising his one eye brow.
"what ??" Madhu exclaimed freaking out.
"Lets go. I'll lock u in the corpse room. Thats the best place for u" rk said while pulling her up.
"nooo.." Madhu cried pulling her tied hands back from his grips, crawling back on the floor. Rk looks at her satisfied. She hardly keeps quiet & Rk prefers silence.
"U will keep ur mouth shut ?'' Rk asked seriously & madhu nodded obediently.
"Get up" he ordered. Madhu tried to get up but couldn't. She looks at her left leg who got sprained as she fell down. Seeing her irresponsive rk pulled her up harshly making her winced in pain. He looks down at her leg as she stands in one leg clinging onto him.
"hurt indeed !" Rk spoke shaking his head at her & picked her up in his arms effortlessly when madhu shrieked.
"wow.. U lifted me up!" There she starts again as rk continues to walk.
"Put me down. U'll get tired. I can walk"
"Shut up" rk hissed
"My dad used to lift me up when i was kid" rk slow down her pace listening to her as she mention of malik.
"but After that no one lift me up. Wow.. U are giving me free ride" she cheered forgetting her pain.
"And i can give u free fall too.. By dropping u down" he said tossing her up in his arms.
"Noo..noo0" madhu exclaimed closing her eyes. She raised her tied hands & put it on Rk's neck like a garland locking her hands to his neck, she draws herself closer to him. Rk stops walking as he looks at her. Her face pressed against his chest, few inches away from his face. He looks at her for sometime as a strange feeling caress him.
"Take ur hands off my neck" rk commanded.
"what ?" She question loudly.
"TAKE. UR. HANDS. OFF. ME" He stretched dangerously & madhu pulled out her hands from his neck.
"Why ?" She asked again as he resumes walking.
"I dont like u Touching me" rk answered.
"why ? Are u touch-me-not flower ?" Madhu starts giggling at her own words irking rk more. Rk gave her an angry glare to shut her up but it didnt work on her. Agitated Rk took fast step & walks into a lavish room. He went to bed & dump madhu in soft bed.
"ouch" she raised herself in sitting position as he dropped her & came close to her. She gulped looking at him & crawls back on bed until her back touching the head board of bed. Rk took his own sweet time to remove the distance between them, enclosing her. He keeps his hand on either side of he, caging her in between bed & him, leaning on her he draws his face closer to her.
"Wh..what are u doing ?" She asked with trembling voice keeping her tied hand on his chest to create distance.
"I look like a flower ?" Rk asked stopping at few inches away from her face. She gulped nodding her head in negative.
"Nooo.."
"Then.. Dont ever compared me with useless flower" he barked & pulled himself up leaving her wondering.
"Flowers are not useless. It has so many uses. It is the most beautiful creation of god..and.." Madhu stops speaking as Rk banged his hands on headboard again caging her under him.
"If u dont keep quiet i'll make u the most horrible creation of god" he hissed fiercely as madhu looks at him wide eyed.
"u are with lion in lion's den. Dont force me to do anything unethical with u which i may regret later, get it" he warned. Madhu nodded her head & said softly.
"U are calling urself lion."
"Dont test my patience, madhu" he said to her as calmly as he could & walk out not wanting to talk with her. She really boggles his mind. He shut the door close locking it he went away with her yelling & beating the door from behind.
"Mr.lion..mr.lion.. Dont lock me.." Madhu yelled as she saw him closing the door. In between what Rk didnt realise is he took her name first time thats too softly.

---~---

"She is so irritating.. I cant handle her" Rk Complains exasperate in phone to sultan sipping on his scotch after freshen up.
"Rk..she is sweet" sultan said from other side.
"Sultan.. She is stupid. She call me flower then lion" rk said highly annoyed & hears sultan's chuckle from other end.
"Rk..bear her its just for few months"
"I cant sultan. I just cant. I never had anything in life except guns & violence & now she popped up in my life. Her talks goes on & on, while i prefer silence, complete deadly silence" Rk yelled at sultan in a serious voice "She is testing my patience. Every time i have to grip myself hard in front of her so that i dont loose control."
"Rk..i am telling u for unkempt time.. Dont u dare hurt her" sultan warned from other end as he took knows what rk is capable of. Rk didnt say anything as after few minutes both calm down themselves.
"Rk..leave that, tell me where is madhu now ?" Sultan asked starting a Convo again.
"In ur room" rk replied.
"She went to my room ?" Sultan asked delighted.
"No, i locked her in ur room" Rk mercilessly burst sultan's bubble.
"what Rk.. U ??" Sultan screamed exasperate "The way u are behaving with her it will make her hate us & hate me"
"hun..!! Then how to keep a kidnapped person sultan ? Its our business, i know it all" rk snorted.
"Madhu is not business rk.. Am ur brother.. Rk wont u listen to me ?" Sultan played his card.
Rk sighed "speak !"
"Freed her.. Let her move around the house freely. Let her get comfortable. U just lock the main door so that she cant escape"
"U mean let her dance around the house ? Okk.. I'll do it, anything else?" Rk said offended.
"Take care of her..she is precious to me" sultan ended.

---~---

With the unlocking sound of door, madhu looks up to find rk entering the room with food plate in his hand. She stands up from the bed as she saw him coming towards her. Rk put the plate on table near the couch.
"eat" he order her.
Madhu skeptically looks at him & then at Food plate. Rk gave her his cold looks as he pulled her to the nearby couch & pushed her making her sit on the couch. He untie her tied hands & sits opposite to her on a chair.
"eat fast" he said coldly pushing the food plate to her. Madhu sniff as a smell hit her nostril. She smell the food & then looks at Rk.
"U are drunk !" She stated with a deep frown as rk stares her back.
"U are smelling bad.." She said twisting her nose. Rk pulled out his gun & points at madhu making madhu gape at him in disbelief.
"I said eat" he spoke gravely.
"okk..okk.. Cool..mr.lion..i'll eat.. I'll eat" madhu said nervously raising her both hands as if surrendering. Rk puts his gun down & madhu begins to eat from the food plate occasionally glancing at rk who is silently toying with his gun.
"would u really shoot me dead if i havent eat" madhu said while stuffing the last spoon of rice in her mouth. Rk gave her an uninterested look.
"Why are u like this ? Aren't u get bored of urself?" She asked frowning at his silence.
"Its really offending if u talk to the other person & that other person dont talk to u" she voiced out.
"And its much offending if u dont talk to the other person & that other person keeps talking to u" Rk retorts standing up while picking up the empty food plates.
"Haww.. Did u just retorted me back ?" Madhu too stands up & starts following him.
"Dont u get tired of being so akdu.. I mean so rude". Not bothering to reply her rk moves out of room carrying the plates.
"Why are u soo sadu..? Always carrying a rotten expression" she poke him with her question walking beside him matching his steps. Rk sighs cause unfortunately he can't do anything to her.
"U are kidnapped.. Instead of bothering me, shouldnt u be bothered about urself & ur family?" Rk asked keeping the plates in sink & turn around facing her leaning on kitchen counter.
"But u said u would do nothing to me." Madhu replied innocently facing him standing at decent Distance from him.
"And u believe my words ?" Rk asked amazed by her trust on him, a kidnapper. She cutely nodded her head in affirmative.
"and i am missing my family.. I know mom-dad has not eaten anything. Dad is searching for me & mom is crying uncontrollably & didu is trying to pacify her" madhu said softly looking down & rk looks at crossing his hands over his chest, measuring her expression as for second time she is talking emotionally rather than talking silly things. First time was when she told him about her revenge philosophy in the car.
"But here if i cry & be sad, will u take back to my family ? No right.." She said with a faint smile.
"So why making myself more sad ? Everything cant be expressed. It can only be feel" she stated the obvious.
"if i dont express my pain it doesnt means i dont feel pain.The pain i am going through is mine only & i dont bother expressing it cause u dont care" she shrugged & rk looks at her quietly.
"Sometimes, she do talk sensible" rk thought.

---~---

"Its been two days..and still there is no news of my daughter" malik said enraged.
"Sir, we are trying. We have arrested the prime suspect Sikky too, but he said he dont know anything" the inspector said.
"God know how my child is.." Padmini sobbed & trishna kept her hand on padmini's shoulder.

---~---

"U are making dinner ?" Madhu asked entering the kitchen. Rk keeps on chopping veggies without paying her attention.
"Did u cooked last two day's food too, & today's lunch & breakfast too ?" She asked sitting on the kitchen counter watching him.
"Why dont u answer me that u know to cook ?" Madhu said exasperate.
"When u know the answer, why u keep asking me then ?" Rk question her back sparing her a look. Madhu twist her lips at his question-like-answer.
"What do u do when u dont feel like chopping the vegetable but u are hungry & want food ?" Madhu thought to herself & answer her own question.
"Yes.. U shoot the Vegetables, killing them, smashing them & then fry then & eat right !" She said & starts chuckling at her own silly joke.
"wish instead of vegetables i can shoot u" rk muttered under his breath dumping the vegetable in the frying pan.
"why dont u wear clothes ? U always stays like moogli" madhu asked noticing him as he is standing in black vest & denims frying the veggies.
"Did i asked u to check me out ?" Rk snapped at her "No right.. Then get lost !"
"I wasn't checking u out.. My eyes just fell on u" madhu defended.
"Then keep ur eyes away from me" rk said sharply turning to her "and get out if u dont want me to fry u instead of these vegetables". At his angry tone madhu quickly stands on her feet.
"Go & continue to search for ur escape from here & spare me" rk said while holding madhu's wrist & drag her out of the kitchen.
"I was not trying to escape" she flushed.
"Tell the tale to someone else" rk said leaving her, getting back to his work.
since the night as he freed her, she was constantly trying to escape from rk's clutches. Rk had watches her climbing windows & taking different routes, roaming around the house to flee away. But what she dont know is that, the under ground mansion is designed in such a way that it only has two doors to escape. One main door which rk locked with security code & other is a secret door under swimming pool which other than sultan & rk no one knows.
Moral of the finding is unless rk want madhu cant step out from the place, no matter how much she tries.

Madhu was wandering in the hall when she noticed a glass door at the other end of the hall. She went there, opens it & looks in awe at the scene in front of her. Behind the glass door there is a big swimming pool with the artificial lights falling over it making the water reflected brightly over the area. She looks at it with gleaming eyes, taking slow steps towards the pool.
If she hasnt been kidnapped she would have definitely enjoyed her Time being here. She kneeled near the pool & bend forward touching the clear blue water dipping her finger in it & within seconds she got fascinated & bend more into the pool, causing her lose her balance & fell down in pool screaming for help.

RING-RING
"Hey sultan" rk spoke receiving the call while setting the dinner plates.
"Rk leave me.. Say how is madhu ?"
"Good !"
"Where is she ?" Sultan asked
"Looking around the house trying too escape" rk replied
"I know.. She is a free bird" sultan said in admiring voice.
"Then how will u imprison her sultan ?" Rk asked "As u said she is a free bird, obviously she wont like to be in cage"
Sultan became quite for a moment with Rk's unexpected yet right question & then replied.
"with my love, rk"
Rk rolled his eyes at sultan's answer but didnt say anything.
"okk.. Take care"

---~---

RK moves out of kitchen searching for madhu to give her food.
"I shouldn't have freed her.. Where is she now ? Playing hide & seek" rk thought moving to the hall after search the whole house.
"Madhu" he called her loudly finding her no where.
"I swear i'll kill u if u dont come out right now" he yelled & look around to find the glass door open & went towards it. He entered the pooling area & look around but no one was there. He turned around to go back when he notice some bubble on the water surface. He looks on for sometime doubting.
within seconds something clicked him & he launched himself in the pool. He drive under the water & saw madhu buried in water. He quickly swim reaching her, he envelope her in his arms & come out of water breathing heavily. He looks at madhu who is in his arms all lifeless. He swim across the pool & came out of pool lifting madhu up & make her lie near the pool on the floor.
"Madhu..madhu" he patted her cheeks.
"Open ur eyes" madhu continues to lie there unmoving. Rk comes over her & starts pressing her stomach making her spill the water out which She has gulped while drowning.
"get up" rk murmured while checking her pulse which is dropping down by every seconds.
"there is no time..god knows for how long she was drowned here" rk thought distressed. He lean on her, keeping his ears on her chest to listen her faint heart beat. He lock his hands, one over another, keeping it on her chest he starts giving her CPR, trying to revive her heartbeat.
"breath madhu.." He mumbled while giving her CPR. Withdrawing his hands from her chest, he cups her face with his one hand & with another he pinch her nose. Tilting her face, He leaned down on her pressing his lips on her, giving her mouth-to-mouth, feeling her lungs with air. After few seconds he pulls his head up & looks at her.
"Please..breath" he pleaded as he again leans on her sealing her mouth with his repeating the whole process, fiercely hoping for madhu to breath. As few more seconds passed madhu starts coughing. Rk pulls his lips from her & looks at her, unknowingly stroking her cheeks. Madhu opens her eyes & looks at rk who us hovering over her, as water droplets travels down her face & ends up dropping over her face. He faintly smiled at him, gaining her sense as Rk withdraws himself from her fixing his gaze on her smiling face which somewhere unknowingly pleased him.
"Finding no way to escape u tried to kill urself ?" Rk asked knowing fully well that madhu dont know about secret passage underneath water.
"No... I was looking in the water when i slipped" she replied feebly.
"Whats there to look hun ..! Haven't u ever seen the water ?" Rk asked sarcastically in stern voice.
"I haven't seen blue pool water.. And lights under water in real" rk looks at her helplessly for her silly yet innocent reply.
Shaking his head at her he stands on his feet & forward his hand to her to get up. Madhu tries to get up in sitting position & find her sticky clothes sticking to her skin making her body see through. She flushed at her condition & crossed Her hands over her chest. She looks up at rk, who has his gaze fixed on her face. At that moment madhu felt a sense of respect for him, for her abductor, for a criminal. She tries to get up but her legs were shaking cause of temporary trauma. Rk kneeled by her side, lifting her up in his arms he walked upstairs.

---~---

"Err.. My clothes got drenched" she spoke as soon as rk settle her on couch.
"what can i do?" Rk asked straightly.
"Give me clothes" madhu demanded.
"I dont have garment shop" rk answered arrogantly.
"Yeah.. I dont have garment shop.. U have gun shop." Madhu said crossly as Rk glare her.
"I am feeling so yucky in these sticking clothes"
''Go.. Dip down in swimming pool & measure how blue is the water" Rk stated sarcastically while moving out.
"Please.. Mr.Lion.." Madhu pleaded cutely making rk halt in his tracks.
"Rk" he said turning towards her.
"Hun ?" Madhu gave him confused looks.
"My name.. Rk" he repeats himself.
"Rk.. So cool" madhu beamed "Suits u.. But rk stands for ?"
"right kameena" rk replied moving out.
"U are calling urself kameena" madhu starts laughing.
After few minutes rk returned back & throws a pair of clothes on madhu's face.
"Hey.. Where is ur manners ?" Madhu frowns pulling down the clothes from her face. Rk stares at her unaffected.
"Shirt & half tracks.. I dont wear these clothes.. Its too big, i will sink in it.." madhu continues to speak showing him the shirt keeping it on herself.
"U are not here for fashion show.. And its mine. Wear it if u want or stay as u are" saying so rk moves out & madhu sadly looks at the shirt in her hands.

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With the sound of footsteps rk looks up to find madhu walking towards him, fumbling with the shirt & tracks, stumbling on her steps and making faces. He looks at her as the earlier incident of mouth-to-mouth flashed before him. His eyes travels to her moving rosy lips, as she spoke something unintelligent.He shake his thoughts away & sets the plates on dining table.
"U know swimming too ?" Madhu pulled a chair & sits on it.
"If u dont then u wont be sitting alive here" he rebuke.
"Dont be so rude.. See i am talking to u so sweetly" madhu batter her lashes.
"Dont talk to me then" rk said thumping madhu's food plate on table before her.
"U are just soo.. So stone like.. So cold" madhu sighs. Rk pick up his food plate pulled out an alcohol bottle from freezer & starts moving out of the dinning area.
"Where are u going ?" Madhu asked but rk continues to walk without answering her.
"What are u eating ? Ur & mine food are different ?" Madhu runs to him & stands in front of him blocking his way out.
"My food.. Dal, roti, chicken & Scotch" rk replied raising his scotch bottle.
"U will drink while eating food ?" Madhu asked in disbelief.
"move away" rk push her lightly aside & step ahead not wanting to talk to her.
"Drinks damage liver.. If u are so fond of drinking then drink milk" madhu yelled behind him.
"Keep ur mouth shut & dont u dare advice me" rk said sharply turning to her. Seeing him with drinks for real within seconds madhu's eyes well up with tears as her lips trembled. Rk looks at her frustrated cause her mood fluctuates in minutes.
"What now ?" He growled.
"dad.. Dad came home one drunk.. He shouted on mom.. Mom slapped dad.. They had fight too, whole night" she said in quivering voice. Rk looks at her unmoving with lost looks.
"Next morning mom was fetching me & didu away saying we are leaving the house.. I was so scared !"
Rk staggered back as a memory from his past hit him.
"Why u did this to me ?" A drunken man shouts breaking a glass bottle on floor.
"get away from my son. U are drunk" a woman said sternly pulling a little boy from the man's hold.
"dont u dare touch him.. U will make him dirty like u.. He is just mine. U didnt remember u have a son when u are having an extra marital affair ." the man pulled the lil boy to himself gripping his arms forcefully hurting him.
"Its not an affair.. I love him.. Only him" the woman yelled.
"Then what am i to u ?" The man asked helplessly.
"Just my child's father" the woman replied sternly.
"I hate u.. I hate u so much.. For destroying my son's life" the man said.
"Give my son back to me" the woman pulled the Lil boy's one arms.
"no.. I'll never give him to u" the man pulled the lil boy's other arm making him tug of war.
"Momma.. Papa..please" the boy cried in his childish voice getting scared but his parents continues to fight overlooking his scared self
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"But dad didnt let mom go.. He pleaded her saying he will never drink" madhu said bringing Rk out of his thoughts.
"Drinks are bad. It always leads to fight. Drinks makes human an animal" hearing madhu another thought hits him from his past.
"RK drink.." A young man forwarded a drink to a teenage boy who is in his late teens.
"No sultan" young Rk denied.[BR["Drink brother.. It'll help u in forgetting ur pains. Its a medicine" sultan makes him drink forcefully.
"Its worst.." Rk said in slurry voice after gulping down a bottle.
"Its heaven brother.. And now introducing another heaven.'' Sultan cheered as he pushed rk inside a room.
"u are 19 dude.. Man enough.. Enjoy & vent out ur anger in much interesting way" sultan winked at rk & looks at the girl standing in front of him in s**tty dress.
"Is he a man enough to rock the night" the girl said drawing sexily to rk making rk looks angrily at her in affects of drink.
"Comeon rk.. Show this bitch her place. Slam her down" sultan pushed rk & rk stumble upon the girl falling on the bed over her. she draws him closer as he let his frustration overpower his sense as he ripped her clothes making her gasp, spending his nights with her like an animal.

"RK..RK..'" Madhu snapped her fingers in front of rk eyes, bringing him out of his reverie.Rk looks at her lil shaken. Madhu watch him closely. Rk saw the tear strains on her cheeks.
"All fake.. Everything.. Just a f**king shit !" He screamed enraged all of sudden breaking the scotch bottle before madhu's feet making madhu flinch back shocked. He looks at her with red eyes & matched out leaving her stun with his sudden outburst.

---~---

Next morning rk entered the kitchen & finds madhu sleeping in an uncomfortable position sitting on chair keeping her head on the dinning table, wearing his clothes which is now tangled to her petite form. The food plate from last night was there on dining table still untouched by her. He looks on her side at the broken alcohol bottle which he had broken in anger last night. He fixed his gaze back on madhu as he walks upto her. He looks at her as she was sleeping there innocently breathing subtly with her hairs windowing her face. Rk's hands itched & without thinking he he raised his hand to her face leaning on her, he tug back her hairs.
"Plz dont drink" rk got flash of madhu's crying face from last night. He quickly pulled his hands away from her. He moved to other side & clear the floor picking up the bottle pieces without making noise. He came back to madhu & slowly pick her up in his arms not wanting to break her slumber. He strolled back to sultan's room & make her lie on the bed. He was moving out of the room when he stopped & came back. He cover her with duvet & walked out.

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Hope u all liked this part.
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Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago
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Wow! I m back to my spot! I missed coming first in your stories for the last couple of times... Lol!
Long and lovely update... 👏
U know.. U r becoming one of my most fav writer... I really wait for ur updates and get excited when u update... As always i enjoyed this update too...😃

Rk is so rude... But i love him... I like rude guys... More than wooing cooing guys... Lol!

Madhu is so innocent and childlike... I adore her non stop chattering...

Wow! She trust her kidnapper? Cool! Who will not trust this rude yet decent guy... He never disgraced her by misbehaving with her... Even when she was drenched fully and her clothes were clinging to her body... He didnt lustfully gaze her body but he kept his eyes on hers...👏

Lol! When she went near the pool and looked down at the water like Ruhi i knew she would slip into it and drown and Rk will rescue her and i was expecting that mouth to mouth respiration scene...😉

Lol! Two months sultan wants Rk to keep safely in that house... Guess he is digging his own grave.. Bcos Rk will soon fall in love with his innocent angel and whe Sultan comes to claim her... Rk will not hesitate to kill her.. Simple! 😉😆

Hmm... That past incident... I guess Rk's mother had an affair or in love with mAdhu's father Malik... Lol! Stupid guess... But still... U see Rk has some revenge plan against malik... So i guess he might be the reason for Rk'sparents spilt up... Lol!

Looking forward to see how Madhu is gonna tame this arrogant man... Or how this Rk is gonna make the blabber box shut her mouth... With kiss? I would love that...

Thanks for the lovely update dear!
Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago
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Oh good you liked my post! Hehe...
OK dear it's a SS then... Am so glad that we could read more on this mismatched couple Lol!! Mismatched in the sense opposite 😳...Do update index dear...

This Sultan thinks of Madhu as a porcelain doll I guess.. Hehe he is too much. But this good for nothing rogue spoiled my RK and probably made him lose his innocence too... That too for a random shitty girl. He didn't wait for Madhu 😭 Stupid Sultan 😡

Madhu's logic is quiet right...but still I dunno how she is comfortable talking to her abductor (if the kidnapper is RK)😆 She is into some stunts too... to escape from the house but unfortunately landed in the same home itself hehe!

OK Aani...i know it's not my place to say this to you... It may appear rude but this is the truth. We shouldn't press abdomen to save a drowned person... It's wrong, coz it makes the unconscious person nearer to death... The right thing to do, you described it perfectly in the update... CPR (Cardiac Pulmonary Resusciation)

I loved RK here... Even though he is a criminal he didn't look below her face when she was in an awkward situation... He is a gem 😳
And should I say that I loved this Madhu and her child like antics so much... Oh my! She cried asking him not to drink! 😭 She is so sweet!!

Thanks for the PM dear. I try to give long comments... But dunno for sure... I have 10 pillow size books for the first year alone...so its a herculean task to comment big for all the stories! Hope you don't mind Aani dear 😳

Thanks for the PM.
Edited by vishuv - 8 years ago
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Lovely and long update.
I like this rude And Arrogant RK.
Madhu is chatterbox...
She is enjoying in that place.
She was kidnapped by RK.
I like that reason,why she is not sad in that place.
If she is sad,then there is no use.
Sultan is mad towards her.
The idiot will do anything for her..
I think sultan is the biggest villan to RK-Madhu.
She sinks in swimming pool...
Rk is the saviour for her..
Rk is the very honest to her.
Because her dress sticking with her skin.
But he didn't see except her face.
He is thinking about liplock.
But he distract mind from that scene..
Drinkin scene flashback is so touching...
First time madhu cry infront of him.
This is the first way,He melts towards her.
Rk Flashback is very sat.
Sultan is the reason,for Rk become drunken and all his aspects.
Rk has soft corner for madhu .
I am waiting fo RK's love confession.
Update soon...
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
New update is on page 14..
Pms later.. 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
gr8 nd long update
madhu is soo sweet ... may be madhu will change rk

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