RiShbala TS 'Ex FlaMes'||COMPLETED#14||(18/01)

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Aaniya fantastic ending, loved it.

Rishbala are together, nothing can keep them apart. Trishna died in an accident and Madhu was forced to marry Mukund. But destiny had other plans and brought Rishbala together again.

Thanks for the PM in advance.

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Superb end dear

So finally they united with each other

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Hey girl...the EVIL baby..so u completed this tooo..

I just read it and ufff Pls give me this RK...he is so sexy...the way he proposed first is so hot ufff

Such a bad phase for MAdhu ..one moment she got her lobve and next she lost her sister and got into the family things...these emotions do disturb and shatter the future of individual cometimes but ,,,we are bound to that and those who can fighta nd stand by will win the battle ...

The way u just narrated the flashback and how he got ended up in her flat is quite smooth..loved it

So...Mukku got hsi ex and realized that she will be a better choice than Madhu...but thank god that he got this sense otheriwse ,,our write should make Dips the villain,separate RK frm her and let Madhu meet him hahahhahaha...My imagination u c

lasltly their coffee making...girl I got one thing...u sure knw how to make coffeee..the step by step processs 😆

and then the passionate RK and his proceedings hahahhahahah...that is so so hot...

I love ths RK..i wished atleast for cheek kiss in MAdhubala but they hardly had any lip touches on their faces or shoulder..just knuckles and forehead😆 ..cheat kisses ...DD and VD why cant u come back with oen more passionate romantic show and fulfil my wishes😛

thanks EVIL fr being one hahahahahahha..U r just awesome...stay blessed and keep up this awesome wonderful work

loads of love and hugs

Ashu

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Mona_90
Aap na thoda gadbad kar dia hai name ma kyun ki part 1 ma sullu and trishna shadi karna wale tha na aur mukku madhu ka friend gang ka member toh par part 2 ma trishna mukku ki biwi aur ek bacha vi tha aur ek ane wala tha aur trishna madhu ki sis aur mukku jiju kaisa hua ??

Oh.. Thanmyou so much mona fir pointing out. I will do the correctionn.. After 4 months am updating naa . so kinda lost the track..

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Nice ending.

Thanks for making the story simple and sweet . They were separated due to unfortunate circumstances. Instead of taking revenge of fighthing they decided to live happily and together and hence finally they burned in flames of passion.

Loved the sweet simple story.

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Superb update..

Nice ending..

waiting for your new..new..stories..

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

such an awesome update.. both were engaged to someone else due to circumstances but then broke up knowing there isn't any future..
meeting after so long n clearing everything, rishab n madhu united for forever now