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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy Dusshera Simi.U made my Dusshera happy with triple update.waiting for this part.Devyani is sweet n caring mother she can read face of her daughter.Simply looking at her she knew something is wrong.But she has faith that her damadji cares for her daughter.
LA chaloge ,my favourite dialogue.Inlaws r all over their damadji.Rishabh found the difference between their upbringing.Now he wants to give her all love he has.
Story is coming towards its end.
Want to read book 2.plz update at forum.
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Happy navarathri for you and your family,dr...enjoy well with your loved ones"...
Superb update Dr ...loved it very much...
Loved the devyani's bond with her daughter,she supports her daughter dearly...rishabh reached his love ...yipeee and they confessed each other's feeling too,their convo was beautiful, fully filled with love for each other,..
Waiting for the update eagerly Dr...and I would love to read your next story Dr,...its my pleasure to read such a beautiful stories...
All the best...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

This is what we call as Heroic entry, Di!!!


one of my most fav scene and dialogue appeared in this part...

Rishab my boy... she will come with you anywhere and everywhere... even if you ask "Venus chaloge kya?" haha... so LA is nothing... you should have waited two more days there so that she would have been back on her own... spending her Papaji's money... LOL!!! now she is gonna use your plastic card again and say "Sorry Rishab" ...

all the three parts were so great and wonderful di...

First part... mother daughter duo's bonding time was nicely shown... Devyani is such a darling mother... she guessed there was something wrong between Madhu and Rsihab... but she was sure her daughter could be the cause as she heard her son in laws strained voice over the phone... aww... she was relieved once she heard her daughter unashamedly said she wanna go back to her husband and say i love you... modern days girl mummyji so don't mind her hun! LOL!!

second part... Sha... Rishab (Every single time i type Shaan then i correct it to Rishab LOL... My Shaan has such effect n me😉) so yeah in second part Rishab realized the differences between his so called home and Madhu's... they were poles apart... in his house everything was a show off to the society.. but here.. everything so lively and lovely... Madhu was nurtured with love care and affection... Well, Rishab ignored her initially but then now she is no short of love care and affection from him... this guy will even kiss the ground where her foot prints were... haha! he is such a darling gentleman!

I can never blame him... his upbringings weren't so like that of Madhu's... in fact he was the one starving for love... which he will get now from his sweet wife... a overloaded package of love which will last for his life time...

Third part... hehe... Devil's wife! being his wife's devil is better than his wife being a devil right? LOL!!! i so wanna read that book... is that book's author Gemma James? because i found only one book with that name... LOL!

okay... back to update... Madhu didn't let him talk further when he said i regret... LOL!!
girl, he didn't regret marrying you or making you stay with him for two months... or agree to pretend as your friend Grey... he regret not having Suhaag Raat with u, sweetie! 😃😆

Rishab throw that chocolate and lay your head on your wife's tummy which will be much more softer than that softie! LOL!

Uff... finally Madhu realized he came long way to take her back home if she was ready and not to leave her forever... wondering how she would have reacted if he had said we are over, Madhu... LOl!! would she beg him for forgiveness or would she hit him with her hockey stick and threaten him to take her to LA? i guess the latter... begging won't do with this Madhu as she is a fighter...

loved all the three parts so much di.. you made my morning...
Thank you so much...

HAPPY NAVRATRI TO YOU TOO, SIMI DI!!!🤗

you have given us 3 parts three times... which makes 9 parts in total... this is what we call as NAVRATRI SPECIAL GIFT!!!😃


Awww... Sudha! Huggs! Thanks for this! Dil khush kar diya! Navratri and 9 updates! You drew the parallel! Wow!
My Shaan has that affect on me too😳

As for the Devil's Wife-- its not a real book but my very own invention--including what comes up in the next update. I guess I'm so familiar with such books and their content that I had no difficulty coming up with the title and the story 😉



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Simi lots of hugs to you for the special Dussera gift you gave us, the best one we could have asked for.
Madhu's mom is a sweetheart, she knows her daughter inside out and thinks her daughter could be the reason for their differences.
Rishab poor boy does not know the meaning of family and love 'coz he has not seen that in his family.
Rishab and Madhu both understood what they mean for each other.

Simi would love to read your story but I'm not on blog.


Hugs to you too Ananya!

Don't worry I will give you access. It's a private blog.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Awwiee they made up! N rishabh's cute "hug me" command😳 sp so so cute I can't stop blushing😳 I'm more than interested to read part 2 if you'll be posting 😃



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A few more updates in Part 1 then I will post Part 2 on my private blog and will give you access :D
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manna43

Happy Dusshera Simi.U made my Dusshera happy with triple update.waiting for this part.Devyani is sweet n caring mother she can read face of her daughter.Simply looking at her she knew something is wrong.But she has faith that her damadji cares for her daughter.

LA chaloge ,my favourite dialogue.Inlaws r all over their damadji.Rishabh found the difference between their upbringing.Now he wants to give her all love he has.
Story is coming towards its end.
Want to read book 2.plz update at forum.


Happy Dusshera to you too dear!

Since Part 2 was just published I don't want to post it here. I will post it though on my private blog and give you access.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful updates di!! Will definitely edit later...
I am giving only short comments or one liners yesterday... Will give a long one today...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vishuv

Beautiful updates di!! Will definitely edit later...

I am giving only short comments or one liners yesterday... Will give a long one today...

Res


No worries dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hope you are all having a wonderful festive season :)
I'm posting an update today (just one) that I am particularly fond of because I wrote it in the tradition of the Victorian romance books I used to lap up in school. I think I did a fair job😳 I'd also like to let you know and Sudha that The Devil's Wife is my very own invention just for this story 😳


38A: Sensibilities

A new dawn broke through the sheer curtains casting a surreal hue over the entire bedroom. Rishabh propped himself up on an elbow to prevent the unwanted intruder from disturbing the beauteous figure, that lay peacefully asleep at his side.

At last, he thought, allowing his gaze to sweep boldly over her alluring form.

At last, this togetherness bore no signs of the extraordinary anguish, agony, and heartache they had both toiled through. All of which could now be attributed to a painful memory or even a prolonged nightmare and given a fitting burial.

The only thing left over at the culmination of this arduous journey was an incredible sense of fulfillment and belonging.

He should have felt drained, exhausted, but he did not. Rather, he felt renewed, rejuvenated, all set to embark in another direction with this new constant companion; his beautiful wife, and she was all his. Well, almost.

How long will you make me wait, my supremely covetable mistress? Will you rescind now, later today, or tomorrow? When?

Her eyes snapped open, those clear black pools stared at his face momentarily nonplussed, then as realization set in, he observed a warmth work its way slowly up her visage.

"What are you staring at?"

"Silently extolling my gorgeous wife's innumerable assets, obvious and hidden, intellectual and physical."

"Physical?"

"Yes, physical and undeniably so." He could see she wasn't prepared for this; this uncharacteristic verbal fling with boldness seemed to upset her composure substantially.

Unconcerned, he smiled and continued. It was now his turn to ruffle her feathers. "Would you like me to elaborate on some, my jaan? There happen to be quite a few."

"Nooo! Please don't!" she exclaimed, considerably flustered, placing fingers on his mouth.

Grabbing hold of her restraining hand, he kissed her fingers one by one, sucking gently on the tips.

She emitted a scandalized gasp.

"I will and you have to listen to me," he said while settling his free arm on her other side, locking her in a makeshift cage. "Hmm... Shall I begin from the top or the bottom?" His toes tickled the soles of her feet.

She snatched up her knees. "Will you stop? You""

"Hush! I don't want to hear any more cuss words from your mouth. It has plenty better things to do." He winked suggestively, grinning as her eyes widened with shocked understanding. "Seems like my wife is well versed in the art of pleasing her spouse, at least in theory. Anyway, she has had a very good teacher," he said, picking up the well-worn copy of The Devil's Wife and flicking deliberately through the pages.

"Oh my god! How can you bring yourself to read such junk!" she said, pretending to appear affronted while her crimson-colored complexion was a dead giveaway.

"Junk or not, it is extremely revealing as to the secret machinations of a woman's mind, such as look here and I quote." He rested his head on her stomach and turned to a certain page of the novel while Madhu's eyes focussed steadfast on the ceiling.

"That devil, that cad of a husband of mine, I loathe him with my entire being yet when he looks at me with those wicked eyes, I lose myself to""

She sat up abruptly, pushing him off. "Rishabh, this isn't fair! How could you be so unfeeling and callous?" She reached for and managed to snatch the accursed book out of his grasp. "There, what will you do now?"

"Hmm..." He glanced slyly at her out of the corner of his eyes. "Yes, her husband was a cad, the devil himself who'd wed her for ruthlessly conceited reasons known only to himself and then subjected her to unmentionable misery and hardship, which she had borne without complaint for the sake of her poor sick father but..."

"But?" Madhu stared at him, fascinated as the words poured out of his mouth as though they were his own.

"But slowly inexorably against his will, this evil man was drawn toward his wife's irresistible comeliness, her thick cascading tresses like a dark cloud"," he said, twisting a lock of her hair around his fingers.

"But his wife was a blond," she hurried to correct him.

Rishabh laid her back down. "Her tresses, like a dark cloud fecund with rain, invited him to repose his tired head upon...the unfathomable depths of her luminescent black eyes""

"But her eyes were blue," Madhu interrupted again.

"Luminescent black eyes...which gave him a glimpse of her virgin white soul. That pert nose, which turned red with fury well before she got ready to rave and rant at him. Those lips...ahhh..." He let out an exaggerated sigh.

Madhu giggled. "Go on...those lips?"

"Those luscious lips heady with wine," he said, coming closer so only a hair's breath separated them. "Which I crave to savor every waking moment." He swooped down upon her eagerly.

"Ohhh!" she exclaimed, throwing her arms around his neck. "That's just what a woman longs to hear from her husband, be it the truth or otherwise."

"It is absolutely nothing but the truth!" he said, holding her back. "Would I ever lie to you? Wait, I have a lot more."

"You have more?" She raised her eyebrows in surprise.

"Yes." He nipped the delicate skin on the inside of her elbow. "The silky supple skin, which he yearned to make a meal of"the smooth curves of her bosom, which he couldn't wait to smother with his bare torso." Rishabh grumbled, "God, girl! You don't know how long I've been waiting for this moment. This desire has become a permanent ache inside."

She emitted a ragged breath when a feather-light peck landed on the cleft revealed by her deep neckline. He rushed to remove his shirt.

The alarm went off shrilly, shattering the quiet and making her scream.

"Oh no!" She scrambled to the side of the bed.

"What the"! You aren't going anywhere without my say so!"

"I need to go. I've promised Mama I'd make breakfast today."

"Bloody hell! Tell her that her son-in-law is interested in an entirely different type of feast!" He stretched to pull her back.

She fingered his cheek. "I can't. Daddy's waiting desperately for his only daughter's special American pancakes."

He collapsed on his back, lamenting, "God! A wife like this..."

"Sirf kismet waalon ko milti hai!" (Can be treasured only by a lucky few!) She giggled before hurrying into the bathroom.


tbc


PS: Will post 38 B and C later this evening or tomorrow :)

Again I won't be able to post Book 2 here since its a brand new novel that's just out. I will post it on my private blog and give access to those who will comment on a regular basis. You will also get access to my WIP (work in progress). Thanks for understanding.




Edited by simikr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Simi Di, first and foremost my hearty congratulation for publishing your Book 2 of Inconvenient relations "Now and Forever" ... I'm so happy for you... your stories deserved to be published and entertain wide range of readers... because you are an exemplary writer!
And Di, please always give access to all your stories! I don't mind reading and re reading your stories! and you know I never fail to appreciate good works!

Okay coming to the update...
Beautiful...
my heart melted hearing Rishab's sweet words of love... wish one day my future hubby says all that to me... guess no wrong in dreaming... 😆
"But his wife was a blonde" - God! this Madhu can be so innocent at times... darling, he wasn't talking about the books... but you... the Devil's wife! (Oh Di, you created 'Devil's wife' cool.. why don't you write one story with that title? you can show a ruthless husband and a sweet fragile yet strong wife right? would love to read a story from you with that title di... just a suggestion...😉)
I loved their morning romance... But daddy's girl let her husband starve and went to prepare breakfast for her dad... Hehe...
looking forward for lot more fun from them...
thanks di!

Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago

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