'SWEET DREAMS 1 (Completed) info about SD2 on new thread-98 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear..
Rk is grey and madhu is bee..loved it a lot..
hope that they would realise their love soon.
You have written it beautifully..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Simi where are you? Waiting for today's quota.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap7..29 days..errors
Awesome
Rk friends held a welcome party fr him n dere he felt awkward though madhu enjoyed a lot
Her hairs gt stuck at his shirts buttons n asked fr scissors but he set dem free
Oh its des coz of whom rk late n madhu called up sujoy
None of ur business n it hurt madhu..obviously
So nw da madhu sharma is back
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap 8..reflections
Rk was a guilt fr hurting madhu but da words were out
Des is heather n his boss wife
Rk cleared it to her dat he cant decieve his wife
He feels something fr madhu fr sure
N he went to apologize to her but madhu ..missing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap 9..truce..
Rk tried his best but didnt find madhu
N da girl told her dat madhu had sad eyes like her mom
Rk reading da diary was da best..da way madhu had written her emotions was emotional
She accepted him as ger husband n wat he did..he is feeling da guilt
N madhu is back..after a walk
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Dere conversation in da last was written brilliantly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap 10..n dey bcm friends
Madhu made pasta n dey had dere dinner
Madhu watched da shw n in between used to open her feelings but at da same time botteling up too
Hope dis friendship plays its role n bring dem together
Edited by ...Seema... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap 11..truce
So dey called it a truce
Rk n madhu r nw friends
N rk told her dat its over between him n des
Nw madhu gt da camer n she is on da mission..explore da city

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Posted: 9 years ago
I feel equally bad for rishabh he didn't have bad intentions😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

I thought slowly the ice was breaking but it's growing more harder n colder. They bcame friends, for godsake why the heck culdnt he just tell her that he wants her to stay, to make this work? Coz its ur story n stories will go their way. The way he was philosophically go on abt husbands havinh extramarital affairs referring to his father, it made me feel he'll say the whole truth to her but no. Again caged. Now, she's ranting out everything to herself at night, and acting nonchalant infront of him. She did want rks n des relationship to end but still she wouldn't take him back. But she will if he just tries harder. He just need to give it a go. But that moron, he's considers himself no better than his dad n decides to leave her to her way. Why? Again its ur story. Atlast she gave him a piece of her mind, well very short one. She's not accepting the fact that she really wants him. Even after knowing that they broke up, she's trying to fix up a meaningless relationship instead of their marriage. She had tried before but she shouldn't have given up this sooner. She dsnt want to go out with him. I hope she dsnt gets into any trouble or rk gets jealous seeing her with someone else. U see im tired of such tracks. They just burn me up. Again its ur story n it will go its way n not mine. Hope somehow they get together soon. Waiting for the. Im busy with exams till mid October. That's why dint comment in last update. Sorry for that. I dont know if ill be frequent in commenting, maybe ill comment only after my exams. But ill try to read n pass short comments at least. Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
While you wait for the next update 😉 eagerly I hope... I thought I'll share with you my POV..
It's always nice when stories make the readers think. And different readers think differently and I see the same here and that's great!

First of all I'm not very fond of arranged marriages especially when its between 2 virtual strangers but it does work often. Probably because the intentions are good on both sides but that is not so here.

In my story the marriage between Madhu and Rishabh was based on a deception which practically doomed it from the get go.

Why I wrote this story?
Because I've personally come across many NRI marriages where the young woman has been deceived similarly and they have suffered terribly. They have been housebound, treated like slaves, even their passports have been confiscated.

Fortunately in Sweet Dreams Rishabh was nice enough to not take advantage of Madhu and tell her the truth outright.

She wanted to make it work even after knowing that Rishabh indeed was in a relationship. But do you think if he had told her that it was all over with Des, Madhu would have been happy?

No, Madhu is a proud woman. She doesn't want to play second fiddle or be 2nd in line. She wants to be 1st. She deserves to be first. She wants Rishabh to fall in love with her and tell her she is the one he wants and that she is better than Des. AND she wants him to realize his wrong. She wants to be able to trust him without hesitation.

Hope this helps. Please share your thoughts.

There's a lot of fun in store.

Simi
Edited by simikr - 9 years ago

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